Commoner Loose Cultivator: Starting from Baishanfang City

If you like traditional fairy tales, you can read it. Overall, it is quite good. There are some minor issues, but the author is very obedient and active. There are many interactions like Batulu and the like [laughing], but the protagonist in the first 20 and more than 70 chapters seems to be online as if the original author himself is online, and he has obviously come through fast time. But it turns out that there are such deep feelings for the family that I haven't contacted for more than ten years and the master that the protagonist has never had contact with. It can be written that the protagonist time travels earlier, such as a few years after recognizing the master. But overall, this book is still very good. I hope the author will not stop updating, and challenge it to update three times a day [laughter] The characters are a bit dull, and a little intrigue could be added. In addition, I feel that the book's techniques are not very valuable. Other than that, it's okay. Good luck to the author.

7 Points, a reasonable mortal novel. The protagonist has no golden fingers and relies on various opportunities to develop. The acting style is steady and there is no pretentiousness or slap in the face, but the writing style is relatively bland and the overall appeal is not very strong. There are obvious traces of AI in this book, and there are some unreasonable phenomena in some details, but there are no inconsistencies in the general direction, and the prices are currently generally reasonable. Generally speaking, if it is a paid novel, it is probably not worth subscribing to, but as a free novel, it is reasonable and can be read.

Traditional immortality novels have a slow pace and relatively smooth plot, but the shortcomings are also obvious. There are obvious flaws in the character design and behavioral logic, and the ambush plot is relatively blunt. Some of them are tasteless, but the author keeps writing and writing, and these shortcomings seem to be minor. I look forward to subsequent works.

This is a rare prose novel, and there are no cheats. The most important thing is that the protagonist does not make elixirs. This is so rare! Looking for a novel about immortality on Tomato where the protagonist doesn't make elixirs is like looking for a needle in a haystack!

The writing is good, not a novice. The protagonist has an IQ and is still a casual cultivator. It's good. Come on. I just like unsystematic essays, come on

Zhuran found that after reading this book, I haven't posted a review. It's quite good. In terms of plot, except for the part where the protagonist goes home, I haven't found any big problems in any part. Then there are some small mistakes, but the author will correct them in time, and the author is very active. I don't know about others. Anyway, he has replied to my comments quite a lot.

It's okay, not too bad, but there are two plots that are repeated, and I feel that I haven't checked it out properly. It has a slight AI flavor, which may have been polished by AI. Some of the descriptions are artificially deep and mysterious, which is unique to AI, and then there is a section in the early stage where the protagonist returns home. I don't know if the author forgot the setting of the protagonist as a time traveler or there is a plot loophole in running AI. The protagonist has deep feelings for his family without any plot foreshadowing. The advantages are that the protagonist is relatively stable, there are no ambiguous plots, and the plot rhythm is well controlled. In short, it is a good way to pass the time during the book shortage.

It's not common to see such fine writing on collecting resources.

It's a bit like "The Romance of Lan Ke". The text description can make readers feel the spiritual energy. The plot has no obvious flaws. It is a rare fairy tale written by Tomato. Come on, author.

Brand, the pacing is well controlled and the story is also very good. I hope the author can stick to it.

It's a good read. I've finished reading the latest chapter and I like it very much. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the back or that there won't be too many scenes with her.

Give yourself a five-star review [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

A very good book with ups and downs of the plot. It is worth recommending.

Ending Chapter 103 No ambiguous plot, no common old routines, good [like]

The protagonist is calm, the plot is very close to the real world of cultivating immortals, and the descriptions of all aspects are very detailed. The low level in the early stage was wasted, and it is very real. It is not as high and low as some novels, and there is no cheating like Goldfinger. It allows people to experience a real life of cultivation. Overall, it is a very good novel.

Very nice, I don't know why the score is so low

Great, no flaws, just a little lacking

The context is very clear and not too exaggerated. It was not created by AI. Come on, author [laughs] Of course the author Duoduojia is the best

I think it's pretty good [like]

It's okay, but it feels like AI

I love to watch civilians practicing casual cultivating [you taste it carefully]

A very ordinary person can make his way to the strong without relying on cheats.

So far so good, hope it gets better.

The author writes well, keep up the good work! ! !

It's not bad. It would be better if the writing is more detailed. I hope that the subsequent plots will become more and more exciting.

The writing is not draggy and the story is interesting. Among all the articles about cultivating immortals, the writing style is superior.

Not bad, it's a good and durable book. It's really rare. The author works hard to speed up the update.

Well-founded and clear in context, this is a rare masterpiece that conforms to my views on traditional immortality novels. Please update the author soon.

Yes, there is not only the jungle side of the world of immortality, but also a heart-warming side.

There are no cheats, basically no poisonous points, and some of the plots are very well written [Like]