Golden Treasure: Travel Across the Movie World to Find Gold

The writing style is okay, but the writing is too slow and too weak; the mountains are high and the road is far, we will see you again if we are destined

The writing is okay, but there are too many things besides the plot. Before the starting point, there was also a book called Space Eating Gold, but the writing was not written in ink. You can go and have a look. I forgot the title of the book. The author was rained heavily last night.

The writing is good, quite real, and very engaging. I also saw the author revising it several times due to ratings and comments. But in fact, it is not necessary. Tomato ratings are never accurate. You only need to pay attention to how many people are watching it. This is the real thing. If there are few people watching it, it is a bad book. I'm not afraid that your writing will be long, as long as you can continue it. It's not like a novel without tens of millions of words. I think most people like me are the ones who think your writing is good and won't criticize your writing. And those who don't see much will make a lot of comments. A good writer must be someone who firmly believes in his or her work. I hope you will become an excellent writer

There is a girl named Pingting who is a slow-moving guest, and all the people in the mortal world are in love and singing. In the past, I was crazy, greedy and drunk, but now I bow my head and guard the tobacco. I used to walk on Mazhangtai Road, but now we are weaving brocade shuttles together. Wash away all the glitz and never regret it, the deep love is stronger than the mountains and rivers.

The writing is quite good, and the plot design is also good. I don't think there is anything wrong with your idea, the author. Writing a book means that everyone is different, but everyone is the same. Why should I read yours? Of course, more people will watch it if your writing is better. There is nothing wrong with changing the plot of the original movie, as long as you can come back to it. Come on, make more books.

It's very good-looking, the plug-ins are not too big, and the protagonist has a brain. Various descriptions of that era are very consistent with my impressions, and nothing is too out of the ordinary. And I have indeed watched this movie back then, and I am also very curious about how the author would write it? This kind of long-plot narrative is rare in today's fast-paced novels. Now it takes ten years to write one chapter of the novel. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow, with only one chapter a day.

In order to claim the ring, I made such a long dumpling with vinegar [Wronged][Wronged][Wronged]

Well, the plot design is very exciting, I can't stop watching it.

There are all plug-ins, and they are still cowardly.

Very good, I like it, five stars!

It's okay, I have my own ideas

It's logical, not just made up.

Reminds me of a novel I read many years ago

Give me some encouragement, come on.

There is less real-world drama Time Travel has too much plot and is a bit slow.

It feels good, but the pace is a bit slow

Very pretty, but a little less beautiful [blowing kiss][love]

It's very good, the best book I've read in the last month or so.

It's good-looking, and it's not about fast time travel, but about the daily life of time travellers.

It's well written and has no obvious issues.

It's nice to see. It doesn't follow the plot, but just uses the world view.

Very well written and highly recommended.

Five stars for encouragement. Are you planning to write one world to the end? You've already written 400,000 words, and you haven't even reached the beginning of the story in a single world.

This style is okay

Very nice! You can take a look

Not bad, the pace is slow,

No pictures, no high scores [laughing]

It's okay, the author still has room for improvement

Why is the score so low? It's not bad after reading it.

I'll give you five stars first, it's not bad for the time being.