Xu Lin transmigrates to another world and becomes one of Aura's personal demon attendants.
But in three days, Aura will attack the Count's domain, then turn into a violinist, and Xu Lin, as her personal demon attendant, will die too.
Fortunately, Xu Lin awakens a Simulator System. As long as he changes a character's ending or creates a scenario that never appeared in the original story, he can earn Exploration Points and draw abilities from the Naruto world to use for himself.
Xu Lin is lucky: his very first draw gives him the basic Sharingan ability.
"Aura, kneel."
"Huh?"
Aura nearly grinds her teeth to dust, but her knees still bend against her will.
Xu Lin: "Aura, call me Master."
Aura: "Ma... Master."
Oh no, she's going to break the cauldron.
Magic Guild test.
Übel: "What was that magic you just used? It looked so interesting."
Xu Lin: "Magic? What magic? I don't know how to use anything like that."
To the north, in the mine tunnels of the Zaom Wetlands.
Frieren: "Why can you still use magic?"
Xu Lin: "What magic? This is called a magic trick."
Frieren: "Xu Lin, teach me magic tricks."
Fine. I've seen Florian Burial but not much. My favorite original novel is Frilian's "Memoirs of a Late Husband". I skipped the simulation and watched it. The protagonist has a good personality. He will never abandon others when they don't let you down. The emotional scene with Aura made my aunt laugh uncontrollably [face covering] [laughing] Not a virgin, but not unfeeling either.
Well, the beginning is very attractive. It is the only one written from this perspective so far. The plot is quite coherent, and it does not blindly reflect the protagonist's change in the plot from the front. Instead, it uses more delicate side expressions, which is very good.
However, I have read the latest chapter of this book, and I still don't know if there is a female protagonist. It doesn't really matter if there is one. If there is one, just don't overwhelm the emotional line. Come on, author!
In addition, it is so depressing. The author substitutes his own XP into the protagonist, which will make some readers very uncomfortable. After all, not everyone can accept this, and I hope more improvements can be made.
When can we see the plot of Aura being crazily deflated and manipulated by the male protagonist [smile]
The reason for the low scores now is probably that everyone has become accustomed to the fun of fighting. After all, this is a fan fiction?
Although the protagonist's strength is weak and it does not feel good to be restricted by others, Aura's part is really well written. Feelings are natural and budding, and the transition is handled very well [like]
If you like emotional development, it's worth watching. If it's a fast-paced killing, killing, killing, then it's really not suitable.
However, the author can actually improve the protagonist's strength appropriately. As a saying goes, it doesn't have to explode, but it can't really not explode.
After all, the protagonist's current strength is stuck in one? The point that is more disliked by the public is that it is not enough compared to the superiors, but more than adequate compared to the inferiors. But if the protagonist only comes into contact with "top" people, he will be very frustrated.
It feels okay. Some people say it's too frustrating, but it's only about fifty chapters, is it okay? It's quite innovative, but it won't work if you continue to feel frustrated. I hope it feels better later.
Please, please update 10,000 more chapters. It's not enough.
The plot progress in the early stage is a bit slow, and there are some plot flaws [thinking]. Although the progress after Aura left was relatively normal, the chapter where I almost said goodbye was written in a dream [laughs]. The current plot also suits my taste [Like]
It may be a little bit toxic at first, but it gets better and better in the end. This book is not suitable for people who like to be invincible at the beginning and then match up as they please. It is more daily and slow-burning, but it is also very sweet in the later stages. Overall, it is recommended to read.
Come on, it's well written. It's very interesting and not brainless. It made me happy to watch it. Isn't the traffic picking up now? It's enough for 20,000 people to read online. The author must continue to work hard.
Don't be discouraged, author. Tomato is like this. Tens of thousands of people may read it one day, and several thousand people may read it another day. Traffic flow is unstable. As long as you keep writing steadily, the traffic will definitely get better and stabilize. It's really beautiful. I think you still have time to revise the front part. I see that many comments are criticizing the first 20 and 30 chapters. It is true that there are too many poisonous points in the front part, and the writing is also very messy.
Very interesting and worth watching🤓👍
Although, the protagonist's combat power is quite good.
Fine. I've seen Florian Burial but not much. My favorite original novel is Frilian's "Memoirs of a Late Husband". I skipped the simulation and watched it. The protagonist has a good personality. He will never abandon others when they don't let you down. The emotional scene with Aura made my aunt laugh uncontrollably [face covering] [laughing] Not a virgin, but not unfeeling either.
Well, the beginning is very attractive. It is the only one written from this perspective so far. The plot is quite coherent, and it does not blindly reflect the protagonist's change in the plot from the front. Instead, it uses more delicate side expressions, which is very good. However, I have read the latest chapter of this book, and I still don't know if there is a female protagonist. It doesn't really matter if there is one. If there is one, just don't overwhelm the emotional line. Come on, author! In addition, it is so depressing. The author substitutes his own XP into the protagonist, which will make some readers very uncomfortable. After all, not everyone can accept this, and I hope more improvements can be made.
When can we see the plot of Aura being crazily deflated and manipulated by the male protagonist [smile]
The reason for the low scores now is probably that everyone has become accustomed to the fun of fighting. After all, this is a fan fiction? Although the protagonist's strength is weak and it does not feel good to be restricted by others, Aura's part is really well written. Feelings are natural and budding, and the transition is handled very well [like] If you like emotional development, it's worth watching. If it's a fast-paced killing, killing, killing, then it's really not suitable. However, the author can actually improve the protagonist's strength appropriately. As a saying goes, it doesn't have to explode, but it can't really not explode. After all, the protagonist's current strength is stuck in one? The point that is more disliked by the public is that it is not enough compared to the superiors, but more than adequate compared to the inferiors. But if the protagonist only comes into contact with "top" people, he will be very frustrated.
It feels okay. Some people say it's too frustrating, but it's only about fifty chapters, is it okay? It's quite innovative, but it won't work if you continue to feel frustrated. I hope it feels better later.
Please, please update 10,000 more chapters. It's not enough.
The plot progress in the early stage is a bit slow, and there are some plot flaws [thinking]. Although the progress after Aura left was relatively normal, the chapter where I almost said goodbye was written in a dream [laughs]. The current plot also suits my taste [Like]
It may be a little bit toxic at first, but it gets better and better in the end. This book is not suitable for people who like to be invincible at the beginning and then match up as they please. It is more daily and slow-burning, but it is also very sweet in the later stages. Overall, it is recommended to read.
Come on, it's well written. It's very interesting and not brainless. It made me happy to watch it. Isn't the traffic picking up now? It's enough for 20,000 people to read online. The author must continue to work hard. Don't be discouraged, author. Tomato is like this. Tens of thousands of people may read it one day, and several thousand people may read it another day. Traffic flow is unstable. As long as you keep writing steadily, the traffic will definitely get better and stabilize. It's really beautiful. I think you still have time to revise the front part. I see that many comments are criticizing the first 20 and 30 chapters. It is true that there are too many poisonous points in the front part, and the writing is also very messy.
Very interesting and worth watching🤓👍 Although, the protagonist's combat power is quite good.