Douluo************

The settings and ideas are really good I think the author's writing is very interesting. Is it possible to stop the tense atmosphere and add those funny dialogues, such as moving all the Ice and Fire Eyes to the demiplane of the undead? There is no need to intersperse so many funny dialogues. You can add one or two small points at the beginning or after the completion to relieve the burden. There is no need to intersperse them in the middle. It feels like it will affect the reading experience a little bit. It will feel better to reduce some nonsense and add less baggage. I hope the author will write better and better

Personal opinion: Actually, I wanted to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, Douluo's writing is not very good. Moreover, this book is of high standard and can be worthy of five stars, so I will give it a five-star to encourage it! [Making faces] Personal opinion and shortcomings: The author can handle the details well, but the shortcoming is that there is too much "nonsense" (it can't be said to be nonsense, it just doesn't fit the environment). In the chapter against the official team, there are too many bickering words. You can't say that you are chatting and bickering in the battle. This is not realistic. You can integrate it into daily life like this. If the details are appropriate, the article will not appear vulgar. After all, it looks like In the first chapter, the main character is determined to defeat Tang San, which is quite exciting, but in the end, it suddenly becomes routine and makes people unable to adapt. [Thinking], put a label to inform readers in advance that the novel I wrote is more daily, so that readers know what type you are writing. Some people stopped reading when it was interesting at first but boring and inappropriate later. I think it may be the reason why this book is lukewarm. Of course, the above are all my personal and objective opinions. There are also thank-you gifts that can be placed in the comments at the end of each chapter. The beginning of a chapter is all about thanking you, which really affects the viewing experience (ps: the number of words is water, I believe it) I've also seen authors asking for gifts. Actually, you don't need to beg for them urgently. If you write carefully and others appreciate it, they will naturally give it to you, right? [Laughs] Excluding too much gossip, this book has very few flaws and highlights as a multi-female novel. If the post-processing details are in place, this book is undoubtedly a potential book. I think that although Huo Yuhao is reborn, rebirth does not mean invincible. Everyone knows that, to be honest, I feel that Huo Yuhao is more or less the same after reading it. It feels a little bit invincible. I can give Huo Yuhao some dungeons to play with in the future. Huo Yuhao's identity now is almost the same as that of the original Tang San (I really don't want Huo Yuhao to become like Tang San in the end). Therefore, I hope the author will not write about "grievances" in the future (including Shura Field and other eunuchs) Let's make a summary at the end! This book is a book with potential. The recommendation index is four and a half stars. I hope the author will work harder in the future. I am optimistic about you~ [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

One week less is for fear of your pride! Also, in the column of the heroine in the introduction, do you still have a word that you haven't written? (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) This is one of the rare good novels about Dou Er, but it has some problems. I hope the author can solve this problem greatly. [Blowing kiss] Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts]

Not bad, but the details lack polish.

Let Huo Yuhao and Gu Yuena be alone Gu Yuena is so cold and cold [what]

Author, teacher, don't forget Xuediliya and other souls

Huo Yuhao is so "poor". He is surrounded by so many girls. Hehe, he looks good.

Is this book okay?

Update soon, it's so beautiful

The writing is fine, but can you change Tang Ya's first soul skill? His martial soul is not the Dark Blue Silver King, so why does it absorb animal soul rings?

A good-looking and refreshing article, which makes up for a lot of regrets in the original version. I like it very much. I hope it won't be unfinished or discontinued. Come on [Bird Food Masterpiece] [Bird Food Master Work] [Bird Food Master Work] This book is good to read, but I feel that the mindless dialogue is really low-key and boring. It feels like watching Taiwanese soap operas back in the day, which is a bit brain-burning [facepalm]

It's ok, but I think we don't need too many heroines. 5 Or 6 heroines would be enough. It's too many and lacks a sense of dissonance.

The characters are drawn very well

I like stories without regrets, it looks so happy [please update]

The more heroines the better

This subject matter is okay. How should I put it? It's very similar to QD's book-like AI articles. Why don't I read over there if this is the case? Especially when speaking, it feels like I'm watching a dialogue in an AI web article.

So beautiful, well written

Very well written, please update soon

Is there Ling Luochen?

The Silver Dragon King is Shotacon! ! ! ! ! Σ(￣□￣;)

There is an issue with age. Yuhao should be 11 years old when he joins Shrek. Even if he meets Jiang Nannan in advance, Tang Ya should be about 9 years old.

What do you mean no updates?

Interesting, good-looking, exciting

Update quickly Update quickly The author is great, I plan to write a few chapters

One star missing, not proud

Very special fan

It's no brainer, it's so fun to watch [laugh][laugh][laugh][blow a kiss][blow a kiss][blow a kiss]

So beautiful, reborn.

Come on, you must persist

More updates are simply not enough This book is very good. I hope it won't be discontinued.