The Ultimate Love Triangle! The Bigwigs of the Capital Are in Tears!

The writing in the front is very good, but the character design is a bit broken in the back. How did the heroine become stupid and cute, and how did she want to kill the heroine smoothly? Did she break some secrets? Why did the heroine reveal these things that have nothing to do with her? Isn't the main plot of the story about finding one's own family and career? I don't understand why I put myself in a dangerous position, and what the hell is that roommate? I understand you don't want to give them a picture of the baby. I think the author wrote it very well. There are no obstacles from the chaotic family of female competition. Just don't let the character collapse later.

Immortal product, the heroine is very hard-working and the people she meets are also nice. The heroine has a strong core and deserves others to treat her well 👍 The middle is like AI, the pipeline is too serious and there are no conflict points, the characters and environment in the novel are not well represented, and the heroine is too tired and thinks too much.

I like Zhixian so much and work hard to make progress. I hope Zhixian can live the life she likes. But the previous writing is a bit confusing, but it's still acceptable. [Blow kiss] After all, it's the first time the author has written an article. It's already good, but don't always emphasize some skills... This is what she learned in Wenjiacun. It appears too many times. There are also a lot of inexplicable psychological activities starting from the 150th chapter. There are so many out-of-the-box ideas. It's like writing it as if it were written by another person. It's very weird. I hope the author can make some changes 😢

The logic is okay, but that's why the author likes the sentence pattern of "no, but" so much. It appears several times in almost every chapter. It's a bit annoying after reading too much. I 🤦 It's a bit confusing, the characters and plots are like a revolving door, and they always emphasize a small thing, it doesn't look like it was written by a real person

Come on, the rhythm is okay for the time being. I touch my name tag at the end of each chapter, and it feels like writing a composition and repeatedly answering questions. However, the heroine does need to draw strength from her original name which is different from the word "Di", otherwise she will collapse. A name is a person's origin.

It's really good-looking, and the heroine is very smart. In fact, I'm very envious of it. I just read a novel before. The person in the military area also has the surname Lu, but the way that person does things is very annoying. It just so happens that the person in the military area in this story also has the same surname. It's a bit shadowy. I look forward to the follow-up development. Don't use the same surname and personality, then I will be really speechless.

It's tied. I don't usually review books. The subject matter is interesting, but the timeline and logic in it are a bit crazy. For example, if the date didn't match up at the right time, and we went to the countryside together for research, why did the person who drove there drive back? Why did Lu Jinting pick up the bus instead of dropping him off when the same train arrived, and he wasn't discovered yet? Anyway, good luck to the author~

Good looking, love to watch and follow

The author will update quickly!

Very nice, a different experience