
FB: When She Comes
FB:当她降临时
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- Completed
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- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Fantastical Romance
- Subgenre
- Female-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 14d ago
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- Fanqie
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When I Am Tired of Reading, I Read a Masterpiece, a Shocking Masterpiece
I want to watch content similar to "I Was Taken from My Body for Ninety Thousand Years". It's not brainless, it's novel, it's not limited to subject matter, it's super combustible, it's funny, it's old-fashioned, it's all imaginative.
I Declare That I Am Tired of Watching HP. Is There Anything I Can Do to Pique My Interest?
٩(*´◒`*)۶Because of you, the bookshelf is full
I Dare Say HP Is a Masterpiece! ! !
I Was so Angry That I Bluntly Said That HP Didn't Have a Book About Conferring Gods😋
I want to read a book like "Harry Potter: Slytherin".
Looking for HP Series Female Videos! ! !
It's best to have an original female protagonist, it doesn't matter who the male protagonist is ٩( 'ω' )و
Why Do All the Fans in Zhifu Make Minglan Have a Hard Time?
I Want the Heroine to Be Grindelwald, a Saint or Have an Organization of Her Own.
I would like to read a book similar to HP: Making Grindelwald Great Again. It would be better if the heroine's surname is Grindelwald, a saint or an organization she founded, and one with the legacy of Hogwarts.
I Announce That I Have Read All the High-Quality Articles in HP😎
I want to see something similar to "HP: When they blend into their respective fandoms". After four years of reading fan fiction on Tomato, I am already invincible... (At this time, a burst of strong music sounded🔥🔥🔥)
HP, the Kind Who Want Fresh Themes (T▽T)
Woohoo, I can read books without HP (╥╥)
Looking for HP Fan Fiction, Are There Any from the Grindelwald Era?
Are There Any Books About Grindelwald?
I would like to read a book similar to HP: Making Grindelwald Great Again.
The Plots and Routines of the Books Recommended to Me by Tomato Are All the Same. Do You Have Any Recommendations?
Are there any that are of good quality, the author's writing is good, and the plot is not too cliche🙏🙏






















































The author is still authoritative. Only a wife dares to write GGOC. After reading "Nurmengarde, Crown of Thorns", I closed my eyes and read the author's GGOC. It was so good. All the GGOCs written by the author are silver-haired Depp, European Gu King + charming careerist, they are all handsome [Adoration] (The author has written a total of 3.5 GGOC books, and I have only read 2 of them so far. Trust me! The writing is super good!) In this book, I am already looking forward to what the GGOC will look like when he knows the identity of the heroine.
The Little Siren of Zhoumu is really a very subjective, turn-your-face heroine, but at the same time, she has a kindness and divinity that is unique to her. She has continued to grow and improve her self-awareness in the magical world, and finally found her true godhead. From a somewhat arrogant and indifferent person, she has become a vivid person who truly understands the complex world and experiences rich life and emotions. [Shy][Admiration] The little siren in the second week began to use the love she absorbed to give back to the people she cared about, learning to protect and love people. I was so tearful that I felt like I was growing up watching the female goose step by step [almost crying]. Although Erzhoumu became a little lonely again because no one remembered her, she still protected everything she cared about. I hope everyone can regain their memory. Although I know everyone will fall in love with this little girl again, I still hope that the love the little siren gets is double. [Cry][cry][cry] The author's worldview is as grand as ever, completely different from Liz's book, but equally interesting. The plot of the second episode is so exciting, the battle between the strongest dark wizard and the dark lord is about to take place! So looking forward to it! [Sending Hearts]
This is the author's fourth book about Grindelwald x original heroine. Old fans can read it with their eyes closed. The author's character is still Depp's version of the European gas stove. The King of Gu and the careerist are full of charm. Don't worry, the character design is not OOC. The heroine is a pure evil girl who always thinks clearly. She is clear-headed and knows what she wants. She doesn't want both at the same time. She has a clear and firm direction in both her career and her relationship. This is King of Kings x Siren. The extreme pull between the two and the veteran actor's acting skills are so exciting to watch. I really hope to finish it in one breath. It's super good-looking! The author's Gehuang perfectly makes up for the regret of having to change and stop filming!
It's super good-looking. It's another GGOC book. There are only three books in Tomato. It's a very interesting book. I'm really looking forward to finishing it. In addition, if you are a new book lover, you can check out other books by other authors. They are also super good. You can pick the ones you are interested in. The writing style will not let you down.
This book is a classic work in the era of HP ancestors, and it will be in the future. In terms of characters, the heroine is no longer limited to the image of a born bad person, but focuses on the plot setting, complex background, era, and location. In the author's description, they are not entangled and merged and difficult to distinguish. The clear and logical content is very admirable. In addition, this book is no longer limited to the time when it happened in the ancestor era. By adding the era of gods and children, the article is closer to the original work. It is unique among tomatoes
This book is not as strong as the fight between the male and female protagonists in the previous book, but the siren is not losing at all when confronting GG (especially the part where the scumbag behaves, the girl takes the lead this time hahahaha), the character of the siren is also very interesting, I especially like to see the siren making excuses, quibbling, and twisting logic confidently, it is very cute and very irritating hhhhh. It can be said that GG dotes on Siren very much. He has been restraining Siren to prevent him from letting himself go, while at the same time satisfying Siren's willful behavior. Except for the part where the gods appear at the end of the first game, the magical world cannot be involved and can only be watched. It feels like a pity that it cannot be stopped. The other places are integrated very naturally. Now I see Er Zhoumu going to the Mystery Department. They all feel well written. Currently I really hope that my brother will be resurrected. I'll leave a long review when it's finished.
The writing by the boss is so beautiful! The pull between Siren and Grindelwald is really exciting, the pull is particularly strong, and I am very happy to watch it as a sapiosexual! The boss wrote Grindelwald in a very charming way, which perfectly fits my understanding of this character. The character of Siren is also very touching. She is smart, rational, and good at using it. With this trait in her body, Siren has a special charm. The emotional changes between the characters are also well grasped. Their emotions do not change all at once, but slowly change in the process, which is very attractive to read! This one is my favorite GGOC, it's really beautiful!
Among the few beautiful words I have, anyway, this book is very, very, very, very good-looking. Several other books by the author are also very good-looking. Let me just recommend them one by one. The author not only has beautiful vocabulary, but also has a very high level of writing. I recommend everyone to read it quickly. , Okay, Da can stun me for 1.5 Seconds, + Zhang Liang can control me for 2.2 Seconds, Donghuang can also suppress me for 2.2 Seconds, Mozi's ultimate move can stun me for 3.3 Seconds, Yixing's ultimate move can restrain me for 4 seconds, Old Master's ultimate move can trap me for 5 seconds, but the charm of Siren Baby has trapped me for a lifetime. Anyway, this book is very good. Only the author in the circle dares to write like this. The previous books are also very, very good. Just close your eyes and read them. The previous books are very very beautiful. The descriptions in this book are very detailed. The characters of Siren Baby and Grindelwald are also very sweet. The young couple will just lock in love. This book is very, very good. It can be called a masterpiece.
I'm so excited about this. This book is really amazing. The author's writing about Grindelwald is so essence. Every time I read the author's words, I feel like Grindelwald is talking in front of me. The words are so vivid! All four Grindelwald books have won my heart. Of course, this book is also extremely beautiful. The plot is compact, progressive, and there is a reversal at the end. The reversal is even more shocking. Their emotions did not burst out all at once, and the transition was very natural. The heroine in the author's writing is not the kind of smooth sailing, but a kind of real life that gives people a sense of reality. The kind of person who lives in this world and falls down in exams and grows up. And this author is very fast in updating articles. When I first followed this author, he updated four chapters a day for another book. Then when I came here to read this book, he updated seven or eight chapters a day. On the last day, he updated nine or ten chapters. It seemed very awesome! ! ! I really didn't want to say that this author is really the author I have been pursuing for the longest time. I highly recommend everyone to read it. I highly recommend highly recommend highly recommend.
This book is really, really good! The world view is very grand. The first chapter describes the sudden appearance of gods, and the second chapter describes the story of everyone getting to know each other again after disappearing for seventy years. The differences are clear but not deliberate. The character of Siren is well created, and the emotional line is very natural. It is a rare novel that writes GG in a way that is not OOC at all! Gg's personality charm has been completely shaped, very elegant and handsome. Now I watch it on time every night at 12 o'clock, and I don't feel uncomfortable watching it all day long. I really recommend it!
Very nice! ! ! But Sirens and Graves are also very good to drink. Could the author consider writing an extra chapter or a separate book? [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It's really good. Very few people write G. G fanfics. I've been looking for it for a long time. I almost lost all hope, but this great author appeared. It's amazing. It fulfilled all my fantasies about Gellert. I don't understand why the rating is so low. It's a wonderful article that deserves a high score. Well, I decided to give it a five-star rating. I really want to read the extras. If it ends like this, I feel empty inside. The character design of the Siren is very vivid and unique. The article combines the ancient Greek gods. Generally speaking, it is unique and not far-fetched. In fact, I felt that the image of the Siren was not too disturbing at first, but after reading it, I finally realized that the Siren actually has a very delicate heart. The gods do not care about people, but the Siren obviously lacks this in this aspect. She has a tough side, to be precise, she is not like her friends. She is very enthusiastic, and I think she matches well with Gellert. I have read some of the author's previous books, and basically read the introductions. They are very attractive to me. The young Gellert written in big letters by the author really poked me, very flamboyant, and as enthusiastic as a siren... Anyway, I like Gellert written by the author very much. I really like it. I hope the author can write more about Gellert, because very few people write about Gellert, which makes the author's big book even more precious.
The author in this field is simply amazing. Every book he writes is my favorite. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] I really like this book. I wonder if everyone's memory will be restored after the second chapter. I'm really looking forward to it.[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] The relationship between Siren and GG is really good. Knock [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Author, I will always follow you [love] ^3^ and the author's writing is also very logical. I came here from the author's previous book. The author writes every book very well [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Author, I love you forever 😘 [admiration] [admiration] So cool! The author's new book also appeals to my taste [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
This is simply the best book I have ever read! ! ! The author is so awesome, he perfectly restored the characters in the original work. Especially Grindelwald, his charm and ambition are perfectly displayed, which is simply a carnival [blowing kiss] for those of us who are admirers of this gentleman. The heroine Siren is even more surprising, smart and powerful, and sometimes a bit of a magic pill. Looking at her daily life in Nurmengard, I really want to laugh to death from her, okay? The heroine is so funny, especially the time she made everyone in the tower deaf [laughing]. Every character written by the author is portrayed as lifelike, as if he is really living somewhere in this world. All I can say is that this is a masterpiece, it is simply amazing [heartfelt]. This book combines Fantastic Beasts and Greek mythology, which is great since there is nothing inconsistent. When the heroine protects the whole world with her life, it makes people cry to death, okay [crying], it directly sublimates the character. I highly recommend this book. As a fan of Greek mythology and Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, this book completely hits the mark on my preferences. I highly recommend this book [Blowing Kisses] to people who have the same preferences as me. Finally, let me say it again, the author is yyds [blowing kiss]!!! Pls. Can the author resurrect Hades and Apollo? Their deaths are really heartbreaking, especially Hades [crying].
The GGOC label surprised me at first. I had never seen anything like this before, but I didn't expect it to be so amazingly beautiful! ! ! ! The author perfectly integrates the mythological setting and the original world view. It is not obtrusive at all, and it feels like there is a lot of foreshadowing. It is so interesting and not cliché at all. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very consistent with their respective characters.
Masterpiece Thank you The plot at the end of the first prologue almost made me cry to death, and it was not enough to watch. Can the author surprise me by suddenly updating the chapter to 100 chapters tomorrow? (´^ω^`)
Full marks, full marks, full marks. This is the third book I've read in Dada. It's really the first time I've read an unfinished book. Only then did I realize how patient I am. Dada is so awesome. There are so many more books every day. I really like Sirens! Grindelwald is also very charming! The text is now complete! Overall, the plot is very fascinating. I think if the novel is not well written, it will make the readers feel very boring. However, the author writes it very well. After a climax plot, there is a new adventure. Haha, it is one of the few novels that I read without skipping chapters. The emotional drama between Siren and Grindelwald is also very good. The progress of this book is relatively slow, but the early pull and confrontation is also super interesting and interesting! Then I also like the mythology part, and the Hades part of the final ending is also handled very reasonably. The ending is very happy, happy, and reassuring [heartfelt] In short, I like this book very much in terms of character creation, plot design, and emotional promotion! I'll have to re-read it after a while, it'll be great. And the author's new book is also very attractive, and I can't bear to read it. Finally, I must praise the author for being such a hard-working little bee, who consistently adds so many chapters every day! I wish the author better and better!
As a reader who considers himself to have read almost all of Tomato HP [shy][shy][shy] I declare that this book currently seems to be in the top three of my book list. I love it so much that I just want to give it a HE and give it more. Hahaha [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Absolutely awesome, all I can say is absolutely amazing, please update quickly. There are really too few Grindelwald fans. I just discovered that the last one I read was also written by this author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
It's super, super, super, super good. It's rare to find a novel that I can always remember. Normally, if it's a serial, I won't read it again. I'll wait until I finish reading it, but this one I really can't help but read every day.
It's super good-looking. I quickly tied it up after discovering this book. I'm waiting for updates every day at midnight. The writing is very good and it features a pair of favorites. So much so that I added all the author's previous books to my bookshelf. Hahahahaha.
The author's GGOC is simply amazing. It's very, very, very good-looking. It's so good-looking. It's invincible in the world. It's so good-looking. Oops, I lost it. It's so fragrant. This article is so fragrant that I rolled around on the bed three times. It's invincible and so good-looking.
The author's writing is really good, the characters are very interesting and very three-dimensional. I can't find another author who writes about Grindelwald without being OOC. Of course, I have the first impression. The top one in my heart is Dolores.
It's super pretty. Coming from Dolores, Baby Siren's character really struck a chord with me. He is the best cook! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's super beautiful and the writing is very good. I highly recommend it and it's worth a read.
I died laughing on the bed and the nurse beat me up I don't care about anything. Everyone's personality, views, and ways of doing things are different, so I still support the author. You know how pitiful the number of writers writing ggoc is, so you must cherish the hard-earned articles. Besides, the writing is very good, and the incomprehensible ones are regarded as prose (only my personal opinion, the old Feng who scolded me is flying in the sky)
Delicious, incomparably delicious, explosively delicious! ! ! ! ! No matter whether it is updating the word count or the content, it is absolutely perfect. Wuwuwuwuwu, if you leave, who else can feed me, teacher? ! ! ! ! I swear to follow you forever! ! ! !
Really super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Super good-looking [Admiration] As always, you won't lose money if you invest in it, and the update time is stable. It is an excellent article that you must buy. The world view will be larger than other fanfics. This is a relatively novel place. I think the emotional line is handled very well. I want to advance in my career [Blow a kiss] I want a sequel, and I look forward to a big one [Sending Hearts]
This is one of the few HP super-restored works I have seen. Even though I haven't read it for a long time, I can't help but want to give it a super high score! ! The character design is super restored and there is no OOC heroine. It is really strong and completely enjoyable. ! [Please update] Oh oh I have to add that. My wife's writing is really great! ! This book is totally satisfying to me [Love]
The goddess writes very well. ! ^_^@144W words have been read! Squatting extra! It can be regarded as one of the best 🍅hp fanfics! So I recommend watching it. A must see! Come and see everyone! Men see menstruation, and women get nervous when they see it. This is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. So handsome. It is God who is my rose who lights up my dark life and gives meaning to my world. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I burst into tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression is the alarm clock of vegetative people. It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounds so good. It is God who is my rose who lights up my dark life and gives meaning to my world. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so happy that I burst into tears. From then on, the world no longer lacked water. Hehehe, I like the article written by the goddess! So it must be given a five-star rating! !