At the Beginning of the Break-Up Scene, Why Is the System at the Heroine's Side?

It's very wonderful. There is no fake original male protagonist who turns into a hypocritical villain, and there are not so many bitter and grudge-filled plots. The male protagonist's ideological transformation is very smooth. During the watching process, there is also a slight sense of Shura Field. The emotions are delicate, the fighting is not bad, and the plot is silky smooth. At first glance, it can be seen that the outline has been carefully polished. Yes, the original male protagonist is the template of Xiao Yan, and the current male protagonist is also a typical template of good brothers + Shura field + a transformed spiritual pet, but this template was automatically ignored when I read it. It is very classic, but it is also very useful. In short, compared with a bunch of so-called villain stories and villain villain stories, it is definitely a piece of cake.

The emotions are delicate, and there is also a journey of the protagonist's transformation. The writing is also good. It is not that a bunch of female characters become human-machine later, but they all continue to deepen their feelings. The non-protagonists are also written with quite individual personalities. As for seeing someone saying that the protagonist is a tool, it is obvious that they have not finished reading. Later, after my mentality changed, I started to work hard, and then I said that I had nothing to eat. I probably hadn't finished reading at all. I had already eaten two. They were better than a bunch of 8-point movies. I read them twice, but there were too few. Cheers to the author. I rarely comment, but I can't help but cheer for the author [Adoration]

It's good that the male protagonist has a change of mentality. In the beginning, he hid himself because he had no ability and mediocre talent. When he had the opportunity and ability, he took advantage of the situation, unlike some people who go against the sky and become a turtle inexplicably.

Beautiful, so beautiful! After reading Chapter 173, I still feel that it is too short and I haven't read enough. The emotions in this book are delicate, the plot is comfortable, and the IQs of all the characters are online. Although not everyone is as scheming as in the Gu world, at least 90% of them are normal people. The only shortcoming is the protagonist's fighting system. The protagonist does not have iconic moves or fighting styles like the Anti-Inflammation Buddha's Angry Lotus, Tang San's Blue Silver Coil, and Han Li's Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword. The protagonist's fighting method is very strange and unclear, and there is no unique way to impress people. However, it may be better after the protagonist's formation is complete, but we can't ask too much of the author. The book is already perfect, with everything it should have and the rhythm is very comfortable. If the author writes normally, there will be no problem👌🏻

This novel has great potential. There are not too many far-fetched behaviors in the plot, and they will be explained in the follow-up. The character of the protagonist is also very cautious, and the expressions and movements of the female character are also described very delicately. I don't know if there will be a situation of copying and pasting in the future. Also, as long as the character of the protagonist is not too broken, this novel can still be read. I have read more than 30 chapters so far. Let's see how it goes in the future before I review it.

It's a pretty good harem story, and the feelings towards the male protagonist slowly change as they get to know each other. The male protagonist has a clear goal at the beginning, and wants to grow up and be a passerby, but the sky is falling and the child of destiny will be able to bear it, so when suddenly faced with the heroine's confession, he is immediately alert and avoids it if he can. But this will lose some readers in the early stage. After all, the opportunity has come to hand. Fortunately, I met a rare and decent son of luck. Xiao Yan followed the swordsmanship model and gave the male protagonist the ability to exchange opportunities. The male protagonist also began to change his mentality and become stronger and take responsibility.

Very nice. After reading the thunder quenching body Real male protagonists who have not cheated, kidnapped or robbed are becoming increasingly rare. Grow up together with the original characters, become stronger in a positive direction, and there is no brainless plot where the power suddenly increases. It's rare to see someone complaining about other works, but I really completed it well. I love [Bird Food] The heroines' roles are just right, and the human story design is well described. Even though I had a bad impression of Xiao at first, I also like her. There is no whitewashing, but the actions are in line with the settings that have been told to readers, so the subsequent additions are also very reasonable, plus some small easter eggs and early pitfalls... It is really well written [shy] I would say this is a work that really deserves a score of 9 or above. It's a pity that bad coins are always bad... [I understand] It may be that for many years, culture has preset that there are only two classes of people: masters and slaves. Seizing others and enslaving others has become a factory setting. Anyone who can be powerful and eye-catching will eventually become a dragon. Self-improvement seems to be inferior. It's rare to see a masterpiece, I hope the author can keep it up [Like]

Please support it with 5 stars first. Then, can any book friends answer a few questions for me? How many questions do I have about this type of book? 1Is this book eunuch? 2. From which chapter does the male protagonist change his mentality and accept the female protagonist? 3. What is the character of the male protagonist in the original book? Please anyone who has seen it please answer a few questions of mine. Please [send your heart].

The rating of this book is a bit low, probably because it was suppressed by the studio. It can be seen that the author is an old bookworm who came to write the book. The writing style is good and the narrative is still very coherent. However, the protagonist's attitude towards the heroines changes a bit abruptly in the middle. It was patched later. Overall, it still has a score of 8.

When I read the book earlier, I wanted to see how the protagonist dealt with the trouble. When I saw that the protagonist always wanted to give up the opportunity to Lin Chen, I felt a little bit poisonous. Later, the author changed the opportunity to make the readers accept it. Later, I saw the protagonist's change of mentality because of the master's confession. I really think this book is well written.

The overall writing is very good, the character setting and plot direction are very solid, and the connection of the emotional lines is natural and smooth, not abrupt at all. After catching up to Chapter 80, I have a little question that I would like to ask the author: Are the realm divisions of the demon clan and the human race different and independent settings? According to the order of the nine realms of the human race in the book, the demon clan cultivation corresponding to the spirit king realm should be the fifth level, but the article says it is the fourth level, and the spirit sect realm corresponds to the fifth level. The corresponding relationship is a bit inconsistent, and I am a little confused. I hope the author can help explain it. I wish the author will continue to update steadily and the results of his works will get better and better!

Tsk. How to put it, the subject matter is quite good, but the content is like: "He made her a bowl of brown sugar water. Brown sugar water relieves fatigue. He knows that she likes to drink brown sugar water." There are many such sentence descriptions, as if they are dissecting one thing and showing it to you👀

It doesn't look like it was written by AI, but there are a lot of traces of it that are suspected of being AI. I can't be sure, but even if it was written by AI, it's still pretty good-looking, better than any AI article I've ever read.

The writing is still very nice [Top post] I really like the characters of the original male protagonist and the male protagonist. This makes more sense. They are both the protagonists of the story. How can they be so pretentious and petty? The two heroines have a bit of a weird relationship. The Demon Emperor can be said to have been together for a long time, but the Yunlan Sect is still a bit abrupt. But it doesn't affect [send heart] it's still rare and beautiful

Why don't you give me Lin Xiaodi's entire strategy system [angry][angry][angry]

It's okay. The original male lead Xiao Yan's template is also very upright, and the protagonist is also upright. There is no plot of bitterness and hatred. It's no brainer and there's nothing off-putting about it.

I have read Chapter 70, and I found it surprisingly good. The character creation and emotional changes of each heroine are pretty good, and the description of the hero's character and ideological changes are also just right [Learned]

It's nice to watch, but the main character doesn't talk much. It would be better if he didn't get gagged all the time [laughs]

The system pulled the red line, and then slowly discovered the shining point of the passerby male protagonist. The passerby male protagonist could hardly stand it anymore. He was very good-looking. I caught up on the latest.

It's a very good book. The emotional portrayal of the male and female characters is very delicate, especially the master. But the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read. Please update it.

It feels okay, not too toxic. Asking a question is the part of asking Master's heart. The ice-breaking part that is bound by sect responsibilities and secular concepts needs to be polished more.

It's all quite logical, and the protagonist's change of mentality is not abrupt. Unfortunately, I really wanted to see him run away, but he probably won't be able to run away now.

The inverting system is a good idea

Very good book. . Why is the heat so low?

Not bad, so when will the training be given?

Why can't I give it a 4.5? It's a very innovative book, and it's different from ordinary novels. The transformation of the male protagonist's mentality from hiding from the world to wanting to save the world is well portrayed. The relationship between the sect master and the senior sister is relatively abrupt. It can be said that there is almost no reason to fall in love with the male protagonist. However, it is acceptable for the two people to go from being pushed by the "system" to actively approaching each other. After all, it is easy to write too complex emotional dramas, and it makes sense to blur the process of liking.

A good book, similar to a voice from the heart or a diary flow, but novel and engaging [Admiration] Five stars for the first time

Give me some support [shy]

The opening chapter is pretty good. It's similar to a high-quality novel I've read before. I don't know what will happen next.

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