Matriarchy: The Caged Bird of the Women's Kingdom

The plot is very good, and the male perspective is very novel. I deducted one point for the transfer of neutral words and the confusing timeline. Regarding the transfer of neutral words, the author said that because it is from a male perspective, he has not changed yet. But he didn't change. Are the other people, who are real locals, following the male protagonist's lead in giving in to neutral words? I can accept the male protagonist giving in to neutral words in what he says, thinks, and does, but I can't accept that everyone is like this. There are always many people correcting neutral words in paragraph reviews, but I feel that more people will stay if they change more.

I have only read the first part so far, and I have found that the problem has a neutral word transfer. A man is not a son, and a princess should be a prince without deliberately emphasizing that a woman should be a prince. There is also discord between husband and wife. I think it is a wife and husband. The author writes from a male perspective that the father was corrected in front of the mother, but this discord between husband and wife is said by the natives. Is it a bit unreasonable? I suggest that it be changed. In order to fit the background of the times, I suggest adding the word "disobedience to men". The author's first writing is very good. You can continue.

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I still want to encourage the author, so I added one star. I just read a few chapters. The author's writing style and plot are still very good, but it was too uncomfortable for me to read. I couldn't bear to call the man "young master" before. After all, there are indeed many people who don't think there is anything wrong with this title, but using the word "slave" is simply a big deal. , Especially in this kind of article, I think the author also changed some words, such as "jealousy" to "". I really have to praise that the change is very good, but it depends on the individual. If you don't mind these, you can continue reading. I feel that the author's writing style is still very good.

The author wrote it very well! I don't think other novels always feel like AI. It's so refreshing to see so many beautiful men trying their best to seduce their sisters!!! This heroine is amazing!! The description of the man's appearance and vicious psychology is also very delicate!!

I only read a little bit, and I really can't read it at the moment. After thinking about it, I still give a score to support this article. Three stars to the author - it can be seen from the few words that she has her own ideas, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. One star for the main character and other characters. (Male characters are not allowed to get involved) One star for some sisters in book reviews and paragraph reviews. (Disclaimer: I am not writing this review in a condescending manner. I think I am treating every conscious author and his works fairly.) In fact, I edited a lot of things in a confident way, but I deleted them later. I felt like I was guiding the author sister in her writing 😄 How is the duration now? I really can't stand it anymore, and I still feel sorry for the male protagonist. I don't understand. What kind of novel about a female protagonist are you reading? I'm still looking forward to the author's new articles in the future. Edit again: Is it enough time?

Looks good hahaha I keep laughing

It looks good, but I hope the protagonist can change his mind quickly

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Why are there still people in this comment section who feel sorry for Jiahao Yaozu? Why can't you watch Jiahao Yaozu suffer a little?

It is natural for women to be respected. Men girdle their waists, as a matter of course. Apart from watching the heroine's brother come to the heroine's world and seeing his ideas slowly being distorted, it was so boring. The heroine doesn't have much ink, and there's no plot.