The Golden Descendant in the World of Pirates

I'm currently reviewing the review. There are no problems or flaws in the first volume. The writing is not boring. The factory characters of Ompharos do not have OOC. The most rare thing is that the stars do not have OOC. They are abstract stars and it is not easy to OOC. But in fact, it is easiest to write OOC for this kind of character. For short stories, you only need to consider abstraction, but when writing a long novel, you need to consider the core of the character. The OOC stars I've watched include Brainless Heartthrob, My Lovely Wife, and Le Ziren. Some people may think that these words are not OOC for the star, but that is limited to short stories. The short story does not need to write about the personal charm of the star, but only the story of the result of the charm. But something went wrong when it came to a novel. The heartthrob did not write about the personal charm of the star. The story of "The Lovely Wife" was obviously written into the brain. When reading this kind of novel, you can clearly feel that it is different from the kind of deliberately funny. You really feel that the author really thinks so. Xing Mingming is the kind of person who just does it for fun and does not care about the feelings of his companions. Xing Mingming is just a little bit dismissive and speaks a little shockingly. It does not mean that he is ignorant. There are even Xings who use bats to hurt others in order to grab trash cans... Although Xing likes trash cans is a very important setting, but he will not hurt others... Talking back to this article, although the star written by the author is not that abstract, I feel that it is not OOC. Of course, I am not saying that abstract is OOC. There are also good abstracts written by authors, but most authors actually do not have the writing power and cannot write abstractly well. Another point is that the combat power arranged by the author has not collapsed, nor has Beng Tie's combat power been too high, which made it impossible to continue writing, nor has the combat power been weakened too much, causing frustration. Most Xingtie comic fans always want to weaken Bengtie's character's combat power, otherwise the game will be over in two chapters. The reasons for weakening combat power and the mechanism for restoring strength arranged by the author are also reasonable. At least I have not seen a plot where Xing loses the power of his life and becomes an ordinary person and gasps for breath after running two steps. No matter what, Xing is a person who can beat empty pawns with a bat and a bat without destroying his life, and his pure physical body is also strong. There is another kind of situation where the aboriginal people are just a background, or they are just shocked, and the highlights and core that the original characters should have are gone. It was originally written to evaluate the author and was written as a complaint about other articles. However, the author's current writing does not contain the plot that I complained about, and other than this, the writing is not bad. The writing is really good, but it is not enough to read.

Give it a 4-star review. After all, this thing belongs to two people. People who don't play Bengtie can't understand it. But it can also be watched by Bentie players and Pirates fans. However, it is recommended that the author clarify the characters of Ompharos. I think it is a reflection of their appearance in the book. Otherwise, according to the setting of Beng Tie, Ten Thousand Enemies is definitely capable of destroying planets, especially Bai E. He can leave wounds on the Destruction Star God and cause it to bleed. He can also steadily get the blood and slip away (although the Destruction Star God does not take it seriously), which also means that Bai E has the ability to destroy the galaxy.

It looks good, the combat power is reasonable, the plot flow is also good, and it has its own unique outline idea. If the main activity of the star is Pirates, it has not yet been integrated with the main plot of the Pirates anime, but the writing is equally exciting.

Come on, don't underestimate the bond between unknown guests Very pretty cat! ! !

I want to see the stars use baseball bats to create overlords, and thunder and gossip I've finished saving the few pictures.

You can watch it, but this is a different world, and the people you meet in it are basically foreigners. Those dialects like "ideas stick to your hand" are very inconsistent here.

I don't know how to describe it. I feel that this book is very comfortable and smooth to read. The characters don't feel OOC yet. I often read fanfiction or crossovers. Other articles (parts) have some segmentation problems, or OOC and AI. I haven't noticed any of these problems in this book for the time being. It's very good. Please update it~

Personally, I feel like I can read it, but my writing style needs to be improved, but here it is 🍅, so I feel like the writing is still okay.

It's very good. I happened to read this book when I was in a book shortage. I haven't read One Piece, but it doesn't bother me to read it now😋The author's descriptions of the golden descendants are also very good. Teacher Kexia's words "I couldn't kill them all with one blow" and the dream scene where Sirsis possesses and digs out the little black heart. It's so good. I'd love to see more scenes like this hehehehe I will save the article and look forward to the follow-up plot😋

It's very interesting. It's a book with a rare perspective. This is the first time I've read a collaboration between Bentie and One Piece, and it's a man wearing a woman. But the character descriptions are very good, and it fits my idea of ​​a golden descendant.

A treasure trove of good books. Who knows how precious it is to encounter this book during a book shortage? The plot is very interesting, and the characters and environments on both sides are well integrated. There are relatively few people at the moment. I think that on the one hand, there is a little overlap between readers of Pirates and Bengtie (mathematical collection). On the other hand, the fusion at the beginning will definitely dissuade some readers (at least if I read it myself, I would feel a little uncomfortable at the beginning, mainly because I have never seen this kind of subject matter, so I will be a little wary)

It's a good read. I highly recommend it. Those who haven't watched One Piece can also watch it. The author's description of each character is very good and the details are very good. The original plot is also very good. I hope the author can write more. If the author finishes writing the pirate chapter in the future, I think he can write about other worlds and continue to explore. After all, this is another universe. Come on, author, and try to write two to three million words.

After watching it, I still feel that the Trail Blazers' combat power is a bit exhausted [I'm about to cry]

Stars and golden descendants have a happy adventure in the world of pirates🥰The story is really humane, each character has its own highlight, super delicious [Adoration] I am even more looking forward to Xiao Sanyue and Danheng being able to appear by Xing's side as soon as possible [Love]

I think the writing is great, and the plot, battles, etc. Are all very attractive to me. Not too procrastinated. Bentie and Pirate are people who know each other well, and they really have a strong sense of fate when they meet. It feels like the author is letting me go to Pirates through Pathfinder to meet my favorite characters. And produce some redemption, bonds and the like. The comments section is also very interesting. It made me realize the characters of Pirates and Hontetsu again from a perspective that I had never imagined before.

I don't know what to say but I still give it a good review. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is pretty good, overall it's very comfortable to read and feels fresh.

It's really good. If only the stars were a little brighter, it would be fine.

It's okay, it's already considered a high-quality product among Tomato fans.

It's good to read. Although I just wrote the preservation chapter, the preservation chapter is very well written. The most important thing is that the author is not OC at all.

It fits the spirit of the pioneers (｡･ω･｡)

It's so pretty, not bad [laughing][like][like][like][like] I have to say, this is the best batch of all the Bengtie fans I've seen. I hope the author will work harder [Thinking]

A very nice book!

Will awaken its domineering domineering energy?

Of course it's a good review. Come on, author

It looks great, but I still can't get out of Omfalos.

The content is very interesting, keep up the good work

The author's writing is very good, hope to add more

This is really well written It looks good, but there are few updates

Very pretty, give it a try