Traveling Through the Demon World, I Turned into an Abnormality

I think The advantage is that the character of the protagonist is well written and has a sense of inhumanity. The disadvantages are probably The author writes the world too gently. In fact, the original world view is quite dark, just because of the magical girl style. Then, the Abnormality is a bit weak, even during the suppression period of Lobotomy Corporation, it is not that weak. Keep up the good work

@Whypitiful Can you write the name more fully? After reading the Japanese transliterated Chinese characters for a long time, I was not sure which character it was. The abilities and appearance of the protagonist were not clear. At first, I thought the protagonist was a special life form, but later I realized that it was a little girl in a skirt. You can use the dividing line to switch scenes The rhythm is a bit messy. Have you changed it? Why do some plots not connect well? Very pretty

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The fighting aspect is well written with few typos.