My Clan: I Pretend to Be a Genius, Starting with a Contract with a White Snake

It's pretty good, and the results will not be bad if you keep it stable in the future. It's just that the Japanese part was suggested to be deleted. It's a bit dramatic, and many people can't accept it. I suggest you immerse yourself in cultivating immortality, and don't have too many modern lingo.

The writing is very good, although there is not much innovation, but the writing style is okay. However, it is difficult for novels written for oneself to become popular unless there are special circumstances. What makes you happy may be the point of reading for others. If it is just for love, then it doesn't matter. If you want to make money, it is best to change some content. For a little help that is insignificant, you swear in front of heaven and earth to become brothers with the same surname, not seeking to live together but seeking to die together. It is best for the two of you to become immortals together. This kind of child's trick only requires a verbal agreement. I swear to God😅, if there is a world where some cause and effect can slip away, verbal agreement will not work.

To be honest, when I first saw a lot of mystical elements, I thought it was like a running story, and the whole article was boring and like a running account. The result is that the more you read, the more exciting it becomes. It is not the kind of family novel that is written to be upgraded independently. It is not the kind of boring novel where people know how to communicate with each other. Come on, author [please take a closer look]

Other than that, for some reason, I started to cook wine and talk about heroes just after practicing Qi, and even let a dishonest brother forget about it and swear to God 🤦

I will use the truth, the most thorough, the most naked, the most stern, the sharpest, the most profound, the most realistic, the least embellished, the least roundabout, the least backtracking, the least roundabout, the least twisty, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the most neat, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least grinding, the least procrastinating, the least muddled, the most painful, and the least reserved. The most impersonal, the least showy, the least concerned with dignity, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least vain Fake, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least easy, the least empty, the least detour, the least detour, the least grinding, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least Hold, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least posturing, the least verbose, the least nagging, the least nagging, the least procrastinating, the least hesitant, the least hesitant, the least tactful, the least reserved, the least vague, the least ambiguous , the least secretive, the least miserable is the least secretive, the least hidden, the least concealed, the most straightforward, the most candid, the most frank, the most magnanimous, the most exposed, the most genuine, the most sincere, the most down-to-earth, the most down-to-earth, the most honest, the most simple The most pure, the least beautified, the least filtered, the most realistic, the most respectful of reality, the most straightforward, the most see-through, the most unreserved, the most unconcealed, and the most aboveboard, let me tell you: this novel is good to read.

So far, the writing is very good, but I feel that the skills are a bit lacking. There are Qi training skills, but the physical training and god training skills are arranged. Moreover, the male protagonist now has many attributes. Light water and thunder cannot fully bring out the male protagonist's talent. This can be made up for later. It feels a little too bland, and the writing always feels weird. It feels meaningless. This book only looks good on accepting and getting along with pet beasts, but the rest is average.

It's very good, at least it suits my taste. The progress of combat power level is very gentle, but it is also refreshing and makes people want to read on. Unlike many authors who completely let themselves go for early ratings and pleasure, giving people a sense of emptiness. At present, there is no poisonous point in about 100,000 words. I hope there will be an outbreak in the future. The more I looked at it later, the more something was wrong. It turned out that the AI was manually typed in the back.

It's pretty good. After watching Chen Xun and Ximen Heiniu, I really like watching this kind of person and one animal cultivating immortality. As long as the rhythm is not broken, it looks pretty good [I learned it]

When I saw Chapter 180, I really didn't expect that the materials for the protagonist's pet to break through to foundation building were completely obtained by the protagonist entrusting his family to obtain them. The protagonist's family played a very key role in the protagonist's weakest period. I think this is worthy of five stars. I won't mention the rest. Generally speaking, when other novels break through to foundation building, the protagonist basically touches it here and there, and finally collects it all. But this book relies entirely on family, a very useful family, I feel No more updates, goodbye (;一_一)

It's nice to read, even though it has few words, I still found gold in Tomato.