Lin Bufan is a struggling writer down on his luck. For a two-thousand-yuan tip, he personally wrote off Su Shuangyue, one of his story’s most important characters.
Readers showered him with abuse, but he felt no remorse. Instead, he shamelessly tossed out the excuse, “The plot demands it.”
To keep raking in the money, he hurriedly started a side story about Su Jinyu, Su Shuangyue’s daughter, and the villain who had become even more popular than the novel’s protagonist, chronicling her rise to become an emperor.
Chapter One: Su Jinyu, the Immortal-Burying Empress.
The moment he typed the final period, a long sword silently came to rest against his neck.
The woman holding it was beautiful as a painting. The coldness and killing intent in her eyes were exactly like those of the Su Jinyu he had written.
“You personally wrote my mother to her death. Now you’re going to do the same to your own daughter?”
Lin Bufan: ???
The plot is quite good, but it's not so good in the middle and later stages of the book. I don't know whether it starts from the protagonist or the heroine. First she is the protagonist, then a spectator, and then she becomes the heroine. I can't understand the plot. It's too confusing. I didn't understand it until I listened to it a second time. Chu, forget about the protagonist. You do the narration and let the narration do the talking. After the narration is finished, it's the heroine's turn. It would be nice if the plot could be smoothed out a little bit. It's too confusing and unclear. You can only tell it after watching it for the second time. I was confused the first time.
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