Becoming Ancestorman, Starting in The Boys

Liangcao is one of the few fanfics on Tomato that is readable. The plot is logical and the rhythm is not broken. At present, the latest 171 black robes are basically over. The next few chapters should be the next world. I look forward to updates. The author maintains the level.

This fanfic is really well written. I didn't join the protagonist group or join the people of the motherland. I am independent from a third party, but I eat a lot of friction between the two sides. I take advantage of it and hide behind the scenes. It's okay to copy the strength of this super power. It takes longer and more reasonable to copy a strong super power. Otherwise, if you pretend to be a fan and find someone to shake hands every day, you will be invincible every minute. If you want to copy a high-intensity super power, you need to plan. It is not a brainless and relatively reasonable way to become stronger.

I have read twenty or thirty Black Robe fanfics, and this is one of the rare times I have seen where the plug-in setting does not conflict with the plot. Maybe you have read less and think there is nothing strange about this, but if you click on more Black Robe fanfics, you will find that the authors use AI Forget it, I posted it without even taking a glance at it, just to let the left and right brains fight each other. I don't have time for the details now, so I'll talk about it later. I've been fooled several times, so I'll just give it a 4. I hope the author can update it more. This is the only black-robed fan I follow.

The writing is pretty good so far. The writing is not new, and it doesn't include too many jokes or colloquialisms. The early stage of the development of the black robe stage is okay, but the pace is a little faster. After getting the mental skills, it takes off like a rocket, but the overall plot has a beginning and an end. The author's current update speed deserves praise. The other books I've read have been updated weekly.

The system plays it automatically. After listening to it for a while, I found that it was OK. I only fell in love with it when I heard the butcher scolding in it. The comedy in it mainly relies on a few people who can curse. Now I like to read light-hearted books, but I don't like too much spoofs. Although this book is not too light-hearted, it can be regarded as an upgrade to the pseudo-invincible.

It is a cool novel that is not an invincible novel. Goldfinger is strong but not brainless. The plot advances quickly. Personally, I feel that the world of Black Robe Pickets can actually be written. There are some minor flaws in the progression of the plot, but the flaws are not concealed. The main content is coherent and the plot is reasonable. However, I hope the author can add some character introductions in the following content. The characters in Black Robe Pickets World are for those who have not watched Black Robe The pickets may seem a little confusing to people in the game, but the author has put a lot of effort into character creation, so even readers who have not read the black-robed pickets can roughly understand the character of each character. Generally speaking, it is similar to the game Invasion: Akira Fudo in terms of setting. If this book can maintain its current level, it has the potential to become the next hit.

About 9 minutes 1. I have caught up with the latest chapter. Overall, the pace is very good. I think the setting is also quite good. Let me share my opinions below. 2. The world of Black Robe is more beautiful and exciting than that of Marvel. The world view and abilities of Black Robe are more suitable for the protagonist's abilities. In Marvel's case, the gap between the upper and lower limits is too big. 3. Regarding the issue of the motherland, the doubtful point is that the ability of the motherland has not been copied. There is no problem in eliminating the ability of the motherland. There is also the ability to live forever, which has never been copied by Marvel since its emergence, which makes me feel a little itchy. 4. Then there is the question about the wise men and the establishment of the laboratory. Doesn't Walt know that there is such a big movement? And the wise men were tied up. 5. The other thing is that there are a few scenes of the Motherland and Maeve appearing. Kate's plot was well written. That's about it, it doesn't have any bad points, it has some highlights, the plot is also very good and doesn't drag on, so it's no problem to give it a 9.

The writing is quite good. It was said at the beginning that you need to be exposed to it for a period of time before you can copy the ability. I thought that there was no chance of being deflated later. But except for the first time when I was forced to copy and was beaten a few times, the subsequent copying abilities were all planned. I either knocked people out and copied them, or I copied them by mind control, or I copied them while they were asleep. There were no deficiencies at all. The protagonist is very smart. It's rare to find a steady development novel. Nowadays, novels are either invincible novels that cheat and cheat to the end, or they are deficient novels in the name of development novels. The protagonist of this book will not be deflated. The emotional line is also very stable. The protagonist is not described like a monkey in heat. The protagonist approaches the female character just to copy his abilities. It does not describe too many psychological fluctuations. Instead, the female character is a little emotional for the protagonist. This article gives me the feeling that it can be accepted without a heroine, with a heroine or a harem.

The latest chapter is 47. I am currently a fan of Black Robe, but it will probably be transferred to Zhutian in the future. It feels good to look at, a growth-type golden finger, the development speed is not slow, there are suspected to be multiple female protagonists, the protagonist PUA is quite good, the plan is clear and strong, he can be regarded as ruthless and ruthless without losing his humanity. However, the number of chapters is still relatively small. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I'll support it with four stars first. ☕

Yes, the basic logic is still very smooth, and the writing style is also good. It won't feel too verbose. The protagonist is not particularly stupid, it's okay, okay, and I like it very much. It's just that there were too few chapters when I read it. It would be better if there were more chapters.