Please Continue to Occupy Me Today, Lord God.

In this book, the three concepts of language logic are all online, but they are not too outstanding. In short, there are no major shortcomings. As for why this book has so few readers, I only saw this book on the recommendation list after logging out. In other words, Tomato will recommend some high-quality novels to logged-in users that he thinks are good. Well, in the end I hope the author can continue the story and make the male protagonist normal and not like some crazy guy. There is nothing to say about the three views of the protagonist of this book. As for why only a few thousand people are reading it? This is because of Tomato's recent god-making plan.

Next, I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, cleanest, most frank and magnanimous, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up flowery rhetoric. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be sophisticated, and does not add unnecessary cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that it does not contain any empty words, so neat that it does not contain any nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and it is so popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without being procrastinating. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

It's delicious 😋, not bad, there's nothing to say about the plot, the author is great, I want to see the protagonist lose his vest! At present, it seems that Ning Yuan has discovered the identity of the protagonist. I love to watch Ning Yuan's plots. Please write more about when Ning Yuan's eyes can be cured. Of course, I also love to watch Ye Xili's plots. After all, who doesn't like the fragrant, soft, glutinous, sweet, silly and cute rich lady? [Sneaky smile] [Like] [Love] Support Ye Xili to grow up and Ning Yuan to become smaller [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] Of course, you know the author, I want to see Shura Field, when will the fight start, I want to see the river of blood, and can you give the protagonist a knife? Also, the author, it seems that I really need to discipline you, why are you only updating twice in one day [smile][smile][smile] Write quickly, it's not enough. In short, the author, keep up the good work [love][love][love]

It's very interesting. Let me talk about the character of the protagonist in the book. In my opinion, the protagonist is the kind of person who is relatively indifferent to the outside world (part of the reason is that the narration in the book focuses on psychological activities, mainly objectively describing what the protagonist did, and less describing the character's actions and environment in paragraphs) but the kind of person who longs for relationship connection in his heart, because of his cover-up for Ning Yuan's suspicion. He is very clumsy, even to the point of being clumsy (not in a derogatory sense, because the performance in the article is very interesting and can be regarded as a characteristic). He has many ways to get rid of suspicion, but from my perspective, he chose the one that he is least accustomed to and the most clumsy. From this, it can be seen that he still longs for this kind of relationship in his heart. Also, this is just a small suggestion. Given that the description of action in the book is relatively sparse, the protagonist's subconscious body reaction during the dialogue will be very abrupt. (Description of finger twitching during the test) In summary, the feature of this book is that the description of the protagonist's own life is relatively sparse (it may be a bit strange to say this, because the protagonist's life seems a bit thin), the highlight is the interaction and game with the girls (?), The redemption line is buried relatively deep (actually not too deep, according to the setting, but it is the most reasonable), and the plot progresses slowly and smoothly. Very good work, keep it up [Love]

I didn't expect it to be so delicious😋 The supporting characters are delicious🥰, the protagonist is delicious😇, the writing is delicious😘, the plot design is delicious😃, the pace is a bit slow😡, the comment area for readers to discuss the plot is also delicious🤓, and the author is also delicious😍 This is the second time I have read your book. The first time was the one by the comic artist. I stopped reading it after reading dozens of chapters. I thought it was not to my taste. I didn't have high hopes at first, but... I didn't expect you to be able to write it to this point! Not to be abstract, to be honest, except for the slow pace, I personally don't think there's anything bad to say about it, but since it's written about multiple women, it's understandable. Only one female protagonist knows about the protagonist's identity, and she should be the calmest one after knowing it (after all, there are speculations) In short, I think there is nothing you can do better except the update speed. I am very picky and this is one of the few novels that I can praise. Of course, if you fail later, I will also come to support you. After all, I am best at popping champagne.

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M14 waist shots would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

Next, I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, cleanest, most frank and magnanimous, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up flowery rhetoric. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, and does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple and unpretentious. , The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that there is no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so frank that no reservations are hidden, and so popular that it is popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and frank without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without paving the way. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

It's still very good to read it now. The overall plot does not have much ups and downs, it is much smoother, but it is also very attractive. The character setting is also very good. The girls that have been developed now include: the soft and waxy young lady who lacks independent opinions, and the one-eyed girl who was persecuted by her native family and wanted to commit suicide but was saved by the male protagonist and gradually opened her heart after getting along with her. If there are multiple female protagonists, I hope the author will accept them all, instead of making them into multiple ambiguities, but only accept one.

I still think it's more interesting. It's not the kind where the male protagonist helps this or that on campus, and then develops a relationship. The main mission of the male protagonist is to make money and help other people by the way, and then he doesn't wear a vest and no one takes it off. Ning already knows, and Ye is not too late, and has been testing. In summary: the main plot of the male protagonist is to keep a distance from female friends, not to engage in ambiguity, and to ensure the development of young girls. There are no superfluous descriptions like water words, but the meaning can be expressed well. Although the expression is not immersive, it will not make you want to jump to read. I don't like to follow the updates, there are too few and I'm not fully entertained, so I wrote this after I suddenly wanted to write a book review after reading it for a while. I forgot some of the content and couldn't write more content.

Good looking From what I can see so far, there is nothing sinister about it. The only shortcoming may be that in order to promote the plot, the author has put a lot of effort into some things, but it is only limited to promoting the relationship between the characters. For example, going to the school of one of the heroines through exchange students, and then naturally having certain exchanges offline. After all, wouldn't it be fun to discover a book like this? [Laughing evilly] And this kind of writing method often appears in other novels, there is always "the way of heaven" [laughing evilly] Both the writing and the plot are very good, you can watch it with confidence

This is a typical light-hearted Western fantasy romance novel. It is updated diligently, and the chapter titles are very dramatic. It mainly focuses on the ambiguous pull and Shura field scenes. It is a decompressing read and a meal, and it is very suitable for passing the fragmented time. The focus of the story is on the emotional entanglement between the characters, and the emotional conflicts are intensive, which can quickly arouse the reading mood. However, the foundation of the world view is relatively weak, the plot is obviously clichéd, some plots rely on misunderstandings to advance, and the character creation is more templated. It is more suitable for readers who pursue a sweet love atmosphere and do not delve into rigorous logic.

I caught up with the big army at once, meow, it's so strong, meow, the writing is really good, meow, are you a boss? Is Sweet Potato a cat lady? Can you meow? Can you keep updating? Must be alive, meow. Otherwise, there will be no cat food to eat, meow

Comprehensive evaluation: 9.4-9.6 (Above five stars) Character creation (protagonist group): 9+ (top tomato) Character creation (generalized protagonist group): 8+ (first-rate) Character creation (non-protagonist group): 5.5 (No style) Plot design/setting arrangement: 10 (enjoyed) Worldview perfection level: 7 (reality-modification) Personal influence: 5 (tied calmly)

So far, I have a good impression. Many female protagonists are carefully portrayed. Each character has his own story. The emotional line is relatively delicate and natural. It is very comfortable to read. Five-star support, looking forward to future development [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's good to watch, and it's rare to see a sweet romance work with outstanding writing. There is no abuse, no quarrels in the book, and no bloody conflicts. The author's narrative rhythm is soothing, the writing is delicate and gentle, and he is good at capturing subtle emotional fluctuations. There is no need to rely on intense plot to create tension. The character creation is natural and vivid, the emotional progression is smooth and reasonable, and there is no abrupt industrial saccharine. The white space is just right, and the atmosphere is long and distant. The skillful writing technique makes this sweetness real and palpable, leaving you with a warm feeling after reading it. It is a high-quality sweet article worth reading calmly.

Support Diguo, I didn't expect Digua to write this kind of thing... If you ignore Soul Crossing, it is indeed a pretty good book. For example, the character of the protagonist is not bad, not annoying, the character design and description are also very good, and there are many personal items, so it can be read as a fun novel. It would be better to say that soul penetration is not a poisonous point. Perhaps the public's nerves have become more sensitive in recent years... There are many questions: First, is the relationship with Ye Xili progressing too fast? Even if she is silly, she won't become like this in just a few days. Second, there are too many big hands of God, the protagonist is pushed around by things, and the plot is too blunt. Anyway, cheers sweet potatoes!

I like Ning Yuan more and look forward to Ye Xili's yandere mode. I usually prefer the first female protagonist to appear, but Ning Yuan in this book gave me a different feeling. I personally think that the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the heroine easily discovers that the protagonist is also an "ordinary person" in the same world. There are obviously many ways for the protagonist to avoid being discovered. After all, controlling other people's bodies is too anti-scientific. However, the protagonist's cold treatment makes me feel weird (the identity is not exposed naturally enough, and it feels like having read the answers to the questions). Isn't this similar to using the system to conquer the heroines? (I think it's about the same), but then again, if I don't guide you, what are you looking at? [Laughs] (Opposition opinions are welcome, I hope my experience can give me some advice, don't scold me [cry] [cry] [cry], I'm sorry)

It's a good novel. In fact, from an objective point of view, there is nothing poisonous about it. Originally I was a bit hesitant to read the comment section. . . It's pretty good-looking, there's nothing unpleasant about it, and it's enjoyable where it should be. To put it simply, this book is actually about rescuing girls. It seems that it can open a harem (which is very nice), because the two heroines in the latest picture can accept each other.

It was originally recommended by the author of another book. I read it with the intention of giving it a try (reading one hundred and thirty chapters in one go). It is really interesting. The main thing is that the protagonist admits his mistakes and there is no inexplicable battle of wits. I like this book very much, but the author is too slow.

The plot of the novel is getting more and more intense, which makes me very excited. The author's writing becomes more and more fluent, and every plot makes me feel immersed in it. I hope the author can continue to maintain his creative enthusiasm and bring us more wonderful stories!

It's a very good book. It happens to be my favorite kind of novel with a relatively relaxed atmosphere. It doesn't feel like I'm always immersed in a depressing environment (bro only surfs the Internet to relax, and suffering and hatred are not suitable for me)

It's pretty good. I searched through the library for a long time before I found your book. If the traffic hadn't been cut, your book would probably have received nine points with more than 1,000 reviews. I read another book a long time ago, which is very similar to yours, but it has been discontinued because it was broken. The writing is 8.5, The plot is 7.5 (Mainly because I have read similar books, so it is low), the characterization is 8, and the logic is 9. It is a book that can be maintained (I hope it will not die in the end).

It's quite good, and the updates are stable, usually two chapters a day. So far, I've only asked for leave once, and occasionally it's a chapter once or twice [laughs] I won't comment on the others. I looked at it and felt that other people's evaluations of the writing and content are complete enough [laughs] [laughs] [laughs]

It's very comfortable to watch (in terms of rhythm? In short, it feels like yes), and it doesn't have any AI flavor. It's very civilized to cook it in the ancient way. I rarely equal a book, and there are only two or three books among the hundreds on the bookshelf... Teacher, it's not enough, meow. For you, I turned on the tomato notification permission to remind updates, love you meow

I have successfully read the fourth book of Sweet Potato. Do you feel that the writing style is different from the previous one? Give five stars in advance to help sweet potatoes

Next, I will use the most upright, straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, cleanest, most frank and magnanimous, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not piling up flowery rhetoric. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be sophisticated, and does not add unnecessary cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that it does not contain any empty words, so neat that it does not contain any nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and it is so popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and candid without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without being procrastinating. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

I can read it, I've tasted it, it's a little poisonous, but it's not considered poisonous, it's not poisonous at all. Who knew you were looking at tomatoes? And when the author dresses up as a woman, I will definitely change it to five stars. When the time comes, just kick me and let me change it.

It looks good. I recommended it several times but I was dissuaded by the name and rating. I really didn't want to watch it anymore. I looked at it and found it to be very good-looking. The characters are well portrayed. But the author, have you forgotten that the protagonist has a sister? Why is there no plot? [Thoughts]

I didn't expect that I was an acquaintance of the author. [Note] Your book "Tokyo Reincarnation" is really good. I stayed up late to read it. It is one of the more distinctive light novels I have read on Tomato. To be honest, the competitiveness of light novels on Tomato is too low. It is normal for the low ratings now. My impressions of this book so far: I have read about 20 chapters, but I have not seen the specific plot direction of this book. If it is a love literature like the previous "Transfer", then who is the heroine? What is the meaning of the character Hua Lian? Is she a loser? [Inquiry], if only the male protagonist saves various girls, multiple female protagonists would be okay. The writing is okay so far, there is no exciting plot, but I can still watch it. So the author cheers up [top post] [learned]

When I read Chapter 96, I had a general understanding of this book. First of all, the author's writing style is very good, the psychological description is quite sufficient, and the plot is not procrastinating; secondly, the content is more relaxed and not depressing, which is more in line with my taste; however, this book has a big problem: there are many jokes in the two-dimensional and tokusatsu circles, especially Kamen Rider, if there is no People who have been in contact with it will have an inexplicable feeling when watching it, but this has no impact on me. As a relatively senior knight chef who has also dabbled in two-dimensional animation to a certain extent, I can also tell you with certainty that there is nothing wrong with the author's jokes. If you can understand it, you can have fun!