The Outcast: This Night Watchman Is Too Cautious

I've wanted to see a collaboration between Under One Person and Ace Censor for a long time. I'm going to tell you that you must finish it. As long as you write it, I'll follow it.

Ye Yan doesn't do performance art, and his personality is not like treating the banner demon, he doesn't have the feeling of treating his younger brother, but he wants to be a subordinate and even a little like a slave. Huang Xiaoyan only has irritability without that feeling. Ximen's personality is too different and there is no chick, and the expression of his abilities is different. Ximen is not that cruel but like an ancient niche. The above is a personal opinion, and the difference from childhood is too big to accept, but there are too few novels about Ace Censor, I hope the author can do better in the next book

It's okay, but when the characters speak, can you put double quotes? Don't put double quotes in your psychological description. I can't always tell whether the person is speaking out or thinking in his heart.

The content and plot are connected without any lag, which is okay. Can you put quotation marks when you should speak? He hit me for a while and didn't hit me for a while. I was wondering whether he was speaking his mind or speaking out. It's suitable for listening to novels, but reading novels is really annoying. There are no quotation marks when speaking. Lesson 5 stars are attached here. 😄

Not bad, not bad. The ace censorship is very in line with the styles of those people. It's quite nice.

It looks pretty good, but I just wanted to ask the author when the dominant form will be available? Ye Yan's dominant form is the one that changes at night. I remember it was in the original work. Ye Yan in Ace Censor traveled back to his past dominant form.

The most powerful ace censor is Huang Xiaoyan. If awakened, I personally feel that the Lord of the Night is slightly stronger than the True Lord of Qingyuan Miaodao. I think we can ask Wang Shangshu to join Nadutong to control these three magic pills.

The theme of ace censor is very rare.

It's been a while since I read an Ace Censor fanfic, so I need to write it better.

The plot is interesting and interesting. Please keep writing.