Forced to Drop Out, I Bound Myself to a Check-In-to-Become-Immortal System

The density of stalks is quite high, keeping up with current events. The points I personally care about are that there are too many male characters, and there are some ambiguous/ridiculed descriptions by third parties, which are very subtle. There is a lot of pen and ink in the early stage of the family line, and the depiction is quite good. The original male protagonist survived until the end, but his presence was not that strong, which was okay.

The rhythm is great and smooth, the character creation is very smart, and it's also very interesting, but the traffic is not very good 😢 I just got it now, it's a pity for the author After reviewing it, I may know why the traffic is not good. The author's words are too old, which looks very uncomfortable in the current "female awakening" trend. Many descriptions and plots will make people feel uncomfortable, but the rhythm is really good, and the heroine and mother characters are also very attractive. This is the reason why I keep reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard to strive for a big hit in the next book 👍 Editor 2: In the later period, when writing about the competition, the author wrote a lot of "brainless" remarks, including making pornographic rumors and denying the heroine's strength. He also particularly likes to start fights, maybe because he wants to arouse the readers' emotions, but in fact, when the readers are angry, they may not necessarily be slapped in the face because you continue to write, but they may also leave with bad reviews... The time-traveling Long Aotian also lived until the finale, and even caused the hookup woman to target the heroine. In short, I really couldn't stand it anymore, and it stopped at around 100 chapters. Hey, the author should pay more attention to the next book.

It's nice to read, but for my habit of following serialized articles for readers, two months is too short. I came too late. I didn't read this book until after it was finished. As for the problems reflected in other book reviews, I think they don't have much impact. This book does not have the content of female awakening, but the author is also very particular about the words he uses. Jealousy is changed to jealousy (os: I actually don't support the substitution of words, because I think there are their stories behind the two words of jealousy, and the two words of jealousy carry the fate of many ancestors. However, it is understandable to replace the word "female standard" with other words) There are curse words in this book, which I would be very concerned about in other books, but I think the author's writing makes the other characters more three-dimensional and the background more distinct. The author's writing is very social. The heroine is a grassroots counterattack style + a behind-the-scenes style. A grassroots counterattack requires people who look down on her, and then reverses it. If it is not allocated well, it will lead to top-heavy. I think those plot arrangements are actually just right, and the heroine's solution also depicts the heroine's interesting soul and strong strength. The heroine has the advantage of appearance, has a single arrow, no cp, and there are random jokes among friends.

It's good to watch. Don't be discouraged, the author. The poor data of this article may be due to the subject matter. Immortal cultivation articles don't seem to be too popular now, but you wrote it really well. The protagonist's character is very good, the system treasure is also very cute, the interaction between them is very warm, and the pace of the story plot is also good, which makes people want to follow it. Nowadays, many high-scoring novels stop reading after halfway through or even shorter. The content and routines are homogeneous and boring, but yours is great. The story progresses layer by layer without repetition or routines. People are always curious to know what will happen next. The unconditional love of family members is really beautiful, and some of the male characters who have a crush on the heroine also have their own characteristics. In fact, it would be nice to see some emotional pull. It's a pity that we only order until we order, so we don't get much candy. Overall, I like this book very much. The author must quickly regroup and write new articles to make a lot of money. Come on, come on, support you.

Damn, your novel is really great! The plot is fresh and not bad, the writing is very comfortable to read, and the characters in the book are very vivid and three-dimensional. The funny moments are just right, making it very relaxing to read; even if it contains depressing and sad plots, it will not make people feel panicked, uncomfortable and depressed, and the reading experience is particularly great. This book is like a good jade covered with a layer of dust. The quality itself cannot be said. Its lack of popularity is simply due to lack of exposure and the fact that it has not been read by more readers. I especially understand the frustration and internal conflict you feel when you write a whole novel with full enthusiasm, but not many people appreciate it. This feeling is really uncomfortable. Even though the ending was a little rushed, it was still a great ending overall. Being able to persist in writing the entire article out of love is already super awesome. Such a high-quality work should not be buried. I sincerely hope that your novel will be discovered by more people soon and become popular!

I have read the whole book. Let me tell you my truth. It has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the material is very novel and combines the cultivation of immortality and reality. This is what I like most. It is very attractive. This is a small innovation. I have not seen similar books in other books. It is more realistic (I prefer innovation and more realism). The disadvantage is the positioning of the heroine. In fact, I really hope that the heroine can join the combat academy, and the other students are also very strong, with a sense of competition, and occasionally do missions to save people. In fact, I personally think that the heroine is still quite strong. The ending is a bit rushed, and the identity of the system at the end is a bit fragmented. However, it is not without any foreshadowing. I hope there will be more foreshadowing at the beginning or at the front. I hope there will be more character descriptions of the supporting characters, which will make it more interesting (I quite like the policeman with canine teeth, he is so handsome) Generally speaking, I like this book very much. The main reason is that it combines the cultivation of immortality with the academy. It also whets my appetite. It also expands the scope of the spiritual roots of cultivation, not just those spiritual roots. This is considered an optimization! It's really well optimized. I was dissatisfied with the world of cultivating immortals before. Keep up the good work, author! Just this little innovation. I like this innovation so much.

Personally, I really like the heroine's character. I can't bear it (¯へ¯). It's so cool. The slap-in-the-face plot doesn't drag on. Maybe I'm too strict. I don't like the second brother's family very much, but I really like the heroine's baby.

I really like this book. The subject matter is very novel. I have never seen anything like this before. In fact, the writing style is quite good. I don't need to underestimate myself. However, the ending is indeed very rushed. I thought I could read it for a long time. 😢 😢 I have to find another book to read. . . What I personally don't like is that many men around the heroine fall in love with the heroine inexplicably. Although it is indeed love at first sight, it can also be seen that the author wants to write about the female treasure's heartthrob attributes, but too much would be a bit fake, so I personally feel that it is fragmented and a bit regretful. But overall it's pretty good-looking, very humorous, quite fun and funny [laughs][laughs]

It's quite good to watch, the length and pace of the book are quite good, but the ending was unexpected, so I give it four stars. It would be nice if there were some new extras. I could write a second part simply by writing about what happened after the ascension. Maybe I'm not used to reading all-female novels. There aren't many female characters in this book. I just like to read this kind of ambiguous novel, where a man has a crush on a woman but the woman is not attracted to her. The female protagonist is the strongest. I feel like there are more and more all-female Tomato novels. I don't like it very much. I feel that the male-to-female ratio is 1 It's better than 1. It's a lot less satisfying for all women. I like the kind of male characters who get what they ask for. They are obviously talented but are defeated by the female protagonist. The male characters are chasing the female protagonist but can't catch up, and the gap is getting wider and wider. This is the strongest female protagonist I want to read.

I go! It's really beautiful! I declare that it can be listed as one of my favorite novels, and the character design of Shen Zhou really pokes me (I declare that you are my mother-in-law os). It is a swordsman with a sense of contrast and a sense of life.