"Naruto, your Mouth Release is ineffective on me."
"Sasuke, you are too weak"
"Jiraiya, your nindo is meaningless"
"Kakuzu, is your immortality so fragile?"
"Hidan, where is your belief in the evil god?"
"Scorpion, Deidara, I approve of your art."
"Orochimaru, the scientist should live."
...
Facing Otsutsuki, Yu opened his eyes, "There is no god in my eyes."
Reader comments
Four stars for encouragement. Some of the characters' personalities are quite different from the original work, but they are okay and not too imbecile. It can be a cool article to pass the time.
There are too many typos, and the character of the original character is completely wrong. He was originally pretending to be a pig, but now he is wearing a vest, and now he is a pig among pigs. The enemy in the void is simply invincible. Everyone who sees the protagonist wants to hit him. Tsunade comes up for no reason and hits him with a dead hand. If he can't beat him, he sends out the few jounin to monitor him. The protagonist smiled and Gaara immediately questioned him. He went out for a walk and was watched and tortured. However, the protagonist smiled at everyone like a central air conditioner. He told himself a lot of information and people just didn't listen or believe it. You also said that if you tell him, the result will be the same as if you don't tell him.
When you attack someone, you covertly say it's because of Samehada's abilities. It's like the Sage of Six Paths who just stayed in the Pure Land and just stared at you and studied your little secrets. He's like a dog.
I've read about half of it, it's not very long, but to objectively evaluate it, there are a lot of errors in the setting, including a lot of typos, and that section of the text, it's just a big mess, it feels like there's a lot of text, I don't know how to read it, it's very tiring, but I like the setting, and the protagonist's character is probably biased towards the neutral side of the fun, so I gave it four stars and will continue to see if any changes will be made. Come on.
My friend, are you serious? Do you remember that Tsunade is Hashirama's granddaughter? Are you telling me a thousand years ago? ? ?
"I have always had a question. Thousands of years ago, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara were definitely weaker than Indra and Asura. And as time goes by, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara have become mythical figures. Since the strength of ninjas is not as strong as each generation,
Although there are many poisonous points, I am still willing to give it five stars. Now Naruto either reborn Uchiha to open a harem, or reborn Uchiha joins other countries and unifies the ninja world. It is the same routine. Now the protagonist is equivalent to a player, treating the ninja world as You can develop whatever you want in a game, create events and conflicts, it is quite novel, and I like water escape. The author also has some ideas for water escape. Since it is water escape, the author can write a One Piece and build a super force in it, which is equivalent to the current Akatsuki organization.
The plot is very good. If the author's writing skills are better and he learns to pay more attention to it (this is a compliment, not a ridicule. A now-famous master can write about a battle for more than half a month, and if the fight is good, the plot advancement is 0), he can become a platinum master.
I really like this setting [Chigua][Chigua]
The protagonist is good-looking and has a bad-girl feel to her [shy]
Not bad. Keep it up. Keep the content exciting. Keep it up.
Naruto is the Jinchūriki of the Nine-Tails. Isn't it good to capture and clear the place? There are a bunch of reasons, this can't be killed and that can't be killed. After the Nine-Tails' combat power collapses, it will be more useful than the Ten-Tails.
When I read it, I thought it was pretty good. It's a good article that makes people happy.
I became a god in Chapter 72. The plot is not very procrastinating, and the system is relatively generous. It is not as fussy as some of the articles, and it rises by a few points. Some plots may be boring, but it is more invincible, and I am almost invincible in every stage. In fact, it is a bit more daily, and the author made a few typos, but it can be read, and overall it is good to watch.
Disrupt the inherent writing method and write more excitingly! Worth recommending!
Izanagi couldn't activate it, his chakra was gone, and finally Danzo disappeared. I originally wanted to play with Danzo slowly, but time waits for no one.
It's okay. He killed him just to clean up the garbage. There is no reason to keep him to harm others.
Neji looked at Hinata, "Hinata, since your eyes can no longer see the future, it is useless to keep these eyes." Hinata Neji said and buttoned Hinata's eyes.
This is great!
The story becomes more and more addictive the more you read it! The battle is getting fiercer! The author is so awesome [Like][Like][Like]
It feels okay, but every sentence ends with, ah, ah, ah. When listening to the book, I feel like I am acting coquettishly and cutely, especially when Jiraiya talks, ah ah ah, it feels like Jiraiya is no more than ten years old.
It's really awesome, good-looking, crazy but logical. . . In Naruto, it's really not a pity if anyone dies.
Not bad, I killed Danzo and the like, it was quite fun.
You can be more funny, at the old six o'clock
Feeling pretty good about myself
It looks good, you can do whatever you want!
[Chigua] You can take a look, it's not bad
It's interesting, it's fun to play, and it doesn't overwhelm the combat power. I especially like the protagonist's "mouth escape" [laughing]
Invincible, fun man! The plot looks okay for the time being!
I killed Shiro in the first few chapters, uhhhhh, one of my Hokage's favorite people.
It seems that the author is an Akatsuki student and can't even use punctuation marks. But no matter what, at least I don't get angry when I read it. This has surpassed 99% of the Chinese novels [Adoration]!
Four stars for encouragement. Some of the characters' personalities are quite different from the original work, but they are okay and not too imbecile. It can be a cool article to pass the time. There are too many typos, and the character of the original character is completely wrong. He was originally pretending to be a pig, but now he is wearing a vest, and now he is a pig among pigs. The enemy in the void is simply invincible. Everyone who sees the protagonist wants to hit him. Tsunade comes up for no reason and hits him with a dead hand. If he can't beat him, he sends out the few jounin to monitor him. The protagonist smiled and Gaara immediately questioned him. He went out for a walk and was watched and tortured. However, the protagonist smiled at everyone like a central air conditioner. He told himself a lot of information and people just didn't listen or believe it. You also said that if you tell him, the result will be the same as if you don't tell him. When you attack someone, you covertly say it's because of Samehada's abilities. It's like the Sage of Six Paths who just stayed in the Pure Land and just stared at you and studied your little secrets. He's like a dog.
I've read about half of it, it's not very long, but to objectively evaluate it, there are a lot of errors in the setting, including a lot of typos, and that section of the text, it's just a big mess, it feels like there's a lot of text, I don't know how to read it, it's very tiring, but I like the setting, and the protagonist's character is probably biased towards the neutral side of the fun, so I gave it four stars and will continue to see if any changes will be made. Come on.
My friend, are you serious? Do you remember that Tsunade is Hashirama's granddaughter? Are you telling me a thousand years ago? ? ? "I have always had a question. Thousands of years ago, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara were definitely weaker than Indra and Asura. And as time goes by, Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara have become mythical figures. Since the strength of ninjas is not as strong as each generation,
Although there are many poisonous points, I am still willing to give it five stars. Now Naruto either reborn Uchiha to open a harem, or reborn Uchiha joins other countries and unifies the ninja world. It is the same routine. Now the protagonist is equivalent to a player, treating the ninja world as You can develop whatever you want in a game, create events and conflicts, it is quite novel, and I like water escape. The author also has some ideas for water escape. Since it is water escape, the author can write a One Piece and build a super force in it, which is equivalent to the current Akatsuki organization.
The plot is very good. If the author's writing skills are better and he learns to pay more attention to it (this is a compliment, not a ridicule. A now-famous master can write about a battle for more than half a month, and if the fight is good, the plot advancement is 0), he can become a platinum master.
I really like this setting [Chigua][Chigua]
The protagonist is good-looking and has a bad-girl feel to her [shy]
Not bad. Keep it up. Keep the content exciting. Keep it up.
Naruto is the Jinchūriki of the Nine-Tails. Isn't it good to capture and clear the place? There are a bunch of reasons, this can't be killed and that can't be killed. After the Nine-Tails' combat power collapses, it will be more useful than the Ten-Tails.
When I read it, I thought it was pretty good. It's a good article that makes people happy.
I became a god in Chapter 72. The plot is not very procrastinating, and the system is relatively generous. It is not as fussy as some of the articles, and it rises by a few points. Some plots may be boring, but it is more invincible, and I am almost invincible in every stage. In fact, it is a bit more daily, and the author made a few typos, but it can be read, and overall it is good to watch.
Disrupt the inherent writing method and write more excitingly! Worth recommending!
Izanagi couldn't activate it, his chakra was gone, and finally Danzo disappeared. I originally wanted to play with Danzo slowly, but time waits for no one. It's okay. He killed him just to clean up the garbage. There is no reason to keep him to harm others. Neji looked at Hinata, "Hinata, since your eyes can no longer see the future, it is useless to keep these eyes." Hinata Neji said and buttoned Hinata's eyes. This is great!
The story becomes more and more addictive the more you read it! The battle is getting fiercer! The author is so awesome [Like][Like][Like]
It feels okay, but every sentence ends with, ah, ah, ah. When listening to the book, I feel like I am acting coquettishly and cutely, especially when Jiraiya talks, ah ah ah, it feels like Jiraiya is no more than ten years old.
It's really awesome, good-looking, crazy but logical. . . In Naruto, it's really not a pity if anyone dies.
Not bad, I killed Danzo and the like, it was quite fun.
You can be more funny, at the old six o'clock
Feeling pretty good about myself
It looks good, you can do whatever you want!
[Chigua] You can take a look, it's not bad
It's interesting, it's fun to play, and it doesn't overwhelm the combat power. I especially like the protagonist's "mouth escape" [laughing]
Invincible, fun man! The plot looks okay for the time being!
I killed Shiro in the first few chapters, uhhhhh, one of my Hokage's favorite people.
It seems that the author is an Akatsuki student and can't even use punctuation marks. But no matter what, at least I don't get angry when I read it. This has surpassed 99% of the Chinese novels [Adoration]!
It's quite interesting to write
The score shouldn't be so low
Not bad, very new direction, nice looking
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Only after I dug out Hinata's sun eye did I realize that it was a piece of writing written by the Fourth Natural Disaster.