[The heroine Gwen Spider] [A hodgepodge of plots] [Love is so sweet that it makes you tired] [There are a lot of problems in the first few chapters, but it will get better after reading it]
Lin Yu had a close encounter with Universiade and accidentally traveled to the Marvel world
But this Marvel world seems different
Why is my girlfriend Gwen? Or a Gwen spider?
Why are there still Parker spiders in this world?
What do you mean there is a sin city Gotham next door?
What kind of world is this!
Lin Yu, whose brain was down, decided to just lie down.
Reader comments
It's okay, but it's a common problem with this kind of writing. The protagonist is too idle and doesn't know what to do and always pretends to be cool. Moreover, he adds spells, so it's just an invincible story. The spells are strength. Don't do any magic damage and drain the soul. The noble horse repels all external forces. Are you Erdoron? Don't do anything that can't control the balance of the tiger. That's enough.
Not bad, not bad. It is a very good novel, but it is too slow. The author owes him a meal in the offline octagonal cage.
It's a very interesting book. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Then I hope the author will make this book longer. I don't want the story between the protagonist and Gwen to end early. 😃If not, it doesn't matter. And there is the author. Who is stronger, the protagonist or Dr. Manhattan?
Okay, okay, try to make the male and female protagonists confess their identities to each other and hide each other's identities. I feel a little tired watching it.
Okay okay. It's just that the heroine is a bit clingy, and I always feel that the heroine will develop into a yandere. Can you heal the heroine's psychological trauma quickly?
What I am saying is that if you write a novel that touches people, you must give it five stars.
However, the performance of the book in the desert at the beginning and the opening chapters of the spell were not up to expectations, and the details of the overhaul were not completely revised, so those chapters were still discouraged.
Fortunately, these do not affect the core and main plot. Until chapter 50, it is equivalent to suppressing first and then improving. Or could the author be more obedient and change his mind? It's obvious that the second half is as sweet as the light in the dark.
It's quite sweet now that I look at it. Although there are a lot of poisonous points, the characterization is quite interesting.
I'm really looking forward to the fact that after Gwen's favorability reaches 100%, the protagonist will die in front of her and Gwen will turn into a blackened yandere version. [Sinister smile]
It's very interesting to watch, and the scenes between the protagonist and Gwen are also very sweet, but the Twelve Talisman is a bit of a dimension reduction blow, and the protagonist's setting is also salty. After the identity is exposed, it will be very boring, because there is no plot conflict, and the protagonist will not actively participate and share information. It will be very boring in the mid-term. The battle in the later stage may be better.
Okay, okay, it's pretty cool, but why did you just use dogs to carry you when you first fought against the Ten Rings Gang? Where's the cow?
There were a few problems at first, but the author knows how to change it and has already surpassed many authors. It is worth reading.
There were some problems in the first few chapters, but I personally found them okay later on. The author also explained how the problems in the first few chapters came about. I would like to give the author a five-star review to encourage him.
@18 Why can't AI generate pictures [crying]
Very nice. Just a little less
Update quickly, preferably three times a day.
It's okay. The plot needs to be optimized. I'd like to give you five stars for encouragement.
It's amazing, the emotions are so delicately written. Is the author born to write novels? 🤔
It's pretty good. I only rely on watching this to get to work. I can only say that it's okay. I can watch it, but some people can't even watch it.
Okay, okay, refreshing and sweet, that's my type
When does the protagonist have to eat?
See the latest chapter (Chapter 34). How can I put it this way? It feels like I write whatever comes to my mind. Very fragmented.
For now, what's the future?
I really want to have a girlfriend like Gwen [face covering]
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Five stars given, update discontinued
Not bad, good, good book recommendation
It's beautiful (♥∀♥), good luck to the author
I think it's pretty good (´∀｀*)
Pretty good
Okay, okay, come on, author
It's not bad, but I feel like the protagonist doesn't really need to take bullets. He can use the chicken charm to control those bullets.
Promise me, the author, to write down everything [laughs]
It's okay, but it's a common problem with this kind of writing. The protagonist is too idle and doesn't know what to do and always pretends to be cool. Moreover, he adds spells, so it's just an invincible story. The spells are strength. Don't do any magic damage and drain the soul. The noble horse repels all external forces. Are you Erdoron? Don't do anything that can't control the balance of the tiger. That's enough.
Not bad, not bad. It is a very good novel, but it is too slow. The author owes him a meal in the offline octagonal cage.
It's a very interesting book. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Then I hope the author will make this book longer. I don't want the story between the protagonist and Gwen to end early. 😃If not, it doesn't matter. And there is the author. Who is stronger, the protagonist or Dr. Manhattan?
Okay, okay, try to make the male and female protagonists confess their identities to each other and hide each other's identities. I feel a little tired watching it.
Okay okay. It's just that the heroine is a bit clingy, and I always feel that the heroine will develop into a yandere. Can you heal the heroine's psychological trauma quickly?
What I am saying is that if you write a novel that touches people, you must give it five stars. However, the performance of the book in the desert at the beginning and the opening chapters of the spell were not up to expectations, and the details of the overhaul were not completely revised, so those chapters were still discouraged. Fortunately, these do not affect the core and main plot. Until chapter 50, it is equivalent to suppressing first and then improving. Or could the author be more obedient and change his mind? It's obvious that the second half is as sweet as the light in the dark.
It's quite sweet now that I look at it. Although there are a lot of poisonous points, the characterization is quite interesting. I'm really looking forward to the fact that after Gwen's favorability reaches 100%, the protagonist will die in front of her and Gwen will turn into a blackened yandere version. [Sinister smile]
It's very interesting to watch, and the scenes between the protagonist and Gwen are also very sweet, but the Twelve Talisman is a bit of a dimension reduction blow, and the protagonist's setting is also salty. After the identity is exposed, it will be very boring, because there is no plot conflict, and the protagonist will not actively participate and share information. It will be very boring in the mid-term. The battle in the later stage may be better.
Okay, okay, it's pretty cool, but why did you just use dogs to carry you when you first fought against the Ten Rings Gang? Where's the cow?
There were a few problems at first, but the author knows how to change it and has already surpassed many authors. It is worth reading.
There were some problems in the first few chapters, but I personally found them okay later on. The author also explained how the problems in the first few chapters came about. I would like to give the author a five-star review to encourage him.
@18 Why can't AI generate pictures [crying]
Very nice. Just a little less
Update quickly, preferably three times a day.
It's okay. The plot needs to be optimized. I'd like to give you five stars for encouragement.
It's amazing, the emotions are so delicately written. Is the author born to write novels? 🤔
It's pretty good. I only rely on watching this to get to work. I can only say that it's okay. I can watch it, but some people can't even watch it.
Okay, okay, refreshing and sweet, that's my type
When does the protagonist have to eat?
See the latest chapter (Chapter 34). How can I put it this way? It feels like I write whatever comes to my mind. Very fragmented. For now, what's the future?
I really want to have a girlfriend like Gwen [face covering]
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Five stars given, update discontinued
Not bad, good, good book recommendation
It's beautiful (♥∀♥), good luck to the author
I think it's pretty good (´∀｀*)
Pretty good
Okay, okay, come on, author
It's not bad, but I feel like the protagonist doesn't really need to take bullets. He can use the chicken charm to control those bullets.
Promise me, the author, to write down everything [laughs]