Invincible Young Hero: Become Invincible from Coming of Age Ceremony

The author's writing is better in Invincible Young Heroes. It is still a world that respects group fights the most. It has a better grasp of what kind of situations can trigger the law of group fights.

This is the best Invincible Young Man fanfic I have seen so far. Although the name is a bit ridiculous, the original plot + not invincible + invincible AI has surpassed 99% of fanfics. However, the author's writing has room for improvement. Come on, I wish you to become the best writer in the world [Like] To be honest, the writing is a bit broken, and it doesn't match the introduction.

Cuckoo quack! ! ! It's the best fanfic I've ever written so far, so impressive! The battle descriptions in it are really awesome. You can feel the excitement of fighting just by reading the words. For the first time, you can feel the tension from the words.

It's a piece of food, and you can read it except for some shortcomings. Personal suggestion: I don't know what your plan for the follow-up plot is, but for the character Angstrang, you must make full use of his abilities and don't let him go offline easily. His abilities are originally an excellent mid-term patch for other comic universes in the later period. I hope this book will not be limited to Invincible Young Heroes and will not be easily completed because there are very few Invincible Young Heroes fans. You must keep writing it [learned] @

Don't be dissuaded by the ratings. The protagonist is flesh and blood, with upright views. There is no trace of AI, and all the jokes are just right. I personally think there are no embarrassing moments. I sincerely recommend it.

It is very well written and can be regarded as the most respectful work of gang fights. It runs through the whole series of "Taking Magic Pills" [Smile] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Salute]. The overall content must have content and quality. When I read this series for the first time, I originally thought that not many people would write it, but I found that this book is really good. The only shortcoming is that the author sometimes crashes and the update speed is not fast enough. Overall, it is relatively restored to the original work [Smile] What will I have five hundred years later? , The rest are all minor issues, just a little polishing and polishing will do the trick.

A good fic, although it is slightly different from the original work, but as one of the few Invincible Young Heroes fics, it is quite convincing.

Don't tell me, it's really fun to watch. The plot is simple, but it's so fun that it doesn't make you feel awkward or brainless. However, the plot does not have a particularly good design, but if you want to read Vitrum's exciting novels, you can definitely come, but I would rather see the story of the protagonist slowly resisting Wert After following this book for a few days, I can only give it 4 stars. The update speed is really too slow and unstable. Sometimes it's a chapter a day, and sometimes it's a chapter every two or three days. It's a book that will take me several days to read.

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Soon Fight, fight, fight! Cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool! At the end of Chapter 119, he became the generalissimo of the military. He faced off against Trigg under various debuffs such as being exhausted, having broken arms and legs, and having just defeated Conquest. After the fight and before he fell into coma, he dealt a major blow to Trigg and became the second person in the civil war. The description of the fighting scenes is excellent, and the protagonist is humane and does not just know how to kill. He is an excellent fan of Invincible Young Heroes (note: the timeline is before the Great Civil War) [Send Heart][Send Heart]

"Hey, your days of messing with Carvin are over." "Give me the new chapter." "If you want it, you have to write it yourself" (getting up) "You already know these rules." "I knew you would say that." (Unexplained drumbeat) "How many times have we been reminded of more?" "I can't tell you, there are so many reminders every time that I can't stand it." (Laughing without meaning) "It's time for closure, author." (Takes out cell phone) "It's over once and for all" (press to update)

It's okay, but some parts are a bit shocking to me. I'll see if I want to change the rating later.

Even though the score is only in the 6-point range, I think the level of this book is at least 8-9 points. The protagonist is also flesh and blood, not an AI novel. Overall, it is the best fanfic I have ever read.

It is considered good among all the Invincible Young Heroes novels, but the protagonist grows up too fast. He can fight Conquer at just a certain age. The fighting scenes are very delicate, and the description of the protagonist's character is not interesting. I hope to speed up the update. I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day. I recommend returning to Freeges. Author, write quickly, I can't stand it anymore😭😭😭

It looks good, and there are no poisonous spots so far. It feels so good to hit the flesh. The update is just too slow. A new map is now open. It's from Marvel. Don't know how to develop? But I still want to return to the original world. I hope my teammates in the original world don't die. Don't wait until the protagonist returns to the empire and is attacked by natural disaster weapons. Or is this a copy and the time flow rate is different? Anyway, no matter what, the author's writing is very beautiful.

Absolute protection, the marshal born from it, teaches you how to use the sword. . .

Still a supermodel with a knife and the most respectful group fight

It's not bad in Tomato, but there are too many playful descriptions in the battle process, which makes people watch it very funny, but it is definitely a pure hand rubbing, so I give it four stars. It's over. [Eat melon]

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Fighting! Cool! Although the background of Vitrum is different from the original Vitrum, it is still good when viewed in the parallel universe. I now believe Vitrum's fatherly words. The protagonist is indeed the strongest genius in the history of the empire.

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The battle was fun, but it didn't push Nolan and Mark's Earth line yet.

It's tall among short people, and although it has flaws, it's pretty good for its type.

It's well written, very good among the Invincible Young Heroes!

A very delicious book! ! ! ! !

The author should update it soon, it's very beautiful.

The Vitrum people who respect the sword the most

The writing is very good, but the cover is too curious.

I want to see the river of blood and update quickly [laughing]

Chapter 119, becoming a generalissimo!