Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Contract with the Mutated Green-Scaled Snake

It's pretty good, and the results will not be bad if you keep it stable in the future. It's just that the Japanese part was suggested to be deleted. It's a bit dramatic, and many people can't accept it. I suggest you immerse yourself in cultivating immortality, and don't have too many modern lingo.

The writing is very good, although there is not much innovation, but the writing style is okay. However, it is difficult for novels written for oneself to become popular unless there are special circumstances. What makes you happy may be the point of reading for others. If it is just for love, then it doesn't matter. If you want to make money, it is best to change some content. For a little help that is insignificant, you swear in front of heaven and earth to become brothers with the same surname, not seeking to live together but seeking to die together. It is best for the two of you to become immortals together. This kind of child's trick only requires a verbal agreement. I swear to God😅, if there is a world where some cause and effect can slip away, verbal agreement will not work.

To be honest, when I first saw a lot of mystical elements, I thought it was like a running story, and the whole article was boring and like a running account. The result is that the more you read, the more exciting it becomes. It is not the kind of family novel that is written to be upgraded independently. It is not the kind of boring novel where people know how to communicate with each other. Come on, author [please take a closer look]

Other than that, for some reason, I started to cook wine and talk about heroes just after practicing Qi, and even let a dishonest brother forget about it and swear to God [face covering]

So far, the writing is very good, but I feel that the skills are a bit lacking. There are Qi training skills, but the physical training and god training skills are arranged. Moreover, the male protagonist now has many attributes. Light water and thunder cannot fully bring out the male protagonist's talent. This can be made up for later. It feels a little too bland, and the writing always feels weird. It feels meaningless. This book only looks good on accepting and getting along with pet beasts, but the rest is average.

I will use the truth, the most thorough, the most naked, the most stern, the sharpest, the most profound, the most realistic, the least embellished, the least roundabout, the least backtracking, the least roundabout, the least twisty, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the most neat, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least grinding, the least procrastinating, the least muddled, the most painful, and the least reserved. The most impersonal, the least showy, the least concerned with dignity, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least vain Fake, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least easy, the least empty, the least detour, the least detour, the least grinding, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least Hold, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least posturing, the least verbose, the least nagging, the least nagging, the least procrastinating, the least hesitant, the least hesitant, the least tactful, the least reserved, the least vague, the least ambiguous , the least secretive, the least miserable is the least secretive, the least hidden, the least concealed, the most straightforward, the most candid, the most frank, the most magnanimous, the most exposed, the most genuine, the most sincere, the most down-to-earth, the most down-to-earth, the most honest, the most simple The most pure, the least beautified, the least filtered, the most realistic, the most respectful of reality, the most straightforward, the most see-through, the most unreserved, the most unconcealed, and the most aboveboard, let me tell you: this novel is good to read.

It's very good, at least it suits my taste. The progress of combat power level is very gentle, but it is also refreshing and makes people want to read on. Unlike many authors who completely let themselves go for early ratings and pleasure, giving people a sense of emptiness. At present, there is no poisonous point in about 100,000 words. I hope there will be an outbreak in the future.

It's pretty good. After watching Chen Xun and Ximen Heiniu, I really like watching this kind of person and one animal cultivating immortality. As long as the rhythm is not broken, it looks pretty good [I learned it]

It's nice to read, even though it has few words, I still found gold in Tomato.

The strength of Goldfinger is average so far, but the plot is very interesting. I just don't know if feeding back spiritual power will harm the monsters. When I saw the sworn sworn vows, it felt a bit magical. I felt that there was no need to sworn sworn sworn people. And the line, brother's wife is my wife, are you serious?

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm almost dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore.

It's okay, but at the beginning, the two elementary school students looked up to the sky and laughed, hahaha. It was a bit hard to boil juice and talk about heroes.

The writing is pretty good, but the progress is a bit slow. I didn't touch on the exercises until more than 20 chapters ago. By chapter 278, it's not..., But..., These four words start to become too much. It is not ruled out that AI may be used to polish it a bit. Overall, it's still very smooth to watch, but the progress is a bit slower.

What does this book say? , The writing is quite good, and the writing style is relatively solid. As a new author, it is already quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and achieve better results.

It's good to watch. Anyone who plays Locke Kingdom should check it out. This is a slow-paced novel about cultivating immortals.

Very good, the protagonist is smart, has high IQ and EQ, and the supporting character is finally no longer the one who opposes the protagonist

It's pretty, but there's just too little, and it's not even enough to fit between the teeth. I've seen a lot of people say that sworn friendships are quite toxic, but I think it's okay. If you don't know the people or the place, you can get familiar with the place better if you have someone from the host's family to help you. Moreover, they are not bad in talent, and they will probably be in charge in the future.

Not bad, it's well written. Please keep updating.

The starting point is not bad at all. It is a high-quality novel that needs to be read slowly. Sooner or later, it will stand out among so many interesting articles on Tomato. The rest are just for imagination and novelty. This book has smooth logic and finally has a plot that can be read.

Good! It feels okay! It is much better than those system texts and has its own characteristics! If you perform well, you should get good results! The editor really doesn't know how to write this kind of fairy tale, it's too bland!

Around 30-35 years old, two 9-year-old kids cooked hot pot and talked about heroes. They became brothers during a thunderstorm and laughed to death [laughing]

It's a good book for now, but the plot is too short to judge. Let's wait and see the follow-up.

So far, I seem to like it quite a lot, and I hope the author will write more.

It's nice to be a little childish and naive, and the writing is okay.

Delicate writing and smooth plot

It's okay, you can read it on Tomato as a cool article

It's a little bit toxic in the early stages, and you can skip the nine-year-old content, but it's pretty good in the later stages.

It's quite interesting. I suggest changing the cover to this AI cover. It doesn't look good.

The family story is okay. Golden Finger is pretty good.

Alien beasts, but don't accept too many spiritual beasts, otherwise the tail will be too big to fall off.