Soul Land: Yuhao Is Reborn, and You Guys Better Not Come Near Me

The setting and imagination are really good. I think the author's writing is very interesting. I just want to add some funny dialogues instead of the tense atmosphere, such as moving all the Ice and Fire Eyes to the demiplane of the undead. There is no need to intersperse so many funny dialogues. You can add one or two small points at the beginning or after the completion to relieve the burden. There is no need to intersperse them in the middle. It feels like it will affect the reading experience a little bit. It will be better to reduce some nonsense and less baggage. I hope the author will write better.

Personal opinion: Actually, I wanted to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, Douluo's writing is not very good. Moreover, this book is of high standard and can be worthy of five stars, so I will give it a five-star to encourage it! 😜 Personal opinion and shortcomings: The author can handle the details well, but the shortcoming is that there is too much "nonsense" (it can't be said to be nonsense, it just doesn't fit the environment). In the chapter against the official team, there are too many bickering words. You can't say that you are chatting and bickering in the battle. This is not realistic. You can integrate it into daily life like this, and the details are appropriate, so that the article does not appear vulgar. After all, read In the first chapter, the main character is determined to defeat Tang San, which is quite exciting, but after watching it, it suddenly becomes everyday and makes people unable to adapt to it🤔. Put a label to inform readers in advance that the novel I wrote is more daily, so that readers can know what type you are writing. Some people stopped reading when it seemed interesting at first but boring and inappropriate later. I think it may be the reason why this book is lukewarm. Of course, the above is my personal objective opinion. You can also put a thank-you gift in the comments at the end of each chapter. The beginning of a chapter is all about thanking you, which affects the perception (ps: I believe in the water word count). I have also seen authors asking for gifts. In fact, there is no need to urgently ask for this thing. If you write carefully and others appreciate it, they will naturally give it to you, right? 😄 Excluding too much gossip, this book has very few flaws and highlights as a multi-female novel. If the post-processing details are in place, this book will undoubtedly be a good book with potential. I think that although Huo Yuhao is reborn, rebirth does not mean invincible. Everyone knows that, to be honest, I feel more or less like Huo Yu when I see it later. Hao feels a bit semi-invincible. I can give Huo Yuhao some dungeons to play with in the future. Huo Yuhao's identity now is almost the same as that of the original Tang San (I really don't want Huo Yuhao to become like Tang San in the end). So, I hope the author will not write down 🥺 in the future (including Shura Field and other eunuchs) Let's make a summary at the end! This book is a book with potential. The recommendation index is four and a half stars. I hope the author will work harder in the future. I am optimistic about you~ 💕💕💕

One week less is for fear of your pride! Also, in the column of the heroine in the introduction, do you still have a word that you haven't written? (´｡✪ω✪｡`) This is one of the rare good novels about Dou Er, but it has some problems. I hope the author can solve this problem greatly. 😘 Big cheers for the author! 💕

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This subject matter is okay. How should I put it? It's very similar to QD's book-like AI articles. Why don't I read over there if this is the case? Especially when speaking, it feels like I'm watching a dialogue in an AI web article.

A good-looking and refreshing article, which makes up for a lot of regrets in the original version. I like it very much. I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued. Come on [Bird Food Masterpiece] [Bird Food Master Work] [Bird Food Master Work] This book is good to read, but I feel that the mindless dialogue is really low-key and boring. It feels like watching Taiwanese soap operas back in the day, which is a bit brain-burning 🤦

Not bad, but the details lack polish.

Why did my uncle suddenly disappear?

Let Huo Yuhao and Gu Yuena be alone Gu Yuena is so cold and cold [what]

The writing is fine, but can you change Tang Ya's first soul skill? His martial soul is not the Dark Blue Silver King, so why does it absorb animal soul rings?