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Except for the emotional part, which is a bit awkwardly written, the other parts are pretty good.

The writing is okay. Many of the bad points in this novel mentioned in the comment section are acceptable in my opinion. It is more realistic. I am referring to the reaction of the protagonist when he travels to another world. We usually read a lot of novels and have a God's perspective. We always feel that the protagonist should be more perfect and smarter. However, in fact, if we go to another world ourselves, we may not do better. The book is good, but there are too few words.

You can write it well. For similar novels, your current creativity, logic, and writing skills are all 👌. Come on, write it, update it ten times a day, and roll it up. In Xianxia novels, don't focus too much on the harem. After all, it's difficult to write outstanding supporting characters.

It's okay. Unlike most mediocre immortality books, this book is still somewhat interesting. At least I can read it. I didn't look carefully to see if it uses AI.

After watching it for a while, I think it's okay. Come on.

The writing is good ~ but the updates are a bit lacking ~ keep up the good work

Okay, I think

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's okay, but the update is too slow.

Love to watch, speed up the update

Well written, not overwhelming.

Okay, worth a look

Okay, okay, support me

Except the word count is a little short, it's still pretty good.

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Not bad, it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power, and it's quite enjoyable to watch.