People Sit at Home and Realize the Myth of Daluo

The mass of the earth is 52 trillion tons. If you want to blow up the earth if it reaches a trillion tons, you will blow your mind to death. 70 I think it is definitely AI, the preface does not match the postscript

I would like to give you a five-star encouragement. The main reason is that the author has not balanced the combat power well. Looking at the combat power of ordinary people by stacking multiples, the author does not clearly say whether it is exponential stacking or a basic number of ordinary stacking multiples. Moreover, the combat power of multiples stacking collapses too quickly, not towards the big one, but towards the small one. And as mentioned in the previous comments, about the plug-in being given by my future self, this is indeed a little bit poisonous, or so to speak. You don't need to write it clearly. You can just write that the protagonist is destined to become Da Luo, and it just takes time to settle. In addition, a chat group golden finger is provided. It's almost enough to grow up with the system. You can add another hydrological condition, and you can go to the heavens to train your mind, or meet the protagonists of other worlds, so you can be more familiar. Regarding the latest chapters, the author's writing is okay, and the plot of the mind training is still a bit level. If the author wants to change the article, he can change the introduction of the previous article and directly write about the protagonist, who is destined to become Da Luo, and then bind an additional golden finger. To put it bluntly, it is a system to kill time, and it can also be a little polished. Regarding the issue of combat power, In fact, the easiest way to do this is to just ask Doubao directly and let Doubao balance the combat power. Moreover, you can also directly ask Doubao about the specific realm later. If you really don't understand, you can also learn from the cultivation system and the golden elixir system. You can use it after fusion. Okay, the above are my personal opinions and suggestions, please consider them as appropriate [Blow a kiss]

It is a refreshing novel suitable for those born in the 2000s. The pace is fast enough, the plot is not embarrassing, the characters are well designed, and there is no old-fashioned pretentiousness. It is a common sense plot.

Ok… Hey, the first comment?

He sank Japan, he didn't deceive the members, but he didn't open his heart either.

It's well written and feels really comfortable to read.

Looks pretty good

So cool, super pretty

It's really good, keep writing!

Good, good, good

Not bad, come on, author

Seeing later, Ye Fan, the earth in the original work is not simple. I remember that there are Sendai II in the East and the West. No matter how we talk about the national level, we can know that there are practitioners.

Anyway, I think it's pretty cool, so cheers for the author.

Well written, you can read it!

This author is a literate person, one of the rare literate cultural workers, and one of the rare historical workers who understands history [Like]