Shock! Hogwarts F4 Is Together!

Very nice. There are too many prophetic dreams, accounting for almost half of the total chapters. Compared with the prophetic dreams, I am more looking forward to the story of the protagonist's life. I think the author said it was for foreshadowing, but there are too many. I feel like the pace could be sped up a bit, and some of them could be written in one stroke or in a few sentences.

It's very cute. The heroine's hamster appearance is vivid and the various descriptions are super cute. The interaction between the four people is also very like real partners and very loving. It's just that the length of the prophecy is too long. After calculation, it takes up most of the entire text. This arrangement is not reasonable. I hope it can be reduced appropriately in the future. 😓Um, I feel that the direction of the plot has been a bit inexplicable since the heroine's identity was revealed. Especially the writing style is obviously not as delicate as it was at the beginning. The writing is messy, pretentious literature suddenly comes out, the dialogue is very childish, there are many language errors and a strong accent, which is a bit disappointing. .

At first glance, the setting was quite shocking, but I really couldn't find a good HP novel that I hadn't read before, so I had no choice but to grit my teeth and give this one a try, and I was surprised to find that it was pretty good [facepalm]. The author's imagination is very novel, and the logic of Pedro's perspective in predicting the world in the dream is pretty good. It's just that there are too few updates. I finished reading it in one go. I hope the author will update it soon. Please update more often.

The writing is quite good. I hope the heroine will bring dogs, deer, and wolves into her harem! And I also really like the friendship between the four of them. And I really like how the author made the heroine very smart and have strong magical abilities! There is no aggrieved feeling that the heroine is mediocre.

I have always been disgusted by the HP of the protagonist Peter, but this book is really a masterpiece! I feel sad when I read the latest chapter. It's really good. It's not a superficial nanny story. It's about redeeming yourself. It's sad and heart-warming. It's just too little. The author needs to be more powerful. Please give me more.

This article is super awesome. Klaas is super good-looking. My writing skills are amazing, and the writing by Huama Na is super good! It has a bit more flavor than other Peter's sexual stories (not just a bunch of things). The prophecy of dreams is quite long, but it's also very interesting! But I still want to see their current life. [Love] Simply shocking and delicious. Meng Qingyuan, who are you?

Isn't what the teacher wrote about my dream of childhood sweethearts exploring each other's bodies? Wc This is too fragrant, but the post is very gender-neutral. . Hey hey hey, this youthful atmosphere I originally saw it before but because I wasn't interested in Peter, I didn't click on it. Click here to give it a try today, it's so delicious! ! Is this the kind of rice you can see in Tomato [Adore][Adore][Adore] The character descriptions are very detailed, and Peter being a girl is completely different from the original novel, which is very cute. And the deer, dog, and wolf characters are not OOC either, which makes me happy.

Shockingly delicious! I feel like the author has come to the wrong platform. I usually don't read many male protagonists, but the setting here is very reasonable. The female protagonist Peter is not a heartthrob. Because he has lived as a boy since he was a child, the boundaries between men and women are blurred, and then he is taken advantage of without realizing it. He has a good time with Sirius! Remus' words touched my heart deeply, he said that he decided to stay with Peter forever. What used to be friendship was now something more! I like it very much! We haven't gotten to James' plot yet, but we're about to start Shura Field. I'm looking forward to it, but there are too many prophetic dreams, so I just skipped them [face covering]

I saw the title many times and didn't dare to click on it when I passed by it. This time I finally got the courage to read a chapter. It felt good so I continued reading. The whole plot from when the heroine was discovered by Remus behind her was very awkward. I saw the word "confused" no less than 10 times, and pouted, and then I finally couldn't stand it anymore and rated it.

The writing is very good. Looking at the cover, I thought it was a gorgeous and unreal sweet Mary Sue style. I didn't expect the writing style to be so delicate. It's very beautiful and fits the character very well. Worth a look

Super pretty! The main reason is that the author's writing is good, the story is fascinating, and the minced meat is delicious [laughing] Who will be the second person to discover it? Looking forward to the full Shura field in the later stage. There is also the heroine's personal plot against Voldemort [like], the heroine is really a wonderful and outstanding person.

Are you so curious after seeing the title of the book? Let me taste and appreciate it [full], after reading these dozens of chapters, I feel that the logic is relatively complete~ It feels like a woman disguised as a man in the HP background and lives in a man's bed [laughing]. It's a pity that the article is too new, the author should update it quickly [sending my heart] Ah, I feel like the heroine is a little too willing to give [face covering], and the method of giving is so weird. Although the heroine is said to value her friends, or does she have no concept of gender? I can barely explain it...[Grievance]

It's very interesting. The author must not stop updating it. There are too many prophetic dreams. I don't think it is necessary to write so many and detailed articles. It will affect the viewing experience a bit.

Hey hey hey it smells good. Please have more deer scenes [Sending Hearts] I like this kind of family happiness, love and health. And I also feel that there are too many parallel worlds and it's a bit fragmented, mainly because the emotional experiences of the two sides are different.

The writing style is comfortable and the writing is smooth! Super pretty! There's nothing wrong with the logic. Since it's pointed out at the beginning, I can accept the changes in the plot later! And the boss's narrative style is super comfortable! !

It's very interesting. I don't know why this book was thrown into the toilet online. Is it just because of the title? (?) I didn't plan to read it when I first saw it. I read more later and wanted to taste it. When I saw it, holy shit, it's so delicious. I've seen a lot of Peter's sexual transformations, and I basically defaulted to the original heroine. It's really good to read, but the mouse is too naive and timid about relationships, but in the dream prophecy, he really can't let go of friendship and keeps trying to atone (｡í ˰ ì｡) It's really good-looking. Can people on the Internet read the book before submitting it? Just look at the name and say they're curious. It's obviously very good-looking (｡í ˰ ì｡)

This is definitely the best and best HP book I have read in recent years. You can read it with confidence. Then I read the comments and some people said that the screen is a bit too much, not much at all, okay? Otherwise, you won't know the cause and effect at all. The author has written the outline very well. I don't know why, but everyone is talking about his shortcomings.

It's beautiful, especially after passing the prophecy, it's exciting! When the Shura field starts, the big black dog is very good, but I want to see the other two players on the table. Finally, it's great that Peter has a female friend like Lily!

The character and characteristics of the transgender character are written very well, and they are consistent with Peter himself. The plot of the parallel world is also inserted to change the ending. It is very good, and the emotional description is also very good.

This is a funny and interesting campus daily life. The fights and tricks among friends are like a microcosm of a person's long time. Ordinary, but wonderful. Happy, but sad. (๑• . •๑) The freshness and freedom of youth were blown away by the wind and drifted into the distance.

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, and this is an extremely delicious one. Starting from Peter is indeed an extremely novel perspective. I don't think ooc, or ooc, is an important thing, as long as it is complete in this book.

At this scale, it doesn't feel like a book that 🍅 should be. It's already tied. I feel it's logical. Those who like to read novels with their brains are in luck. The heroine's personality is very three-dimensional, and there's nothing very OOC about her. All I can say is that it's not entirely clean. Those who mind should not read it. Those who can accept it can enjoy it😋

I'd say it's really not bad. . Unexpectedly not bad. . The homepage has been recommending this book to me before, but the subject of Peter's sexual transformation really shocked me. . Then I never clicked to watch it. . I've been really short of books lately and it's hard to read each one, and the cover is pretty cute, so I decided to give it a look. . It was unexpectedly good and made me feel a little dazed. . The main reason is that the author's writing style and IQ are both top-notch. Except for Peter's sexual transformation, which I still find very strange, there is really nothing poisonous about this book. . [Cover face][cover face] The parallel world made me cry to death [cry][cry][cry] ———————————— By the way, the heroine in the early stage has a low sense of compatibility. Although she is very cute, I really think the mouse-type heroine is very cute. . But the sense of worthiness is very low and sometimes it really hurts. . Hope it gets better later. . ———————————— There's a bit of a maid... Who doesn't like this kind of self-avoidance. . Others are fine

Ouch, the rice is so fragrant, are you a genius? Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good I want to add more!! I want it!! I want it!! (Rolling in place) (screaming)

Looks good! Read the latest chapter in one go! The plot flows smoothly with a touch of wonderful humor!

The mice are really cute. I hope Lemmy can be given more roles. I really like this pair. Sirius was too casual in the early stage, and James hadn't noticed it yet. Lemmy was the gentlest one, so he deserved to eat first! I'm actually curious, what's the name of a mouse? Peter Lupine-Black-Potter? (I didn't type my original surname because I couldn't remember it)

It's wonderful. I haven't seen anything like this for a long time. The title of the book was a bit misleading. I've read three or four of Peter's books and I'm not very interested anymore, but it whetted my appetite. It's wonderful. It's good to read. I love reading it. I recommend it hhh

The subject matter is too new, and I was a little bit dissatisfied with it at first. It turns out that the writing can make up for all the shortcomings, the content is a bit sour, and most of it brings Peter back to the original content. She really has a hard life in this book, but fortunately she meets Remus, and the others are also very good, but I personally think Remus is the real wife.

Generally speaking, I still like the drama of love in a small group (good friends are meant to be together for a lifetime [salute]). Each male protagonist's reaction is very interesting, and the male protagonists are not blindly competitive with each other. These are what I like better. The heroine's early stage shaping is okay, and the degree of OOC can be ignored according to the original design. There is a lot of room for her parents to play, and the selection of characters is really good. I can accept the level of the nanny in the later stage, but I hope that with the positive relationship between the male protagonists, the female protagonist can gradually put her mind at ease, and it would be good to have a small career line. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is delicious [like] Replenish five stars after catching up

The author's writing style is smooth and delicate [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] @ The author should update more @ @ @ @ @ fund Come on, author @ @