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After reading this article carefully, I feel that the author's writing style is very "delicate", and the ☆character design is also suitable☆, "but the storyline written by the author is a bit messy", you can read it yourself, especially the appearance of Jin Ling in Chapter 66 is a bit strange, obviously It was clear that he was practicing the Nightless Sky moves with Zewu Jun and Jiang Cheng in an unknown place in the clouds, but as he read on, he saw the letter that Jin Ling sent to Jiang Cheng when he was in Yunmeng. Secondly, in the original text of Mo Xiang [original party], he can fly with a sword (I personally feel that he can fly with a sword). Riding a horse will be weird, because in the original work, people are flying with swords in a hurry [original work party]). Jiang Cheng's sword is called three poisons, but it does not appear in your article. Then the emotional line between Lan Xichen and Jiang Wanyin is not very obvious and has always been ambiguous. , I personally feel that if Jiang Cheng's character is not clear about the relationship between the two, it is impossible for him to take the position of mistress in the Lan clan's conference (because I haven't seen the article about the two of them together [crying], so I think this is very strange [original party])

I really think it's very good-looking. This book doesn't progress as fast as the others. This book is about taking your time. The two of them did not like each other at the beginning, but slowly fell in love with each other as they got along. It makes me feel comfortable [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]