Re0 My Brother Is Natsuki Subaru

It's a rare re0 fan with very natural writing. To be honest, the original work really makes me angry sometimes. The Emilia camp is too shady, and there are a bunch of civil war phantom gods that are driving 486 to death. That is to say, 486 is kind and strong. If someone else takes care of you, you are a bunch of trouble-making monsters. If you dare to torture and kill me, I will retaliate a thousand times and save you. I should kill all of you. Here the author gives 486 a cute brother-controlling brother, which relieves 486's loneliness as a stranger in a foreign land, shares the pain of not being understood after death and return, and allows 486 to face various dangers and no longer have to resist being repeatedly tortured and killed. I am really happy and hope to see the ending and other if-line extras. After all, except for the laziness line of being a husband/the lust line of having a harem/the waste line of hugging the sword master's thigh, other 486 including the main line of jealousy are too painful.

It's very well written, and it's tied immediately. If it were without cp, I would follow you forever! Personally, I prefer to watch family-oriented ones.

My evaluation is the person who takes the least pressure, the legendary self-destruct infantry In terms of content, there is actually no big change from the original work. The writing is okay. There is currently no female protagonist. However, there are very few re0 classmates in Tomato itself, and they can barely be considered pretty. ¯꒳¯

It seems pretty good so far. The character of the younger brother is also pretty good. With a brother with a strong sense of morality like 486, he can be carried around without being distorted. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it won't be too bad. By the way, I'm not very good at testing AI capabilities. The author can't be AI. I still hope it's handwritten. After all, AI is unstable, and the routines are relatively simple and easy to crash.

I think the imagination and all kinds of writing are pretty good. I hope the author can add some more, a small amount of some psychological descriptions of the protagonist. Although it is difficult to express evil thoughts, if you describe them psychologically, you can let the readers know, and it can also make the characters stand up better. Then because of Angzai, I did not do such evil things. Because my brother is here, I curbed these evil thoughts of my own. From the current point of view, there will be relatively less descriptions of the protagonist, and I just follow the protagonist as he walks. I saw it for the first time entering the house. When Ang proposed to hire two people, the protagonist just put forward an idea instead of thinking of a solution, which meant that there was a quarrel process. The two brothers had different opinions. Of course, it can also be said that the protagonist is at this age anyway, which is normal, but I hope the readers will think slowly, so let's go to sleep. So rather than the readers slowly thinking, it would be better to directly create a distinct protagonist. Well, I have my own ideas, many, many, but I also have a very concerned brother, so these ideas can be shelved. You look good and beautiful. It's good to have an independent audience (it only provides one direction, if you already have a general direction, please think I'm farting)

This is the basic Tomato fanfic that I think is the best among other fanfics or is a direct replacement for 486. Either they traveled through time and became 486, but they changed 486's personality, and they traveled with 486 like this. The original character of 489 is retained, coupled with the original character of the protagonist, making it feel less awkward. And the plug-in for the protagonist is pretty good too. Cooperating with 486 is like meeting a close friend in a low place.

The writing is very good, but I hope you don't pay too much attention to the comments. I read a few chapters first, and after reading a lot of comments, I thought it was another civil war fantasy god. It turns out that Chun Chun was misled. The protagonist is a very qualified combatant, and many places feel very vented. Well, it is very good.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist doesn't take any stress at all, a tribute to the legendary man who doesn't take any pressure.

Still Ai Ang TV [Adoration] Two brothers, one good and one evil, but they both care about each other. They are not too far away from the main plot but there are changes. The original novel is also comfortable to watch.

It's so good-looking that I can't stop updating it, just ask for it, after all, such a good-looking two male protagonists, I just don't know if it will be possible if I meet Pandora, the witch of pretentiousness... [Sneaky laugh]

So well written! It's a good read, a good look, a good look, there's no OOC at all and the plot is very well grasped. It feels like I'm watching an anime. I really like the crazy setting. Good cheers for the author!

The basic plot is the same as the original, except that there is an extra brother, which looks very powerful, but is actually similar to the original plot.

It's so beautiful, it's not enough to watch at all. It makes me so happy to watch it. It's so good that I finally finished it. The original work really impressed me. The good news is in line with the original work, and the bad news is so consistent. When will my brother be able to read a book about several civil war gods at once? Anyway, the material can be reverted, which is quite cool (in fantasy)

It is very faithful to the original work, but the poisonous points of the original work have also been restored. The low rating is normal. I still hope that with the participation of the protagonist, I can write a more exciting story that is similar to the original work.

It seems pretty good so far, but the rating is a bit low. Although the younger brother's character is weak in morals, it can be undistorted with a brother with a strong moral sense like 486. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it won't be too bad.

My current feeling is that (if Wang is the main male protagonist) there is a high probability of a single female protagonist, Beatrice, and a semi-invincible novel. It is a very good book. It mainly focuses on the main plot of the original work. However, because there is a delusion, it lacks a lot of Subaru's death plot in the original work. However, I feel that it can be polished by AI later. However, the main body is still written by a real person. The heroine of Natsuki Deli is currently Betty Beatrice. Deli is currently very powerful. The main part behind It is suppressed, because the power system of Wang is not easy to affect the character, and it is easy to become a madman. I look forward to signing a contract with Betty Beatrice in the future, but even if the power of Wang is suppressed, in my opinion, it can be said to be the best under Lai Aotian and some Sin Archbishops, because if it is not suppressed, it will directly become a nuclear bomb, allowing 486 to reopen Well, I won't talk about the rest. It's suspected of being a spoiler. Generally speaking, when the main plot progresses, I feel that the presence of Subaru is a bit low. However, during the battle scenes, Subaru's presence is quite high. I look forward to an original plot. In fact, because Subaru is too strong, many plots of the original work are gone. I can only look forward to an original plot. I hope that the emotional line of Subaru will be richer, and it can be said that he will not dominate the scene. However, there is a strange perspective, that is, Subaru is always following Subaru. Alleged spoilers: (Currently, the only thread we have taken is Betty, and Rem's feelings for 486 may not be the same as in the original book, because the plot in the forest was directly written by one person, and then he didn't show any attitude towards EMT. If you can accept this, this book is quite good). I won't go into details later. You will know what you want to write about the plot after reading it. Overall, it is A relatively good fanfic, with too little original plot, but I see that I currently want to write about the relationship between Wang and Betty. I look forward to writing it later. If Betty is not the heroine, I will change the evaluation later. It mainly depends on how the author writes it. I hope there will be more originality, otherwise it will appear to be a little human-machine, and the combat power will be more reasonable. I will definitely suppress it, but I hope it will be more reasonable, and then learn other power systems. Well, come on, author, don't stop updating! ! ! For now, I can write it!

It's pretty good. The plot of the main character is exciting. Ang is still Ai Ang TV. The writing is also comfortable to read. Is there two male protagonists? After Van disappears, it looks quite boring. The emotional description is boring, but the emotional line is incredible. Is Rem and Van together or Ang is entangled with each other [Petrochemical]

The author should update more, and then directly expose the frustrating parts of the original work to him. If the author does not want to break away from the plot and wants to push it slowly, he can do it once, and then use that book to backtrack, and then directly go through this mode. If he updates more, the rating should be faster, and the author should not rely too much on the plot of the original work, otherwise it will be no different from watching the original work directly. At present, I feel that it is okay, and the original work is still a bit too much.

Very nice! But personally I think it's better not to have CP anymore, family relationships look better! [Blowing kiss]

Basically, it's good. The biggest OOC at the moment is that Gut Hunter's resurrection is not unlimited. She won't waste her life when she knows she can't beat her. Die once, sneak attack once, and you won't die after it's useless [eating melon] But according to the author's way of writing, it is probably not easy to change

I feel pretty good at the moment, the brother group is the best! In fact, I feel that if the emotional line is delusional, just a small dialogue and interaction with the female character will make people like it. For example, in the eyes of others, the appearance of a girl looks like the ideal type and so on. It's just a normal interaction that doesn't require kissing or hugging, it's fine, it's like really seeing the delusion. This is just a taste. After all, starting a group with my brother is the main job and dealing with people is the side job.

The writing was pretty good, but it basically followed the original work throughout. Subaru died a few fewer times during a few high points in combat power, but later he dropped his chain and self-destructed, causing Subaru to die more than 1,000 times. Now the protagonist has been given a golden finger ban, and his analytical ability has been changed, and his combat power has degraded to a low level.

When I first saw that I was taking the Ghoul Codex in the first few chapters, I was still thinking why I was taking something that was not considered strong in COC? If I thought it was strong, I would probably take a silver key and reincarnate with 486. After reading a few chapters, I felt it was pretty good. It didn't matter that the three gangsters died at first, but it was more uncomfortable when the blond kid died in the back. I found that I still wanted a perfect ending. I feel like the plot will gradually twist next... The perverted younger brother and the incompetent older brother... It would be great if 486 also had a golden finger. It's a work that you can watch. If you don't like the perfect ending, just forget it.

The sudden i Subaru is actually understandable, otherwise there will be bugs in the subsequent plot or the portrayal of Natsuki Subaru may be insufficient. The insufficient miasma of the witch will weaken Rem's hostility and save Natsuki Subaru from dying a few times, but maybe because of this 486 cannot see the invisible big hand.

It's very well written. Among so many fan fictions, this one is the best.

Love

At present, I feel that the original plot is more complex. The addition of bug-like abilities does not change the direction of the plot much. I look forward to the future development.

A strange character and a golden finger whose meaning is currently unknown [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]

After reading Chapter 49, I feel that Beatrice should be the heroine, and the protagonist's character and Goldfinger (I don't know if it is original, I seem to have seen Goldfinger in the same book) is quite handsome, but from the introduction, I thought it was someone who doesn't take pressure, but um, I feel that I am following the main plot throughout the whole process. I feel quite pressured by the main plot haha ​​orz

The character of the protagonist does not feel like the so-called brother-control yandere. He gives me the feeling that he is a person who needs an anchor in his heart. Originally, his parents were also his anchors, but at the beginning of this world, he only had Natsuki Ang. If he develops bonds with other people later, I feel that he will do the same to others. His inner feeling now is that he is afraid of losing.