The Invincible Invincible: Starting with the Coming-of-Age Ceremony

This is the best Invincible Young Man fanfic I have seen so far. Although the name is a bit ridiculous, the original plot + not invincible + invincible AI has surpassed 99% of fanfics. However, the author's writing has room for improvement. Come on, I wish you to become the best writer in the world [Like] To be honest, the writing is a bit broken, and it doesn't match the introduction.

The author's writing is better in Invincible Young Heroes. It is still a world that respects group fights the most. It has a better grasp of what kind of situations can trigger the law of group fights.

Cuckoo quack! ! ! It's the best fanfic I've ever written so far, so impressive! The battle descriptions in it are really awesome. You can feel the excitement of fighting just by reading the words. For the first time, you can feel the tension from the words.

Don't be dissuaded by the ratings. The protagonist is flesh and blood, with upright views. There is no trace of AI, and all the jokes are just right. I personally think there are no embarrassing moments. I sincerely recommend it.

It's a piece of food, and you can read it except for some shortcomings. Personal suggestion: I don't know what your plan for the follow-up plot is, but for the character Angstrang, you must make full use of his abilities and don't let him go offline easily. His abilities are originally an excellent mid-term patch for other comic universes in the future. I hope this book will not be limited to Invincible Young Heroes and not be easily completed because there are very few Invincible Young Heroes fans. You must keep writing it [Learned] @ When I forcibly jumped to the earth line, I thought I could have my own original plot and intention, but in the end... Forget it, let's leave it at that.

It is very well written and can be regarded as the most respectful work of gang fights. It runs through the whole series of "Taking Magic Pills" [Smile] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Salute]. The overall content must have content and quality. When I read this series for the first time, I originally thought that not many people would write it, but I found that this book is really good. The only shortcoming is that the author sometimes crashes and the update speed is not fast enough. Overall, it is relatively restored to the original work [Smile] What will I have five hundred years later? , The rest are all minor issues, just a little polishing and polishing will do the trick.

A good fic, although it is slightly different from the original work, but as one of the few Invincible Young Heroes fics, it is quite convincing.

Don't tell me, it's really fun to watch. The plot is simple, but it's so fun that it doesn't make you feel awkward or brainless. However, the plot does not have a particularly good design, but if you want to read Vitrum's exciting novels, you can definitely come, but I would rather see the story of the protagonist slowly resisting Wert After following this book for a few days, I can only give it 4 stars. The update speed is really too slow and unstable. Sometimes it's a chapter a day, and sometimes it's a chapter every two or three days. It's a book that will take me several days to read.

Soon Fight, fight, fight! Cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool! At the end of Chapter 119, he became the generalissimo of the military. He faced off against Trigg under various debuffs such as being exhausted, having broken arms and legs, and having just defeated Conquest. After the fight and before he fell into coma, he dealt a major blow to Trigg and became the second person in the civil war. The description of the fighting scenes is excellent, and the protagonist is humane and does not just know how to kill. He is an excellent fan of Invincible Young Heroes (note: the timeline is before the Great Civil War) [Send Heart][Send Heart]

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