[Realistic Middle Ages + Hot-Blooded Legendary System + Only My Own Method + Monster Hunting and Treasure Hunting in the Middle and Late Stage]
Levi had great luck, the kind of luck that comes with a bumper.
Reincarnated in the Middle Ages and became a serf. Fortunately, the legendary system is at hand.
Do you have heavy armor and high defense? Unable to block the assassination sword energy.
You charge with a rifle? Taste my brutal thrust!
You have strength in numbers? Believe it or not, I'm going to plant a Red Moon Demon in your house.
It's your fault if I can't beat you. If I beat you to death, the equipment will automatically belong to me!
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System: Today's lottery, please choose one
[Master of Underworld, Little Blue Bottle, Fireball Technique]
Reader comments
Very well written in most places
For a growth-oriented protagonist, the stakes are not particularly high. Cooperation is necessary where cooperation is required.
There are areas where you need to train yourself to become stronger
At first I thought it was the stereotypical aristocrat who was the bad guy.
Found the Baron to be pretty good
It's not a brainless piece of writing, but there are some things you need to think about.
It's also historically accurate, not a stereotypical medieval witch hunt.
The only thing I think is toxic:
Many equipment and skills are given to the female protagonist. In the early stage, you should give them to yourself first instead of being a licking dog.
Overall, I am still looking forward to seeing the follow-up content, although the current motivation for following updates only comes from the legend.
But just after reading chapter 10, three Riddlers appeared, 2 big and 1 little. The two big ones were Lord Blacksmith and the little one was the main character.
Generally speaking, the writing skills of Internet article writers are generally insufficient. They forcefully use their writing skills to conceal their writings, but they also end up with a thin line of grass and a gray line. The actual impression is not good.
Unless this foreshadowing is related to the main outline, it absolutely cannot be discarded. Without these foreshadowings, the entire novel would be impossible to write. Otherwise, please follow the principle of Chekhov's gun and bury it at any time. I think this can better enhance the look and feel of the novel.
Let me evaluate it first, and then I will read about 30 to 50 chapters to see if it changes my perception of this novel before I review it. I hope that one of the lord's riddle and the blacksmith's riddle can be solved in these 20 to 40 chapters.
The author self-evaluates, briefly introduces the writing ideas, and avoids pitfalls for non-target readers in advance.
[Core Cool Point]: The legendary skills and equipment are used as extraordinary means to crush the realistic medieval natives.
[World Background]: This article will strictly research the relevant historical data of England [around the 12th century], and strive to be true. There will be a large number of historical and humanistic details in the story, and it is not a purely fictional fantasy medieval period.
[Writing style]: Do not pursue medieval language expression seriously, try to be as easy to understand as possible, and adapt to Chinese readers. It does not exclude the use of unique Chinese expressions to create Chinese dialogue humor.
About the character design: All supporting characters have normal IQs and are consistent with their identity and motivation. The female character may have a good impression of the protagonist, but she won't do it mindlessly. There is no distinction between men and women when the protagonist slaps him in the face.
Others: No farming, that's the point. No harem. Not invincible (except duel). Not a virgin, but intending to be a human being. Don't blame yourself. If you do something bad, it must be someone else who forced you to do something bad.
The most intuitive thing is that in the beginning, when the lord sends soldiers to suppress the bandits, only a dozen people can be found who do not compete for military service. This is very consistent with the capabilities of small local lords in the Middle Ages. It seems that the content is really medieval. Of course, take another look
It's very creative and makes people feel like "I want to keep watching it", but I don't understand why so many words "hour" are used in Western Fantasy. If it's the habit of AI, can you replace it with Ctrl+F [awkward laugh]
The theme is novel, I hope to see different professions in different people, the protagonist is omnipotent and there is no point to look at, the method of spawning monsters can be diversified, randomly spawn monsters, or spawn monsters at fixed points, and form a team to fight the boss.
It's rare to see a legendary Western genre. The key is that it's written so well and how true it is. I hope the author will work hard to update more, but be careful about your health. It doesn't matter if you can't explode. I still want to see you finish this book and read your new book.
It can be seen that the author wants to write well, but if you want to describe the Middle Ages, you don't just need to look up information, but you need to have a certain understanding of the language, culture and social form of the time.
I suggest you open a new book.
The male protagonist travels through time and becomes a serf,
Current ability: One choice per day,
Content: Knowing the medieval world, just basic swordsmanship and healing, exposure and healing, forgetting about a woman you don't know, venting your emotions to the ruler of the territory (forget it, this kind of book can actually be recommended, alas, just read the specific content)
It was very enjoyable to watch. Although the main character was in trouble, he didn't kill mindlessly. Instead, he took action at the right time. It was very satisfying. The supporting characters also had their own thoughts and were not stereotyped.
I finished reading it in one go, but I was a bit dissuaded at the beginning, which made me quit every time I read it. Later, because this author's previous works suited my taste, I came back again.
But after I persisted in reading, I read more than a hundred chapters smoothly.
The writing is good, and the upgrade speed is also well controlled. There is no plot like the brainless Long Aotian. The shortcoming is that the number of words is too few.
Very interesting, but updates are too slow
So far, I only dislike the author's slow writing [note], please write faster＞-＜
It's nice. I've also read the author's previous book. It's quite nice.
It's great, come and see it, the author is addicted, don't miss it if you pass by, come and taste it
Overall good, give me a five-star review first
Good food and grass, keep it up [laughing evilly]
Update quickly, you are too slow to update
Hurry up to the big scene
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Okay, looks ok
Okay, okay, if the pace is a little slow, the updates will have to be sped up. If there is not a refreshing point every day, it will be easy to forget about reading.
The writing framework is very good, the system is very powerful, and the plot is interesting
The narrative rhythm is very comfortable, the characters are vividly portrayed, the protagonist is not a virgin, and the supporting characters are not mentally retarded. It is well received.
It's very familiar. Although it's a bit overwhelming, the details and environment are handled well, and the space is okay.
Good Guy is very real, full of ideas, and wonderfully written [Adored][Admired]
=Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
It's similar to beheading in the Middle Ages. Just don't go to the palace like him.
Those who like Western medieval themes, especially if you are the only one who is extraordinary
The writing is very good. I wonder who gave the score. Can it be given more points?
Very well written in most places For a growth-oriented protagonist, the stakes are not particularly high. Cooperation is necessary where cooperation is required. There are areas where you need to train yourself to become stronger At first I thought it was the stereotypical aristocrat who was the bad guy. Found the Baron to be pretty good It's not a brainless piece of writing, but there are some things you need to think about. It's also historically accurate, not a stereotypical medieval witch hunt. The only thing I think is toxic: Many equipment and skills are given to the female protagonist. In the early stage, you should give them to yourself first instead of being a licking dog.
Overall, I am still looking forward to seeing the follow-up content, although the current motivation for following updates only comes from the legend. But just after reading chapter 10, three Riddlers appeared, 2 big and 1 little. The two big ones were Lord Blacksmith and the little one was the main character. Generally speaking, the writing skills of Internet article writers are generally insufficient. They forcefully use their writing skills to conceal their writings, but they also end up with a thin line of grass and a gray line. The actual impression is not good. Unless this foreshadowing is related to the main outline, it absolutely cannot be discarded. Without these foreshadowings, the entire novel would be impossible to write. Otherwise, please follow the principle of Chekhov's gun and bury it at any time. I think this can better enhance the look and feel of the novel. Let me evaluate it first, and then I will read about 30 to 50 chapters to see if it changes my perception of this novel before I review it. I hope that one of the lord's riddle and the blacksmith's riddle can be solved in these 20 to 40 chapters.
The author self-evaluates, briefly introduces the writing ideas, and avoids pitfalls for non-target readers in advance. [Core Cool Point]: The legendary skills and equipment are used as extraordinary means to crush the realistic medieval natives. [World Background]: This article will strictly research the relevant historical data of England [around the 12th century], and strive to be true. There will be a large number of historical and humanistic details in the story, and it is not a purely fictional fantasy medieval period. [Writing style]: Do not pursue medieval language expression seriously, try to be as easy to understand as possible, and adapt to Chinese readers. It does not exclude the use of unique Chinese expressions to create Chinese dialogue humor. About the character design: All supporting characters have normal IQs and are consistent with their identity and motivation. The female character may have a good impression of the protagonist, but she won't do it mindlessly. There is no distinction between men and women when the protagonist slaps him in the face. Others: No farming, that's the point. No harem. Not invincible (except duel). Not a virgin, but intending to be a human being. Don't blame yourself. If you do something bad, it must be someone else who forced you to do something bad.
The most intuitive thing is that in the beginning, when the lord sends soldiers to suppress the bandits, only a dozen people can be found who do not compete for military service. This is very consistent with the capabilities of small local lords in the Middle Ages. It seems that the content is really medieval. Of course, take another look
It's very creative and makes people feel like "I want to keep watching it", but I don't understand why so many words "hour" are used in Western Fantasy. If it's the habit of AI, can you replace it with Ctrl+F [awkward laugh]
The theme is novel, I hope to see different professions in different people, the protagonist is omnipotent and there is no point to look at, the method of spawning monsters can be diversified, randomly spawn monsters, or spawn monsters at fixed points, and form a team to fight the boss.
It's rare to see a legendary Western genre. The key is that it's written so well and how true it is. I hope the author will work hard to update more, but be careful about your health. It doesn't matter if you can't explode. I still want to see you finish this book and read your new book.
It can be seen that the author wants to write well, but if you want to describe the Middle Ages, you don't just need to look up information, but you need to have a certain understanding of the language, culture and social form of the time. I suggest you open a new book.
The male protagonist travels through time and becomes a serf, Current ability: One choice per day, Content: Knowing the medieval world, just basic swordsmanship and healing, exposure and healing, forgetting about a woman you don't know, venting your emotions to the ruler of the territory (forget it, this kind of book can actually be recommended, alas, just read the specific content)
It was very enjoyable to watch. Although the main character was in trouble, he didn't kill mindlessly. Instead, he took action at the right time. It was very satisfying. The supporting characters also had their own thoughts and were not stereotyped. I finished reading it in one go, but I was a bit dissuaded at the beginning, which made me quit every time I read it. Later, because this author's previous works suited my taste, I came back again. But after I persisted in reading, I read more than a hundred chapters smoothly.
The writing is good, and the upgrade speed is also well controlled. There is no plot like the brainless Long Aotian. The shortcoming is that the number of words is too few.
Very interesting, but updates are too slow
So far, I only dislike the author's slow writing [note], please write faster＞-＜
It's nice. I've also read the author's previous book. It's quite nice.
It's great, come and see it, the author is addicted, don't miss it if you pass by, come and taste it
Overall good, give me a five-star review first
Good food and grass, keep it up [laughing evilly] Update quickly, you are too slow to update
Hurry up to the big scene
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Okay, looks ok
Okay, okay, if the pace is a little slow, the updates will have to be sped up. If there is not a refreshing point every day, it will be easy to forget about reading.
The writing framework is very good, the system is very powerful, and the plot is interesting
The narrative rhythm is very comfortable, the characters are vividly portrayed, the protagonist is not a virgin, and the supporting characters are not mentally retarded. It is well received.
It's very familiar. Although it's a bit overwhelming, the details and environment are handled well, and the space is okay.
Good Guy is very real, full of ideas, and wonderfully written [Adored][Admired]
=Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
It's similar to beheading in the Middle Ages. Just don't go to the palace like him.
Those who like Western medieval themes, especially if you are the only one who is extraordinary
The writing is very good. I wonder who gave the score. Can it be given more points?
Very interesting book, worth reading