[Black-faced complaints about the heartthrob Beta × Kaolin's Flower Vinegar Omega]
Shi Yue traveled through an ABO novel and became a cannon fodder Beta who couldn't survive three episodes.
The original owner committed suicide and sided with the protagonist, and ended up miserable. Shi Yue decided to rewrite her destiny, and there was only one rule for survival - stay away from the protagonist Ling Xuehan.
Ling Xuehan, chief of the First Federal Military Academy, heir to the Ling family's military industry, and S-class Omega. With silver hair and blue eyes, the flower of the high mountains, the Alpha in the school only dared to look at her from afar and did not dare to get close.
Shi Yue walked around her, ducking her head and hiding whenever possible.
However——
She avoids her, and she is the only one who can comfort her when she goes crazy mentally;
She hides from her, and her little fat chirping spirit body sneaks into the arms of the snow leopard every day;
She avoided her, and the whole school started to spread the word: That Beta took down the chief.
Shi Yue:? ? ? I'm not, I'm not, don't talk nonsense.
Until that day, Ling Xuehan blocked her in a corner, her ice blue eyes were close at hand, and her voice was low and forbearing:
"When... Are you willing to let me mark you?"
Shi Yue: ... Did you get the wrong script?
Reader comments
It's beautiful and the setting is delicious. By the way... Did it use AI? There are a lot of dashes [thoughts]
It's really pitiful to be liked by the heroine, but when the heroine gets jealous, she targets the protagonist (corresponds to Chapter 19 of the original text)
The writing is okay, but if the heroine is friends with other people, she can make her feelings less obscure, otherwise it will look a bit awkward.
@S The writing is very beautiful, highly recommended👍👍, but the emotional scenes are a bit lacking, I hope there will be more in the future❤️
It's pretty good to watch, but the emotional scenes jump too fast. Sometimes it is unclear where the relationship between the four people started. But overall it's okay
The titles of each chapter are a bit strange. Is it the author's unique design? It feels a bit like that um... Memoir, and I have a bad feeling about it. I want to ask first whether the ending is he or be
Is it combined with AI to edit the text? It looks a bit similar in some places (no malice)
Very nice book, very delicious
More emotional scenes, especially the heroine and her CP. I feel that the person named Ye appears a bit too much.
The emotional scenes are okay so far, but I feel like they lack some unique pheromones [Salute]
Like! Double strong competition!
It looks so good when I rub it! Love watching! More updates! [Blowing kiss]
Very nice, highly recommended
Why isn't the mechanic's book updated?
Good looking, too little, keep it first
Good to watch, novel plot
It feels a bit like it was written by AI.
Beautiful and very logical 😘
The emotions are delicate. I hope you can continue to update and don't interrupt.
Interesting, rich and novel content, complete story line~~~
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! I have never seen this kind of world view!
The characters are very good, the plot is also good, the strategic theme is relatively new, and the CP is very good! The plot of the story is not procrastinating, and it's good for everyone. It's just that there's a little bit of sugar, but there's no big problem with anything else.
It's beautiful and the setting is delicious. By the way... Did it use AI? There are a lot of dashes [thoughts]
It's really pitiful to be liked by the heroine, but when the heroine gets jealous, she targets the protagonist (corresponds to Chapter 19 of the original text)
The writing is okay, but if the heroine is friends with other people, she can make her feelings less obscure, otherwise it will look a bit awkward.
@S The writing is very beautiful, highly recommended👍👍, but the emotional scenes are a bit lacking, I hope there will be more in the future❤️
It's pretty good to watch, but the emotional scenes jump too fast. Sometimes it is unclear where the relationship between the four people started. But overall it's okay The titles of each chapter are a bit strange. Is it the author's unique design? It feels a bit like that um... Memoir, and I have a bad feeling about it. I want to ask first whether the ending is he or be
Is it combined with AI to edit the text? It looks a bit similar in some places (no malice)
Very nice book, very delicious
More emotional scenes, especially the heroine and her CP. I feel that the person named Ye appears a bit too much.
The emotional scenes are okay so far, but I feel like they lack some unique pheromones [Salute]
Like! Double strong competition!
It looks so good when I rub it! Love watching! More updates! [Blowing kiss]
Very nice, highly recommended
Why isn't the mechanic's book updated?
Good looking, too little, keep it first
Good to watch, novel plot
It feels a bit like it was written by AI.
Beautiful and very logical 😘
The emotions are delicate. I hope you can continue to update and don't interrupt.
Interesting, rich and novel content, complete story line~~~
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! I have never seen this kind of world view!
The characters are very good, the plot is also good, the strategic theme is relatively new, and the CP is very good! The plot of the story is not procrastinating, and it's good for everyone. It's just that there's a little bit of sugar, but there's no big problem with anything else.