The Akatsuki Organization Was Created at the Beginning, Shocking the Pirate World

The writing is very good, but when it comes to the twenty kings using tailed beasts, to be honest, Im must know all the history. It would be better to extend the timeline to tens of thousands of years ago or even the beginning of D, so Im doesn't know what situation is more reasonable.

Overall, it's pretty good. It has a little bit of an AI feel, but it's much better than the kind of AI that runs in a mess. At least I can watch it and look forward to seeing it. (Complaining: It may be a problem with the AI, but Orochimaru's move of using the earth flow wall to block Garp and the Knight of God is still a bit abstract. At least it should be replaced by Rashomon.)

It's okay, it's a behind-the-scenes trend, it just exaggerates Naruto's combat prowess. Naruto will not completely crush the pirates until Otsutsuki appears. Before the Sixth Level, his combat power was about the same as that of the pirates, and the average was even worse than that of the pirates. The typical high attack and low defense under Naruto Super Shadow, the pirates at least have both offense and defense.

It's interesting, really interesting (｀Δ´)! I can only say that the reincarnation of the dirty land is too authoritative, Master of Dreams

Do you really not want to change Chapter 43? Im is still alive, you say he controlled the world with the tailed beast? Does he know it himself?

I don't understand the low rating. Anyway, in my opinion, this is the best series among Pirates fans. It's not about how good the writing is, but it gives you a sense of freshness from beginning to end. There is a sense of hot blood, which is very refreshing. If you don't stop and think about it slowly, it can keep your brain in a fresh feeling, similar to I want to see blood flowing into a river [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] I can give you a score of 8-9 for this article. There are also three lightning points. It is mentioned many times in the chapter that it is obviously impossible. It is a bit AI-like. It is really not possible in the early stage. Maybe the author also has this awareness, and it gradually becomes less and less later. Another thing is that the protagonist is too crazy [smile] What normal person can have top-notch weapons without training, and can even tie Orochimaru in the later stage? What do you mean you did nothing in three days and digested the toxins yourself? How do you mean that the Navy is not suspicious at all during this time? And the most important thing is, if you go out to sell information, no one will follow you? Please, you are the first person under the admiral of the navy. How many people pay attention to your position, and you go out to sell information openly without buying a vest? The navy guys are forced to have their brains dropped.

It feels pretty good. It's good so far. At least I haven't put my identity on the surface. The disguise is okay, although it's not completely behind the scenes, but it can still be considered behind the scenes. I hope it won't be exposed later.

After looking at it, the rating is a bit low, but I think it's pretty good.

Shuhuang is really good to read, don't use your brain and let everything take its course.

It looks good. Please update it quickly. I am number one on the list. Give me some face and update it quickly.

It's quite interesting. The combat power has collapsed, maybe it's the AI.

Every time an incident occurs, the protagonist will appear at the scene immediately, so no one will doubt it?

Very beautiful, a bit AI flavor

I think it's interesting that the Kyuubi appears in Luffy's body.

It still looks good so far

Update quickly, ten pictures a day

There are relatively few such settings. Orochimaru is an enhanced version.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Get the Jinchuriki out and let the Nine-Tails Jinchuriki and Luffy PK

Although it's a bit of a mash-up of crappy pirate novels. But it cannot be denied that it is very well written.

Yes, the first time I looked at this setting, it just felt a bit disconnected.

Now that you have opened your eyes, you can accurately position every step.

It's really good

It's okay, it's a behind-the-scenes thing, and the matchup of the sea of ​​fire's combat power is also very reasonable.

Bored, look at this to pass the time!

Yeah, it's good. It's very interesting and fast-paced. It's a story about Akatsuki and the tailed beast messing around in the world of One Piece.

It's so good, I hope there will be more novels like this

The three generals have a little bit of roles

Very good, I like it better.

I think it's really great!