A Ray of Breeze

This is a fantasy about cultivating immortals. The theme is quite interesting: If there is an afterlife, I would rather not be an immortal or a human being, but just be a breeze on your shoulders. The beginning of the novel is thought-provoking and saddening. One day the male protagonist got up much earlier than usual. Before the rooster had crowed for the first time, he crawled out of bed. His movements were as careful as a thief, for fear of disturbing his father who had been snoring just a moment ago. But when he walked into the main room, rubbing his eyes, his father was already at the stove. He was surprised, but her father asked him which day he got up later than him. In life, the role of parents is very important, and they hope to be role models for their children. I hope that all children in the world can follow the footsteps of their parents, be better than others, and become stronger than the previous generation! Five-star praise! The author has good literary skills, the language is fluent, popular and interesting, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the twists and turns make readers unable to stop reading. It is really worth reading!

"A Breeze of Breeze" is an oriental fairy tale full of atmosphere. The whole book uses the sentence "If there is an afterlife, I would like not to be an immortal or a human being, but just be a ray of breeze on your shoulder" as the emotional core, which expresses the lingering emotions. The story interweaves good and evil, destiny and the righteousness of the common people. Under the grand structure, it focuses on the love-hate entanglement between mortals and immortal couples. In the dilemma of world safety and personal emotions, the fragility and tragedy of individual emotions are highlighted. The disputes in the fairy world serve as the background, vividly exaggerating the separation of love and hate. The text has its own poetic beauty, and the sense of fate runs through the whole text, with deep affection and long aftertaste. It is suitable for readers who prefer ancient fairy tales, tragic and fateful stories, and delicate emotional stories, and who like to read fairy tales and beautiful sadomasochistic plots.

A novel about cultivating immortals. The core setting revolves around "If there is an afterlife, I would not be an immortal or a human being, but just be a breeze on your shoulder." The main plot is not the usual leveling up and killing monsters, but focuses on the pull between emotion and fate - the opposition between good and evil, the righteousness of the people, and individual emotions. The three squeeze each other in the story, and the author handles it more delicately. The writing style is subtle, and many emotions are not written directly. Instead, they are conveyed through movements and blank spaces, so you need to calm down and read. The world view is slowly unfolded. The pace is not fast at the beginning, but the foreshadowing is laid out relatively thinly, leaving a lot of room for subsequent expansion. It is currently being serialized with more than 400,000 words. If you like to be more literary and artistic and have a strong emotional line, you can give it a try.

After reading the novel, I realized why it was called a ray of breeze. Not only is the literary talent and world view like the gentle breeze, but also the core of the fairy tale. The road to immortality is vast. Do you still want to be a fairy in the next life? The story is full of ups and downs, and after reading it, you will feel a soul-stirring feeling unique to fairy tale novels!

This book is very well written, the characters are consistent, the main plot is clear, the author's writing is smooth, the plot has ups and downs, and the content is very attractive, making people want to continue reading. It is a very good fairy novel, worth recommending [top post]

This deep love in the world of immortals was deeply moved. In the book, the fateful entanglement, the confrontation between good and evil, and the righteousness of the people are placed in front of the protagonist. Personal love appears particularly fragile and tragic under the crushing force of the grand destiny. "If there is an afterlife, I would rather not be an immortal or a human being, but just be a breeze on your shoulder." This sentence expresses the regret of not being able to get everything you want. The author depicts the bond between the characters very delicately, not only the ups and downs of the world of immortality, but also the unforgettable love and hate. The story is full of atmosphere. On one side is the heavy burden of the world, on the other side is the love in the heart. The dilemma makes people feel sad. Readers who prefer tragic fairy tales can read it well.

The writing is good, a classic novel about immortality, and the warm family scene at the beginning foreshadows the teenage ambitions in the later stages. The description of the characters' appearances is also very good. There is no sense of rush. The author has worked hard in advance.

Your writing is very contagious, the narrative rhythm is relaxed and appropriate, and the description is vivid and three-dimensional. He is good at capturing details that are easily overlooked. He can make the scenes and characters come to mind without going into too much detail. You can immerse yourself in the story by following the text, and you won't be able to put it down for a long time after reading it. Invincible and beautiful in the world

If you are not going to be an immortal, this sentence runs through the plot. The author's writing is very strong. Every paragraph shows this sentence. The ancient charm between the lines is profound, and there is an illusion of reading poetry. Excellent work, five stars. I reviewed it first and will continue to follow it. Caught up, waiting for new updates every day

If there is an afterlife, I will not be an immortal or a human being. It's a very good setting, and the characterization is delicate and outstanding. Are you the type to watch? Xiao Yunfei's character design is very good. It's interesting, so keep up the good work! Highly recommended.

I found a treasure, the best novel I have read recently! The world view is grand, the logic is rigorous and clear, the characters are rich, the main stories are interlocking, and the writing is exquisite and moving. It is worth reading carefully! Looking forward to the further development of the plot, it won't be a waste to follow the article!

The intention is romantic, the story is novel, and the love you follow will last until death, and it will stay with you even if it turns into a breeze. The author's writing is delicate, the narrative is smooth, and the emotions are vividly and deeply touching. It's a good book!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The fateful fairy with a great sense of atmosphere! The writing is elegant and delicate, the characters are vivid, and the story hides endless affection and regret. The plot is full of ups and downs and is full of oriental fairy charm. Readers who prefer fairy tales, sad stories, and themes of fate will be attracted by it quickly!

The author's writing style is exquisite and the characters are vivid, like watching a TV series. The details are handled well, the words are piled just right, the plot is handled properly, and there is no procrastination or muddiness...

A masterpiece of Xianxia with a sense of fate! The writing is beautiful, the plot is tragic, and the love between children is particularly fragile in the face of righteousness. "Want to be a breath of fresh air on your shoulders" is a line that runs throughout the book and is full of stamina.

Not bad, not bad, a very good-looking novel about cultivating immortals. It is fresh and refined, without internal friction, and the plot is compact. There is a sense of freedom and ease hidden in the plainness. It does not deliberately pretend to be pretentious, but it shows the spirit of an immortal in every gesture. [Love][love][love]

The story has a relaxed rhythm, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot progresses layer by layer, and the foreshadowing is just right. The writing is smooth and natural, the atmosphere is very strong, and the reading is full of immersion. The further you go, the easier it is to immerse yourself in the plot. It is a work worth calming down and reading carefully.

Recommended points: 1️⃣The writing style is very good, the characters and scenery described have their own characteristics and are interlocking. 2️⃣The plot is smooth. 3️⃣The Xiao Yunfei created has personality, outstanding characteristics and vivid image.

A coming-of-age novel about cultivating immortality, the story of the growth and improvement of Xiao Yunfei, a young man from Caomiao Village, is interesting and worth reading!

The core of the book is particularly poignant. Different from most fairy tales that only seek to ascend and dominate, the protagonist's practice changes from pure revenge to slowly realizing that the sword is for protection rather than for venting anger. The four words "keep your heart" run through the whole text. Hatred is a shackle, but protection is the way. Kendo fighting does not have special effects, but focuses on the game of body, state of mind, and sword intention. The sections of practicing swordsmanship, confronting scale wolves, and competing with fellow sects are structured, and the fighting has both beauty and tension.

The book lives up to its name, a wisp of breeze, like a scroll unfolding slowly. The plot is fascinating, the characters are vividly portrayed, and each has his or her own personality. It is a very good fantasy and immortality. After reading it in one sitting, I still have more to say. It is very exciting and worthy of a five-star recommendation.

The setting of the story is full of atmosphere, the characters are vivid and delicate, the appearance, demeanor, and conversation are simple and warm, the writing is delicate and gentle, and it makes good use of sensory descriptions to exaggerate the morning moisture and stove fireworks. The narrative rhythm is soothing and natural, and the atmosphere of fireworks is strong!

The writing style of the work is smooth and delicate, very good! The characters are vividly created, and the emotional descriptions are quite delicate. They gradually grow up in suffering, which makes people very moved after watching it. The plot of the story is ups and downs, exciting, exciting, and the details are in place, making it very visual.

This novel is completely enjoyable! IQ full course Online, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled, making it extremely enjoyable. The characters are full and tense, and the whole process is not delayed. It is definitely a masterpiece that makes people stay up late to finish it! It's so enjoyable to watch, the more you watch it, the more you get addicted to it, you can't stop at all, it's highly recommended!

Very pretty! The pace is fast, the excitement is dense, the characters are vivid, I couldn't stop reading hundreds of chapters in one go, the setting is novel and not overwhelming, the plot is high-energy throughout, the author's writing is online, you won't lose money if you invest in it!

After reading it, I can't help but write a good review! The plot of the whole book is novel and unique, breaking away from the old routine of traditional fairy tales. The character creation is very vivid, and every frown and smile, as well as the ups and downs of emotions, are all portrayed in detail. Especially the training and training sections, the descriptions are realistic and lifelike, and the story feels full of immersion. The story has a smooth rhythm and exciting plots. It is a recently discovered treasure of fairy tales.

The main idea of ​​this book on immortality is very romantic, and the author's writing style also depicts the characters very delicately. It is a rare masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to work hard to produce more beautiful stories, and I will continue to read it! It's great, I'm still reading it!

The main theme of the book touches people's hearts directly. If there is an afterlife, I would rather not be a fairy or a human being, but just be a breeze on your shoulders. The characters' bonding is heart-stirring. The plot has no lag throughout the whole process, and the sense of satisfaction and emotion are just right in balance.

This is my first time reading the novel "Xiu Xian", with its exquisite world view, vivid characters, novel and unique plot and delicate and sincere emotions. Recommend[top post]

The fantasy theme of cultivating immortals is so special, not being an immortal, not being a human being... It's like a romantic love story. I always feel that something is missing about the pure immortality theme of upgrading and fighting monsters, and the love story can easily fall into clichés. I won't spoil it, but you must watch it!