[Two male protagonists] Xiyu complained that Tang San sent your daughter to Huo Yuhao in order to raise a son-in-law. Just like in the game, it also has a mystery to prevent Huo Yuhao from being controlled by Tang San his whole life. As a result, it passed through the book and became a nine-colored divine phoenix, a soul beast, and was adopted by Di Tian. Following the system mission, he approached Huo Yuhao and became his brother, cutting off all causal connections between him and Tang San. Finally, he became the co-master of the soul beasts, leading Emperor Huo Yuhao and others to ascend to the fairy world!
Reader comments
Personally, I think it's okay. I'll talk about demining first and then the advantages. Judging from the 25 chapters that have been updated so far.
Demining
1. It seems that only Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er are distinguished. I saw Wang Dong, Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er, Tang Wutong, and Tang Xiaoqi (if I remember correctly) on xhs. They are not the same person. They are not very friendly to babies who think they should be looked at separately.
2. It seems to sell the cp between the male protagonist and Huo Yuhao a bit, but it just feels like
3. At present, Wang Dong (currently only Wang Dong) seems to be a villain, similar to a female supporting role? It was said in the middle that Wang Dong was jealous when he saw Huo Yuhao being intimate with the male protagonist.
4. Words such as "beautiful body, delicate voice, delicate hands" appear frequently in the article. This is probably a common problem among men, but it is acceptable (for me personally).
Advantages
1. All the characters that appear are not very OOC.
2. It has original characters and original plot. I personally feel that it is very creative. This book is currently a potential stock and can be pursued.
3. The writing is pretty good, it's not embarrassing to watch, and the plot is pretty good, but it feels a bit fast, and I can't connect at some points in the middle.
Summary
It's a pretty good new article. Those who don't care about the demining above can follow it and read more.
It's very interesting, and I hope you can write a novel called Little Flower Fairy. It has multiple female protagonists and the original male protagonist Kukuru is character-based. There is a novel that you can learn from. The most important thing is that you hope to change the ending of the heroine Xia Anan instead of forgetting the ending of the adventure.
Very, very, very beautiful
It's very beautiful, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes] [likes] [admiration]
Personally, I think it's okay. I'll talk about demining first and then the advantages. Judging from the 25 chapters that have been updated so far. Demining 1. It seems that only Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er are distinguished. I saw Wang Dong, Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er, Tang Wutong, and Tang Xiaoqi (if I remember correctly) on xhs. They are not the same person. They are not very friendly to babies who think they should be looked at separately. 2. It seems to sell the cp between the male protagonist and Huo Yuhao a bit, but it just feels like 3. At present, Wang Dong (currently only Wang Dong) seems to be a villain, similar to a female supporting role? It was said in the middle that Wang Dong was jealous when he saw Huo Yuhao being intimate with the male protagonist. 4. Words such as "beautiful body, delicate voice, delicate hands" appear frequently in the article. This is probably a common problem among men, but it is acceptable (for me personally). Advantages 1. All the characters that appear are not very OOC. 2. It has original characters and original plot. I personally feel that it is very creative. This book is currently a potential stock and can be pursued. 3. The writing is pretty good, it's not embarrassing to watch, and the plot is pretty good, but it feels a bit fast, and I can't connect at some points in the middle. Summary It's a pretty good new article. Those who don't care about the demining above can follow it and read more.
It's very interesting, and I hope you can write a novel called Little Flower Fairy. It has multiple female protagonists and the original male protagonist Kukuru is character-based. There is a novel that you can learn from. The most important thing is that you hope to change the ending of the heroine Xia Anan instead of forgetting the ending of the adventure.
Very, very, very beautiful
It's very beautiful, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes] [likes] [admiration]
There is a poison spot, there is a reborn person
Good, good, good, good, good