Harry Becomes Severus's Child

When the lights of Hogwarts Castle no longer just stay on the pages of the original book, this HP fanfic picks up the blank moments in JK Rowling's writings, using the familiar magical world as the background to unfold the joys and sorrows of parallel time and space. The author firmly grasps the essence of the original characters and does not forcibly tamper with the characters for the sake of the plot: Harry still hides the sensitive softness of a young boy, Draco's struggle under the arrogant shell is clearly palpable, the Weasley family is always warm and warm, and the gentleness and forbearance of the professors have not been lost. The story jumps out of the grand battlefield of the battle between good and evil, and focuses on ordinary daily life - the pumpkin juice on the auditorium table, the evening breeze on the Quidditch field, the secret light of the wand in the library late at night, the brief embrace at the holiday platform reunion, the tiny fireworks dilute the heaviness of war, and add a bit more human touch to the magical world. The writing perfectly fits the British narrative texture of the original work, and the details of spells, school rules, and magic props are rigorously researched. The scenes such as owl delivering letters, potions class practice, and walking in the forbidden forest are full of atmosphere. When reading, it feels like stepping into Platform Nine and Three-Quarters again. Different from the strong fateful confrontation of the original work, this article focuses more on growth and reconciliation: the prejudices of youth, the trauma left by the war, and the understanding between different positions are all narrated. There is no black-and-white judgment, leaving only space for the characters to heal and let go. The only drawback is that the branch plot in the second half is a little complicated, and the story preparation of some supporting characters is a little hasty, but the flaws are not concealed. It is not a new epic that subverts the original work, but a love letter to the world of Harry Potter, which makes up for many of the inconsistencies in the original work. If you have ever felt lost in the story of Hogwarts and are eager to see the characters' peaceful rest of their lives after they shed the shackles of war, this fanfic will surely bring back the burning longing and emotion that filled your heart when you first opened the history of magic book.

Teacher, I'm here to review the book for you. It's very good-looking, very good-looking. Snape protects Harry very well. It's very good-looking and heart-warming. The characters' expressions are well expressed. Well, it's a bit in line with the writing style of the original Aunt Luo.

It's okay, but I feel that Harry is a little weak compared to the cubs bred by Teacher Shi. At that time, Harry could rank among the top of the grade according to his notes. Now that he has had one-on-one training from childhood to adulthood, it feels strange that the gap has not been widened. I hope it can improve the combat value. Everything else is okay.

This writing is very good (ˊ•̥▵•)੭₎₎ It completely helped me realize my dream. Harry had no one to accompany him when he was a child. ദ്ദി˶>V<)✧It vividly shows Snape's preference for Harry.

It's fun to watch 😄😄😄 Fat sausage is delicious

Very sweet and very pretty

The characters are so delicate, very good-looking, and very sweet

Beautiful! The author's writing style is very good [smirking] [smirking] It can be regarded as a relatively high-quality writing by Western Persimmon! I hope the author will update it soon. The plot is pretty good so far 🤭

Super good-looking, Draco has that kind of tsundere and secretly likes Harry

It's very beautiful and a very novel image of Harry. If you can accept it, I really think this would look great.