Douluo: I, the Holy Son of Wuhun Palace, Plan the World

The writing is very good. The character of the protagonist seems to be gentle, elegant, steady and strong, but also has a hint of youthful mentality, which is rare in male videos. It may not be described accurately, but I like it very much. The plot has no flaws so far. The author is also very good. He will basically respond to readers' comments and accept their opinions.

Personally, I feel that the writing is very good. There is no female protagonist yet (I hope there won't be one in the future), and the image of the male protagonist is also well created. It doesn't deviate too much from the original work. Anyway, I am very satisfied with how I see it now😀

It's okay, but I feel that the popularity is very low, and the rating of 400,000 words has not yet been released. The author may need to change the cover, title, or find other methods, like other authors, to solicit readers' comments, urge updates, and add bookshelves.

I have been following it from noon to early morning, and I have intermittently seen the latest chapters updated by the author. So far, it can be considered an excellent work, and the book itself has no bad points. All I can say is that it was a pleasure to see her, so that I could see her swaying all over the bed in the middle of the night.

At present, the overall sense is good, there are no logical problems, the plot and setting have their own innovations, which is very good, and it is considered excellent among Tomato fan novels. But I have some suggestions that I would like the author to refer to: 1. The verbal description of this character is too lengthy in some places. Some things do not need to be explained too much in verbal descriptions when the characters are talking. You can use more psychological descriptions, streamline the language, and let the meaning be more than words. This can better reflect the protagonist's depth and shrewdness as a planner. 2. Reflect the mental growth of the supporting character. The way people interact with each other and their habits will change over time. For example, the uncle-in-law has been with the protagonist for six years. Although the protagonist does not fully trust him, a tacit understanding must have been formed between them. A look or a word, the uncle-in-law should be able to understand it. 3. The etiquette is too thorough. I know that based on the setting of the protagonist, he should be a person who likes courtesy and virtuous corporals, but etiquette is not only divided into high and low, but also close and close. If he has been with the protagonist for many years and still uses etiquette when he first meets him, does it seem too rigid? 4. I hope the author will stick to his passion and maintain his original intention. The above are some of my personal opinions. I hope the author can refer to them. I sincerely hope that this book will get the popularity it deserves. Thank you. @ Salary is 3,800

It's quite good-looking, and the characters are pretty good, but this book seems to have a female protagonist, which I can only say is a bit of a pity. I can't quite accept it. But if you can accept it, you can read it. After all, the writing is good, the plot is quite high, and it is not as mindless as some works.

When I read Chapter 36, I didn't mention much about the protagonist's strength, but he could seriously injure a thousand-year soul beast easily, so he should be considered invincible or stronger at the same level. Moreover, the protagonist has an online IQ throughout the whole process, has plans for doing things, always has his head on his shoulders, is ambitious and filial, and is good to his family. At least he can be considered a normal person in 🍅 () That's all for now. I may follow up after watching it for a while.

This is the best Douluo fan in Tomato

It's a very good Douluo article. I personally feel like I want to continue reading. I really want to keep the book but I'm afraid that the data is not good and the author will abandon the update. The author's chapter of 6,000 words is very satisfying. I feel that it is a bit insufficient. I also hope that there will be more. It is really good to read.

This is a different Douluo story. If you are tired of seeing Douluo fans on the market who open soul rings when they meet and start fighting if they disagree, you might as well stop and see how this resourceful protagonist plays with Douluo Continent.

Yes, I have seen the latest chapter. Overall, it is quite enjoyable. Training Ye Qing is indeed a good point. I am already looking forward to Tang San being humiliated by Ye Qing in the soul master competition [laughing][laughing]

Very good, but will the author have a cp? I won't read some of them.

It's very good. Anyway, I like watching Meow. The author must not run away, Meow. If the score is too high, something will happen.

A very excellent fanfic, the protagonist's IQ is online, the increase in combat power is reasonable, and the author's questions about the original work are also logical.

The writing is really good and well-founded, but I don't know why it is not popular. I hope the author will persevere. Good works can stand the test. Don't be like some people and have their AI ruined.

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and I haven't found any bad points so far (it suits my taste), but I feel that the progress is a bit slow. I don't know how many words to write [what] Sorry, I forgot to change the last paragraph of the introduction. Three spoonfuls, ugh

The text is super good and the character descriptions are spot on. I haven't seen such a good-looking Douluo fanfic for a long time. No, this is the first time I've seen such a good-looking Douluo fanfic. It's not interesting at all.

Not bad, very beautiful

The writing style is very good, but it leans more towards tactics. There is no trace of AI or poisonous points, but there is a lack of fighting. I have read Chapter 65 now and it is all about layout. The one star less is because there are too many words in one chapter, and the short one is more than 5,000 words. If it is divided into more than 3,000 words, there should be 200 chapters now @ salary 3,800

It's only been a few days since I found this book, and I'm almost dying [fear] Can it be saved? If not, where should I go [crying]

Is there a heroine in this book? Who is it?

Not bad, why aren't you active?

It feels ok and logically more self-consistent.

I've never seen this angle before, it's pretty good, and I look forward to the follow-up development.

When I woke up, the sky was falling. Why did I change all my names? [Crying]

This is really good, really good, really good I don't know why so many people give the author low ratings, but in my opinion, there are too many poisonous points in the original work of Douluo Dalu, especially in Poison Douluo. I took so many herbs and didn't even know how to pick two points. I think this book is undoubtedly well-written. Maybe some of you can accept the poisonous points of the original work. Anyway, I can't accept it. I agree with the author here.

I hope it can be more complete, even if it's a little rough, at least give me an ending

A very good book, I like it very much

Nice! Highly recommended! Have a brain! Good writing!

It's nice to listen to, and it's written very intelligently.