Naruto: The Water God of the Akatsuki

Four stars for encouragement. Some of the characters' personalities are quite different from the original work, but they are okay and not too imbecile. It can be a cool article to pass the time. There are too many typos, and the character of the original character is completely wrong. He was originally pretending to be a pig, but now he is wearing a vest, and now he is a pig among pigs. The enemy in the void is simply invincible. Everyone who sees the protagonist wants to hit him. Tsunade comes up for no reason and hits him with a dead hand. If he can't beat him, he sends out the few jounin to monitor him. The protagonist smiled and Gaara immediately questioned him. He went out for a walk and was watched and tortured. However, the protagonist smiled at everyone like a central air conditioner. He told himself a lot of information and people just didn't listen or believe it. You also said that if you tell him, the result will be the same as if you don't tell him. When you attack someone, you covertly say it's because of Samehada's abilities. It's like the Sage of Six Paths who just stayed in the Pure Land and just stared at you and studied your little secrets. He's like a dog.

I've read about half of it, it's not very long, but to objectively evaluate it, there are a lot of errors in the setting, including a lot of typos, and that section of the text, it's just a big mess, it feels like there's a lot of text, I don't know how to read it, it's very tiring, but I like the setting, and the protagonist's character is probably biased towards the neutral side of the fun, so I gave it four stars and will continue to see if any changes will be made. Come on.

My friend, are you serious? Do you remember that Tsunade is Hashirama's granddaughter? Are you telling me a thousand years ago? ? ? "I have always had a question. Thousands of years ago, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara were definitely weaker than Indra and Asura. And as time goes by, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara have become mythical figures. Since the strength of ninjas is not as strong as each generation,

Although there are many poisonous points, I am still willing to give it five stars. Now Naruto either reborn Uchiha to open a harem, or reborn Uchiha joins other countries and unifies the ninja world. It is the same routine. Now the protagonist is equivalent to a player, treating the ninja world as You can develop whatever you want in a game, create events and conflicts, it is quite novel, and I like water escape. The author also has some ideas for water escape. Since it is water escape, the author can write a One Piece and build a super force in it, which is equivalent to the current Akatsuki organization.

The plot is very good. If the author's writing skills are better and he learns to pay more attention to it (this is a compliment, not a ridicule. A now-famous master can write about a battle for more than half a month, and if the fight is good, the plot advancement is 0), he can become a platinum master.

Disrupt the inherent writing method and write more excitingly! Worth recommending!

Izanagi couldn't activate it, his chakra was gone, and finally Danzo disappeared. I originally wanted to play with Danzo slowly, but time waits for no one. It's okay. He killed him just to clean up the garbage. There is no reason to keep him to harm others. Neji looked at Hinata, "Hinata, since your eyes can no longer see the future, it is useless to keep these eyes." Hinata Neji said and buttoned Hinata's eyes. This is great!

The protagonist is good-looking and has a bad-girl feel to her 😳

I really like this setting [Chigua][Chigua]

Not bad. Keep it up. Keep the content exciting. Keep it up.