Jobless Reincarnation: the King with a Sick Mind

Teacher Luo Qixi, I still remember you [crying] Every sentence pulls me into the inner demon [crying] Teacher Luo Qixi, I still remember you [crying] You bear all the worries of practicing magic for me [crying] Luo Qixi is Kami, the most perfect existence in the world. She is cute and invincible but never proud. She is extremely powerful but never complacent. Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi! Luo Qixi! 🐱🐶 😡 😠 👗 👗 ✊🏻 👕 ✊🏻👕 ✊🏻😭 🪑🪑 👖 👖 👗

Brothers, brothers, take out the UR colorful and invincible gold card from 10 Miles Gold Rush! If you pass by, don't miss the delicate inner description of the characters, the emotional drama and the literary drama of Jiangnan. What I want to watch is this, enter, enter! This kind of powerful novel is what people like me should read. It's so powerful [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Thank you author for allowing me to read this kind of book. I will probably never forget you in my lifetime! I'm full. Thank you, author, for the treat. It's so sweet. That's all I have to say. The field has opened a five-star review.

Withdraw money, withdraw money, no job reincarnation ushered in a real fan. I have also read the two high-scoring novels of the "Genius Swordsman" and "Yin Yuejun" system. I gave up after reading about a hundred chapters in the early stage. Basically, they set up a world view and fall in love throughout the whole process. There is no joblessness. I gave up after reading it for a while. And this book, as an adopted son becomes Rudy's family, a middle school student with a child, and also contains adult philosophy. The author writes it very well and handles Rudy's character well. It makes me look forward to the life of this family.

It's good to read, and the author's writing is similar to the first person of "The Experimental Diary of the Crazy Lich" and the second person of "The Strong Man of Shadows". In an area full of AI, there are not many older people who stick to handwriting [smile] Yes, use AI to lower the score by two points [Like]

Highlights: The emotional collision of the protagonist and the passion of the Paoluo family; the wonderful adventure with Luo Qixi; the protagonist's godlike quotes and the ultimate second grade; the protagonist: the natural responsibility, the resulting holiness, what teaches you to become a family man... The poisonous point: The Holy Land of Swords recognizes Ai Xia as their daughter (reasons: I don't want my adoptive mother to be sad and destroy the happiness of my family; I don't want Ai Xia to be discriminated against in her future life, which will affect her healthy growth; the protagonist has great family conflicts in her previous life and longs for love, so she doesn't want Ai Xia to be the same as herself); there are obvious traces of AI. The traces of AI in the early stage are obvious, but there are interesting plots and emotions, which can be ignored when reading. However, in the Holy Land of Swords, the protagonist's strength has increased exponentially, and the emotions are no longer so exciting, and the biggest advantage has been lost. Therefore, my reading experience is "like chewing wax". I have been following the update until now. I read the first-person and multi-perspective narration for the first time and found that the advantages are obvious - my emotions are effectively mobilized. Even if I don't feel anything from the main perspective, I will always have a different feeling when I experience it from other perspectives. This feeling of Sword Holy Land has been very weak. It is not because I have adapted, but because the author's plot arrangement no longer has a sense of impact. Finally, just keep it for now. If the later writing is as exciting as the previous one, I will read it again and modify the score.

It's good to watch, I'd love to watch it, I'll watch more of it. The character of the main character is very to my liking. He's a middle schooler, smart, not a virgin but kind-hearted. He also handles Ludy's bad points very well without ruining the character. The daily life with Luo Qixi is particularly sweet [blowing kiss]

I finished reading it in one go. The setting and description in the front are indeed pretty good, but the plot in the back is a bit too drawn out and lengthy. The Holy Land of Swords does not have the flavor of the original work, and the frequent mention of a word/stalk within a few chapters may be a bit confusing. I look forward to the follow-up. Maybe it's caused by using too much AI? The Holy Land of Sword section is very strange, and the protagonist is almost invincible in more than 100 chapters, but the main plot has not passed the beginning, and the control is a bit poor. Yes, the original work of "Jobless Reincarnation" has a relatively fast pace, and many more realistic and dark elements have been introduced to neutralize the too fast pace. However, the pace of this film is too slow and it fails to incorporate too many elements that can resonate with or interest readers. Of course, respect the fruits of labor, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people

Summary, a masterpiece, can be ranked in the top 5% of Tomato (currently) The ultimate emotional description and the ultimate characterization, what did it teach you about writing? Although the author himself said that his writing style is generally much better than most others who have written several books. There are actually two flaws that I personally think are not big. One is that there are relatively few combat descriptions. Most of the time, he is actually taking advantage of the situation in a reasonable way. Another small loophole is that the author often responds to other people's questions about the development of the story in the author's comments, which leads to spoilers. It actually destroys the immersion for normal readers. After arriving at the Land of the Sword Master, it turned into a big lump.

The ability to be a male god, the golden personality of a domestic product, I said this book is amazing, does anyone understand? [Cover face][cover face]

It makes me so sad to see it, really. At first I thought it was novel and quite exciting, but after seeing it I felt uncomfortable. It's not that it's uncomfortable to watch because there's something bad about it, but it's because it makes me empathize and understand, so I feel uncomfortable in my heart. Is it distressing? I have no idea. In terms of content, it is very rich and not boring. For me, it is a perspective that I have never seen before, because it is not like the common interesting articles on Tomato. Even if you say that the strength of the protagonist is indeed interesting, there is really something in the emotional and psychological descriptions. The writing is relatively comfortable to read, and there are some traces of AI, but not much. It is already better than many other writings. The content has been carefully polished, and the supplementary content at the end is also very interesting and well explained. However, it's hard to say whether this kind of article can get a high score on Rotten Persimmon. I guess not, but it is definitely worth reading. I can't be particularly sure about the traces of AI. I just played some AI in a tavern myself. When I read some of the content, I felt a familiar feeling of "a bit of AI flavor", but in this book it is already very light.

First of all, as a two-dimensional fanfic, it is undoubtedly very qualified. It is full of two-dimensional flavor, but not nerdy, and has a lot of two-dimensional jokes. Although the main character's speech is awkward, it really made me feel good in some plots. Secondly, in terms of writing, I think it is very good, and the character creation is also very good. Its first-person perspective is very good, which reminds me of another author who writes in the first person. ——The Book-eating Demon, although this book is not as good as "Expert of Conquering Demons", it is more than enough compared to the author's other two books. Especially the author's part about other people's perspectives is also written in this book, allowing readers to return to God's perspective. Moreover, the author's writing is very emotional for the characters, without a series of inferences generated by the characters' own reasoning, but based on the feelings of the characters' own past experiences. All in all, this is a very good two-dimensional light novel, very suitable for readers who have got rid of the second disease but still retain their childlike innocence.

After reading it, it is indeed very good, very good grass, and the pace is okay, but now it is a bit delayed. The protagonist has to do too many things, which makes the writing structure slow. I hope to come up with some exciting points to make this article more interesting and not boring. One of the ways is to sprinkle sugar. Yes, I want to eat sugar. Sugar will be very interesting. I am looking forward to the next article. It is not interesting to write all about the protagonist doing those preparatory events, but sprinkle some sugar from time to time, with blue fur and the like.

The logic is very smooth, the psychological description is very good so far, and the logic of doing things is also very good. There are no sudden and inexplicable insertions. It has its own set of logic, which can be said to be very complete. To sum up, you are a 100-point guy, especially in the current tomato, which is at the top. I hope you can continue to maintain it in the future and don't make some inexplicable insertions like other bad ones. So the author works hard, I am optimistic about you.

Respected ones: Good! I watched the masterpiece, spent all my time forgetting to eat and sleep, and couldn't let go of my love. The emotions in his poems are thread-like and traceable, like spring silkworms spitting out their leaves, forming a chapter implicitly; every foreshadowing stroke is like the overlapping of chapters of elegant music, subtly turning inward and gaining momentum. Suddenly, the emotion surges, suddenly bursts out, as sudden as the sudden start of thunder, or the sudden arrival of rain, the viewer's mind is shaken. The protagonist works hard and diligently, and the sun and the moon are approaching, just like a jade being polished, it starts to darken and ends with light, and it becomes a wonderful tool. The chapters are short and the ending is disappointing, just like tasting a piece of wine from a tripod but not being satisfied; or like drinking wine and suddenly emptying the wine glass, leaving you with a dull heart. However, there is an article "asking for benefits" in "Li". Although a certain person is not sensitive, he dares to support this righteousness and wears a stilt to ask for help: "I hope Mr. Ji can quickly give Yao a compilation for the enjoyment of all living beings. I am very lucky." Goodbye. Jyo, I will probably never forget you in this life.

The start was really discouraging. But after watching it for a long time, I feel that the character of the protagonist is pretty good. There is no collapse, I think it is a good novel, and a good fanfic. The previous poisonous points may lead to fewer people watching it and lower ratings. But if you really taste it carefully, it's still very good. Chapter 100

The latest 56 chapters are very interesting. I have some basic knowledge of psychology, so I find it very interesting! Looking forward to the follow-up! By the way, the author said that when creating characters, he will carefully analyze why the characters behave like this? What has he experienced? What would he do if something like this happened? This kind of writing method of asking why is very laborious, but the effect of writing is really comfortable to look at! Because for such a character, his actions are supported by a set of underlying logic! Very few people write like this. I hope the author will continue to write like this! It's more of the author's rigid arrangement, and the characters don't have their own will and charm. They were all pushed away! This makes me uncomfortable just looking at it!

The truth is so delicious... I haven't seen such delicate emotions in a long time. I am so happy to see such a novel! ! ! ! ! Author, please keep reading! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't mess up! ! ! ! ! This is my last request! ! ! ! Oh inner cover! Sweet~sweet~this is the mouth tooth I want to see! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. I cried while reading this novel. I accidentally got myself involved in it. My ability to empathize is so strong. I feel that the protagonist is really pitiful. He doesn't look like an adult at all. He is more like a child, a child who is extremely lacking in love. To be honest, if I am the protagonist. I have gone crazy. I have the same life as the world and broke out with them. The part where I cried was the part where they got to Sword God. I was able to hold on before, but I couldn't hold on at the end. It was so uncomfortable. Alas, he was really well-shaped and a kind-hearted child. I wanted to cry again.

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Lively and interesting, with good-looking characters. The rich character design is also a highlight of Muji Tensei, and the author has continued this very well. Lord of Shadows is not obtrusive, but rather lively and interesting.

This book has the craziest plot I have ever read in No Job (Praise) Five-star review [Like] [Like] [Like] The author's daily plot is very good. He enriches the character through some daily portrayal of the character's psychology, which makes me think the protagonist's character is quite charming. In addition, the shortcomings of this book are that the update is too slow, and it is a pity that there is only one female protagonist, Luo Qixi.

The writing is good, it's a good source of food, and the plot is coherent, but the protagonist gave me a sense of inhumanity. The plot description is caused by the protagonist's native family, which leads to mental illness (not derogatory) and dissociation. When reading, I felt a little disconnected (?) There is also a sense of arrogance, which I can understand. As a time traveler, I have experienced affluent modern society and traveled to a different world, and it is also a different world in anime. And knowing the plot behind it, I will be somewhat arrogant, which is human nature. The writing is good, I hope the author keeps it up.

The beginning is very good, and the emotional control of family members, teachers and friends is relatively delicate. It is a very high-quality work, but the poisonous points cannot be ignored. The first signs of the nuclear bomb are revealed, and the combat power is too serious. The protagonist will not be well after arriving at the Holy Land of Swords. He becomes the seven great powers at the age of ten [face covering] The key is that the transfer has not started yet, and there are also flaws in the Dragon God, and the clone is also against the sky. I feel I feel like the author wanted to write about Lord Shadow, who is invincible but not too showy, but maybe he didn't control it well and the rhythm wasn't right. I think the main plot is about the same and when Rudy and Sylphy get married, it's okay if the main character has this strength. After all, Rudy is the last of the seven powers. Overall, it's worth a look. It's considered a high-quality work by no-job fans on Tomato. I look forward to seeing what the author writes next.

It's beautiful, I love it, but I can't get enough😭 The protagonist has a subtle sense of epilepsy, which combines pleasant elements such as tsundere and tsundere into one. And because the protagonist is still a young boy, these elements blend very naturally. Update soon! Update soon😭

It's a good book and I love reading it. It's hard to write highlights in second-generation fan fiction, but it's also hard to write poisonous points, because as long as you don't ruin the character, there will always be readers who will love to read it. There is nothing poisonous about this book, and the male protagonist's character is also very three-dimensional. A civil servant whose parents were divorced in his previous life, lacked love and felt insecure, came to a different world because he knew the plot and wanted to save everyone. The opening outline Just put it directly on your face, good-looking is good-looking, and the male protagonist will also work hard, Xiao Aixia is also very cute, but the emotional line is pushed too slowly, but I also understand that the male protagonist cannot suddenly become strong, there must be foreshadowing, but when writing this, you cannot write emotional lines, because the male protagonist is still a child and cannot fall in love early [laughing and crying] There is nothing more to say, just look good and that's it

It's so awesome. While upgrading, I don't forget to develop humanistic philosophy. This is the book I'm looking for. My personal rating is 9.69, Just because Master Langya is not 9.8 Yet. A certain trivial novel can reach 9.7. Be more confident about the author. In my opinion, you may not be the most imaginative. You may not be able to create a new world like a veteran author, but you are the best-sounding one among the more than 20 new authors I have read, and you are already quite powerful. You will definitely be able to write better and better, because you are my beloved author Kou Ya.

From the current point of view, Tomato is definitely a T0-level jobless reincarnation fanfic. If after reading the first few chapters, you feel that you want to give up the book, I strongly recommend that you read it for a while. The potential in the later period is huge. It is probably a sure thing to write a million words. If you can maintain this quality and finish it, I would like to call it Tomato's strongest jobless fanfic. If you think I'm just talking nonsense without reading a few books, you can watch my homepage for as long as you like. If nothing else goes wrong, it will definitely be fine to get a rating of 9 in the future. I am also curious if the author has rewarded me for more updates. I want to reward this second unemployed article certified by a master.

The top-ranked fan fiction I have read so far, even because of my personal preference, can be said to be the top-ranked novel. The other one on QD is called "The Days of Being a Spiritual Mentor in American Comics". Based on my deep understanding of the original characters and worldview, I used all of this instead of following the plot to write a story with a very distinctive original protagonist. One thing this book does particularly well is that the character of the King of Shadows is very stable. , Does not give people a sense of fragmentation. The first-person narrative allows people to almost completely understand everything the author wants to show the protagonist's thoughts, and these things are in line with the protagonist's personality. At the same time, the rhythm is great. The author's outline is great, it is difficult to describe, there is a silky smooth and reasonable feeling, as if a new novel has grown out of the jobless worldview, it is from the Jobless Multiverse, it is very beautiful, but I can't describe in detail what makes it comfortable to read. In short, it is highly recommended. The author has his own settings for some of the blank parts of the worldview that can withstand a certain degree of scrutiny. He also has his own understanding of the characteristics of each original character and the protagonist (original character) (I think it is relatively restored, but it also has the author's own interpretation). At the same time, there is no sudden change or collapse in personality. The reasons for the changes of almost all important characters are shown, and the behavior is loyal to the "character" rather than "God's will" or "forcible wisdom" The author's multi-perspective narration is also a very unique highlight, which can add excitement (watching the protagonist pretend to be cool) and laughter. It can also expand information and character psychology that cannot be directly displayed in the first-person narrative. The key is that all this reflects the author's grasp of the important characters in his works. Character, strength, motivation, dreams... The author has strong writing control, and it is a very smooth book that is easy to understand. The plot arrangement also breaks out of the original story line. It is not a nanny style but has a deep connection with the important characters of the original work. It is also very creative and imaginative. It is really good to read! Some sea tiger terriers also make people excited and open their mouths!

You can get five stars at the beginning⭐The characters are also very full, and they also involve some different world ability systems. The author is also confused and worried that the male protagonist's combat power will be too high, and it will become more and more difficult to write. And this book is not a monster-killing, upgrading and growth type. During this time, the author re-wrote the plot from a different perspective, although the character development can also be expanded. But there are too many... Currently 80+ are waiting for the author to clarify where the future road will go! Those born in the 1980s still show that the author's inventory is insufficient, and many plots are told from a third perspective. This writing method reduces the main plot by at least 60%. The rest of the plot can be summed up as a new picture of learning swordsmanship in the dojo and meeting with the Dragon God to learn that Man has just opened the magic academy... We have advanced to this point in episode 40, and the highlight is the development of the story after the big transfer event. To summarize the current situation: the story can get full marks at the beginning, the character plot adaptation ability and structure are good, and many development directions have surpassed the original work. Although the author is weak in hand-to-hand combat scenes, he can make up for it by digging into the characters and frequently adapting the plot. I hope to see a storyline that continues to rise🆙👍🏻

Character is the core of the novel, and dialogue on stage is all about building character. Generally, the stories in a novel are divided into two, one is the A story and the other is the B story. The story is mainly responsible for the external parts that attract readers, and the 2b story is about telling. The inner changes of the protagonist are also the theme. The real theme of a person is what he needs. Even if he cannot detect it, it is what he needs. How to keep readers reading is actually a relatively simple question. A is to attract them, and B is to create characters. In the end, what people watch is actually the dialogue between people. The author actually doesn't have to care about the civilization of the writing, and that's okay now. What's important is the characterization. As long as the character is done, everything is fine. What you write is a fan story, you don't need to build it yourself, the plot is roughly preset. Come on, author, come on!