[Quickly Wear It] It's Over, the Protagonists Are Interested in Me Again

The author has made rapid progress. The description of the emotions in the second world is obviously smoother, and the setting is more interesting. After reading the short stories on the author's homepage, the writing is really good. It can be seen that he is good at sour and sweet stories. I really like this kind of delicate emotions. Moreover, the characters written are generally more three-dimensional. There is no inexplicable love drama, and there is no blind description of how deep the love is, or the daily interactions between them. It is specific and detailed. There is no need to deliberately let the character shout directly, "I like you", but it is slowly revealed from between the lines, making the reader unconsciously feel touched. It feels like the character seems to like Shen Du a little bit. Seeing that in the apocalypse, Gu Xingzhou felt sorry for Lu Linchuan but was helpless towards him. This contradiction is really fascinating. Keep reading and want to see how the two of them will develop in the future. You can read Gu Xingzhou's care and concern for Lu Linchuan. Maybe he doesn't like Lu Linchuan at this moment. It should be regarded as friendship, but who says that the intimacy of friendship is not touching?

My thoughts after watching Two Worlds (personal subjective remarks [laughing]): It's a very good-looking fast-travel novel. The ups and downs of the plot never feel abrupt, and even make people feel that each world is very full. Although it is a fast-travel novel, it allows people to carefully appreciate the completeness of each world, making me feel that every world is alive. As a fast traveler, Shen Du tries his best to play the role of the original owner, but the tenderness engraved in his bones will still leak out unintentionally. For example, the "original owner" has never been a holster in Shen Du's eyes, and Shen Du will never look at the traces left by the original owner with the attitude of a bystander. , He would carefully feel the past/pain of the original owners, and complete the characters of the original owners on the basis of completing the plot nodes, making me feel that these "original owners" were never missing in the plot, but that they had a complete life of their own. When dealing with the protagonist, he will not go into tasks with the attitude of "the protagonist is invincible in the world". He will consider everyone before doing anything, and will even consider the things/roles that will be involved after his "character" leaves, instead of casually "finishing the task and leaving". Shen Du is gentle and tough, and the protagonists are unconsciously attracted to him due to his charming personality. Sometimes I don't know if he doesn't care about himself or is influenced by the original owner. I feel that sometimes doing tasks consumes myself [thinking], but it does not hinder Shen Du. He is really a protagonist that I like very much.

It feels more real than those with a score of 9 or more. Every character has flesh and blood. It feels like JJ's previous novels. It's so beautiful. How can I find other novels in the future? Not enough at all

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot and themes can be great [Blowing Kiss], but I feel like there are a lot of repetitive words, and one thing needs to be repeated several times, which is a bit redundant. It's okay to emphasize it, but it's a bit too much, and the character design is a bit confusing (not referring to the role-playing character of the original owner of Small World), which is the protagonist himself. But the writing is getting better and better and progressive.

It's good-looking. Each world has a relatively long timeline, but each character is well-developed and very individual. The tone of the whole film has a sense of pain. Nothing shocking happens, just some daily things that happen in different eras and backgrounds. But I cried in every volume. It's a bit slow, but the plot won't make you feel bored or sleepy. It took me a day to catch up. I can't believe that I relied heavily on a game and actually read the book for a whole day. All in all, I highly recommend getting into it! ! The second world: "Those who are stubborn will have a bad life." "Brother Chao is lucky, I'm watching over you." "Hurry up"

This Invincible Universe-level book is so beautiful, it's so good that when I read it, I didn't know that anyone next to me was dead. I don't know what to say, but can you all read it? People who haven't read this book will regret it for the rest of their lives. . . And then, I really want to beg you, can you really go and see it? The plot is smooth, the characters are full, and it is very enjoyable to read. No matter what kind of person you are, you will fall in love with this novel after reading it. There are only two kinds of people in this world, those who fall in love with this novel and those who haven't read it yet. . @, Please rate this novel. Next I will use the most direct , the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least inked, the most painful, the most merciless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least grinding, the least The least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most relieving, the most superior, the most energetic, the most enjoyable, and the most brutal. Let me tell you that this book is particularly beautiful. Uh-huh, please watch. This book is really beautiful. The plot is exquisite and the protagonist is very charming and has a very high IQ. The supporting characters are full of flesh and blood. . After reading this one, I am no longer in the mood to read other novels. I beg the author to update 20 chapters a day. I beg God to make this book a hit. OK? So pretty. ,. I wanted to cry when I saw it. It was the first time I saw such a perfect taste in Tomato. . I'm going to fall in love with the author. Author, i love u,.

I've only read the first short story so far, and overall it's pretty good. But there are a few points that make me particularly uncomfortable, that is, I keep reliving the things that the protagonist has done before. I know that the author wants to reflect the difficulty of the protagonist and the pity or apology of the protagonist in the original text for him. It just feels sour, but it is very tiring for people who keep reading it over and over. The words that appear most often in the whole film are probably "He knows, he understands, he doesn't understand, he thinks of it" I hope the second small world will reduce this problem.

Wuwuwuwuwu is so good, but the author why the tumor in front of my chest stopped jumping after I read it [crying][crying] (a bit sadistic), the plot is really great, the structure is very compact, although it is a fast time travel, the world line is very complete, the emotions in the first world are already very delicate, but the emotions in the second world are deeper and smoother, the characters in each world are very independent and distinctive, our protagonist baby is a gentle cat, the wing of salvation and the light of hope. All in all, it's very good-looking and highly recommended. [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

The writing is so good, I thought it was a heartwarming little sweet story, but I didn't expect it to be so sour. [Crying] The first world is like a continuous drizzle, from the meeting to the ending, it is like a dark movie. It feels a bit like the filter of the Twilight Zone. The whole world is moist, and the plot is very deep. In just 30 chapters, the characters are all standing up, and I cried while watching it. In fact, I don't like sadistic stories, but this one is very brittle, because it's just the background of the role played, and the protagonist himself is not that aggrieved.

The writing is so good, it tortures me to death [crying] I feel so sorry for Zhou Chi and I keep crying.

I have finished watching both worlds. Both worlds are a bit sadistic, but not pure sadistic. The plot is good, the writing is good, some of the emotions described are very delicate, and some words always poke me. It is very good. It is very beautiful and not brainless. It has a plot, the description is very three-dimensional and charming, and the extras are well written. All those people have said it. The protagonist is not that kind. Just ask him to play the role, but the protagonist is not cold-blooded. He will have some thoughts of his own, and then he can empathize, but not deliberately. Go away from being pretentious. The system doesn't have any mentality. It also makes people feel good. The description is very good and the writing is okay. The second world is better than the first one (I don't mean to say that the first one is not good-looking). Anyway, they are good-looking.

Shou is a heartthrob, very lovable, everyone loves him, the whole chapter is very healing, and no one abuses Shou at all! Show me quickly! Hahahahahahahahahaha 😃!

The essence of a fast-travel novel is its fast pace, which means that it takes very little space to write a wonderful story, which tests the author's control and arrangement of the narrative. The writing style is adequate, but the narrative is lengthy and lacks dramatic conflict, making the writing and character development as dull as boiled water. Secondly, as a label, Shura Field has too weak a presence in the article and is not refreshing enough. The description of the protagonist is very normal. He is not an embarrassing description of an older baby or uncle Weibao. He is a delicate and gentle young man. The protagonist travels through the world based on character design + missions, and only reveals a little of his soft inner core without breaking the plot. Therefore, some sadistic plots cannot be avoided (I personally don't think it is sadistic, I just regard it as the protagonist's job, it may vary from person to person). Believe me, he is really cute... Overall, we can look forward to a more complete and better story from our dear author!

Boss, I'm here to comment! ! It's the one that most resembles him after my Bai Yueguang novel The Fall, it's so delicious! ! ! It feels so special and alive! ! ! I really like the protagonist's character! ! ! I just like this kind of gentle feeling! ! ! ! Boss, you must keep writing! ! ! I will always support you! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The author is very good at writing a protagonist who doesn't care about his own life or death, but has a kind of divine compassion, is sober and intelligent. I have wanted to have a character like this for a long time, and the author really got this attitude of living toward death right. Come on, just use restrained writing to write a sadistic story like this T_T

In addition to the strange background of the mission, I found another good-looking novel. The teacher's writing is also very good, and the characters are not completely occupied by the cerebellum. I like the restrained possessiveness between them so much. My heart beats loudly when I read it, and Xiao Shen's identity in the first world is also very distressing!

It's natural for a person like Shen Du to be a millionaire. The plot is so exciting that it takes off. It's beautiful and clever. Don't miss it if you pass by. Come and watch it! It's been a long time since I've read a novel, because the ones I found either didn't have a full plot or the emotional lines were hasty and weird. This one was just right, with beautiful writing, the right atmosphere, a delicate plot, and smooth emotions. The author is on time with two chapters a day compared to the time clock, and has thirty or forty chapters in a small world. It is not difficult to catch up on time, and there is little need for maintenance (worrying about maintenance)

It's so beautiful. The character design has changed from a single one-sided one to a complex three-dimensional one interpreted by the protagonist. The second world can be said to be a qualitative leap, and the writing style has been significantly improved. The character design of the protagonist is also very touching. I hope I can continue writing. I wish it a great success [cry] [like]

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I have been crying [crying], why are there so many little bitter melons [crying]? It's really good to read. The only drawback is probably that it's not finished. [Blows a kiss] I don't know if I've read any more after reading this book. . . Maybe because it just came out, there are very few reviews, and the ratings aren't very high, but it's really good to watch. . . It's so delicious. I don't know how to describe it. I feel that the author's emotions are expressed very well. It doesn't seem right to say this. Anyway, after reading each story, my tears seemed to be free. I even doubted whether I had tear incontinence (›´ω`‹ )[face covering][asking for more explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

This book is very interesting, the pace is not fast, and the length is not too long, but it gives people a very daily feel. Anyway, it is very interesting (I am running out of words). Now it is time to read the third world. When I read the text, the text cannot torture me or make me cry, but every time I read the end I always cried during the extra episode. It was like opening a valve, and the tears flowed. It was very dull but very touching. The acting skills of the protagonist were also very good, and the characters were very vivid. Everyone was very good (except for a few). In short, I really recommend watching it. ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა I've also finished watching the third world. I personally don't think it's very exciting, but after watching it, my heart was blocked and I felt uncomfortable. Everyone got the best ending, except Chen Mo (Shen Du). Again, I highly recommend watching it. I have finished watching the fourth world, not to mention the knife. This world is very long, but I like the characters. I feel that this world has risen to a higher level. From Lu Linchuan's self-blame in the second world, people are afraid, resentful and dependent on him, to the self-interest of people in the fourth world. Anyway, I like the character of the madman very much. It is very refreshing and interesting. I will watch the fifth world immediately. I am looking forward to -ing

After watching the first four small worlds, I think the second one is the best. Dr. Lu is still too authoritative, and you can feel the deep emotions and the complexity of each character. At present, the plot is fast-paced, but I always feel that the story could be more complete. I see Shen Du's subtle changes to the original owner and the people around him, giving them better choices. I hope Shen Du can consider it for himself. Thank you to the author, it's still very beautiful [blowing kiss]

I like this kind of protagonist, who does tasks quietly and has his own thoughts. He will not follow the original plot. If the character is not broken, he will do some things because of his own unbearability. Moreover, the author has written a new plane, the madman plane. I really like it, I love it very much [Love]

The missionaries will not let them get hurt just because they are the protagonists, nor will they let them do nothing just because this is their plot. People will come first in everything. They don't just see tasks and treat the world as a game, but they see them as human beings. It will hurt and it will hurt (There are too many missionaries who push them into the abyss because of the mission, and there are too many rigidly written rescue protagonists who then go through various compulsions. Whether it is voluntary or forced rescue of the protagonist, the mission is the most important.) The taskmaster is a very gentle person, a person who can solve problems. He minimizes harm in everything he does. He is gentle and considerate. Even if the task may fail and he is asked to choose again, he will still choose the most suitable path. He is a very charming person. Even if the protagonists have a good impression of him, they will not do anything to force the tasker, nor will they ignore the feelings and wishes of others. When the tasker chooses to retreat, they will stop approaching and will not do anything out of the ordinary. It seems that it is not the kind of "you must fall in love with me", but I hope you can see me, consider him, and take his time. It is a very healthy concept of love and mutual respect. It's not a life-and-death plot where you're loved just because of their appearance. The tasker has his own personality charm. I think it's normal for such a beautiful person to be loved. I have always wanted to see this view of love. It is the most comfortable, the best, and my favorite. I hope there will be more and more novels like this. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. I am still a few chapters away from finishing the first world. At first I thought it was a routine article, but later I found out that it was not a traditional routine article. It was really good. There is no bloody misunderstanding, everything is just right. Because the most preferred task will hurt others, choose the least flattering and most troublesome one. I really love gentle people! ! Such a good person should be loved by everyone! If you really love someone, how can I bear to let you get hurt? When you really love someone, you will always consider him from his perspective and not let him embarrass you. Love is restraint and measure, not blind possession. This book has this view of love, and I like this view of love the most! Totally my ideal book!

I cried so much after watching the first world. I strongly recommend this book to babies who are not afraid of abuse. Do you know, your writing is like an onion, forcing tears, and I can't control it at all. I don't think I am a person with a low tear point, but I really can't hold it anymore. Why doesn't the tumor on my left side stop jumping? Why does my saliva flow out of my eyes? It was also crashing, as if there was a hole in the sky, and the sea water was pouring down from above. Why did eating the food cooked by the teacher feel like crying and crying? When my chest was tight and uncomfortable, someone gave me a piece of tiramisu. I continued to cry while eating, as if there was some kind of inducer. I was so tortured that I wanted to die, but I couldn't help but read it. Come and see my book friends! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

The emotions are delicate and plain, but there is a slight sense of sadness integrated into it. This feeling is the most gripping. I stood at the end of the story and looked at the ending of this person's death. I had obviously made preparations but still couldn't control myself not to feel sad for him. This is a novel that can stimulate my emotions. I think it deserves a higher score. I don't judge the author's writing style, but the emotions and plot are undoubtedly fascinating. Thank you to the author for letting me see their story. I hope they can still live a normal life in another world.

The writing is very good. It is not simply an imitation of the original character. The writing is very heart-wrenching.

Nice! I really like the character creation in the work. I can confirm that the protagonist is a normal adult with a sense of boundaries, processing ability and a stable mentality (the weakest emotional aspect has also grown steadily!). This is something I rarely see in other books. It is like finding gold. The settings of the protagonist and the system are simply interspersed and communicated in the performance of the entire world without any sudden drama. It is a character who will feel warm and happy when you look at it. In addition, the shaping of other people in each world and the small settings of the world view can be seen that the author wants to make it more perfect. The author writes everyone as a "human", I like this very much! In addition: I saw what the author said and found that when the teacher posted a world, he would also start to think about the next world. It was really amazing! Now that I have seen the fairy tale wizard, I am looking forward to the development of the story and what new stories there will be in the next world! ☺️

Generally speaking, every plane has its own characteristics. Personally, the Infinite Flow Plane of Madman is my favorite so far. A'Du has always emphasized the importance of voluntary choice. Maintaining the madman's somewhat amusing persona, but always saving people from fire and water, unwilling to stay on the stage, it deepened the connection between the madman and the abyss, fixed the anchor point, brought new life to the abyss and the world, let the players know how to resist, and also allowed Pei Zhixu to slowly reduce his resistance to the abyss, choose to stay, and choose his own approach. Behavior begins with awareness. The Abyss's confession is also exciting to watch. It has been saving itself. It behaved childishly and attracted A'Du, a fast traveler. It was dissatisfied with his departure, but was surprised and grateful for his rescue.

Each world is well written, the people in it are flesh and blood, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. The protagonist does not put himself aside and watch the suffering of others, but treats the people around him from the bottom of his heart. I really like this. I cry every time the world ends. It's so good. I really can't get enough of such a good novel. Can you give me more than a million words to scare me to death [crying]

Oops, I can't help it. My eyes were swollen from crying in the first world. It's so beautiful. It's not pure cruelty, not pure sweetness. It's very sour. When I think back, it's Shen Du's words "I will pay attention." I can't help it. I can't find another book on Tomato that can be compared with this one and has similar themes. This is the one that I didn't cry after reading [Like]