Pingyuan Tian has always felt that love is something only found in novels - those plots of blushing, heart-pounding, and hesitating to speak are too far away from ordinary boys like him.
Until Shijo Maifei-senpai broke into his daily life without warning. She always spoke with her chin raised, and she was obviously concerned but had to beat around the bush. She would add "I just did too much" when passing the stool. But such a true concubine would silently turn her umbrella towards him on rainy days, and would be the first to stand in front of others when they bullied him. Pingyuan Tian gradually discovered that all the beautiful things written in the novel were not as good as the awkward but sincere love of a tsundere senior.
The arrogant concubine Shijo is always number one in the world.
Reader comments
It's quite good-looking. It's rare to have Shijou Maifei as the heroine. This character in the original work is quite likable, but it's a pity that no one writes fanfics.
What kind of work have you been doing all of a sudden these two days? I'm both a council member and an onmyoji. Those who are reading this book are all here to see love and true concubines. I feel like I'm really asking God Akasaka to suddenly do these things [face covering]
It's been a while since I've read a Kaguya fanfic, it's so well written. It's the first time I've seen Shijo Shinobi who is not a comedian, it's a bit strange [laughing]
The writing is quite good, and it has the flavor of the original work. There is no brainless copying of the original plot, and the way the characters are inserted into the plot is relatively reasonable. There are some minor flaws in the setting, but they are innocuous. Also, the segmentation may need to be optimized. Overall, I still prefer this work.
Beautiful! I have read two novels with true concubine heroines before, but unfortunately they have been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to write well. Also, the update is too slow, only one chapter per day for the past two days. Don't be too naïve, I want to take a good look at my daily life [Like]
Ah, can you forgive just such a dream? Not a buddy? What I want to see is the crematorium of chasing husbands. It's so tragic to want to persecute the concubine. So many female characters, such as Eri, keep a distance from each other in daily life. However, they are seen by the real concubine, misunderstood, have stomachache, regret, etc., And finally resolve the misunderstanding and reconcile at the fireworks display. Isn't this bad? . .
It's very well written. To be honest, I'm a grown man. I started reading it early in the morning. I cried several times while reading it. I don't know why, but I always felt very sympathetic. Please continue writing. Your novel is very good.
I'll go, it's really good, but why are so few people watching it? Will it always be a single female protagonist?
Yes, the author, the writing is good. Do you want to come to a Shura field to play [making faces] [making faces] [laughing]
The writing is very good. Among the books I have read on Tomato, it is one of the most comfortable ones.
In fact, I feel like it would be good to follow the original work and have Zhenfei like Tanuma, and then write about the inner struggle and pain of the protagonist. In the process of pretending to be her boyfriend, she gradually develops a relationship with Zhenfei, but she dare not confess it because of her low self-esteem. I feel like I can write more chapters this way, and it will be more sweet at the beginning and sweet at the end. If Zhenfei doesn't like Tanuma, I feel like I can't write much, and many things in the original book also have logical problems that don't make sense.
I feel that the tsundere flavor is a bit weak, and it doesn't quite fit my own impression of the real concubine. I just don't feel like she has any tsundere flavor when getting along with the male protagonist.
I saw more than 50 photos. The front is very nice, but the back may be because I feel there is nothing to write about, so I wrote about Congressman x. I don't like it very much (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on
It's great. It's the first time I've read Wazhen Fei's novel and it's so well written.
It looked okay from the beginning, but suddenly a supernatural power came over me. I immediately wanted to give it 2 stars, let's see if there are more in the future.
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Overall, it's okay, but Onmyoji is really bad. If I could just add the words "extra" in front of those chapters, otherwise other readers would just run away, and I almost ran away.
It looks good. Do you have any more? Please update soon.
There are very few novels about the Shijo Princess that are very good.
It looks good, but the emotions are a bit too fast, and I really hope the author can revise the Onmyoji part. The front part is really nice
It's okay, but there are a few chapters where the sudden appearance of Onmyoji's plot affects the viewing experience, but overall it's pretty good.
The writing is very graphic and interesting.
It can be good-looking [laughing]
It looks good, but don't make it too complicated. I almost thought you invited Akasaka.
It's quite interesting. I skipped it, but I didn't make it clear whether Zhenfei still has feelings for Tsubasa Tanuma [exploration]
Good luck, author!
I like it very much. It would be better if the supernatural power in the middle was changed.
It looks good. Keep up the good work, but there are too few updates. Give me the hard work to code the author [smile]
Work hard to code for me!
It's quite good-looking. It's rare to have Shijou Maifei as the heroine. This character in the original work is quite likable, but it's a pity that no one writes fanfics. What kind of work have you been doing all of a sudden these two days? I'm both a council member and an onmyoji. Those who are reading this book are all here to see love and true concubines. I feel like I'm really asking God Akasaka to suddenly do these things [face covering]
It's been a while since I've read a Kaguya fanfic, it's so well written. It's the first time I've seen Shijo Shinobi who is not a comedian, it's a bit strange [laughing]
The writing is quite good, and it has the flavor of the original work. There is no brainless copying of the original plot, and the way the characters are inserted into the plot is relatively reasonable. There are some minor flaws in the setting, but they are innocuous. Also, the segmentation may need to be optimized. Overall, I still prefer this work.
Beautiful! I have read two novels with true concubine heroines before, but unfortunately they have been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to write well. Also, the update is too slow, only one chapter per day for the past two days. Don't be too naïve, I want to take a good look at my daily life [Like]
Ah, can you forgive just such a dream? Not a buddy? What I want to see is the crematorium of chasing husbands. It's so tragic to want to persecute the concubine. So many female characters, such as Eri, keep a distance from each other in daily life. However, they are seen by the real concubine, misunderstood, have stomachache, regret, etc., And finally resolve the misunderstanding and reconcile at the fireworks display. Isn't this bad? . .
It's very well written. To be honest, I'm a grown man. I started reading it early in the morning. I cried several times while reading it. I don't know why, but I always felt very sympathetic. Please continue writing. Your novel is very good.
I'll go, it's really good, but why are so few people watching it? Will it always be a single female protagonist?
Yes, the author, the writing is good. Do you want to come to a Shura field to play [making faces] [making faces] [laughing]
The writing is very good. Among the books I have read on Tomato, it is one of the most comfortable ones.
In fact, I feel like it would be good to follow the original work and have Zhenfei like Tanuma, and then write about the inner struggle and pain of the protagonist. In the process of pretending to be her boyfriend, she gradually develops a relationship with Zhenfei, but she dare not confess it because of her low self-esteem. I feel like I can write more chapters this way, and it will be more sweet at the beginning and sweet at the end. If Zhenfei doesn't like Tanuma, I feel like I can't write much, and many things in the original book also have logical problems that don't make sense. I feel that the tsundere flavor is a bit weak, and it doesn't quite fit my own impression of the real concubine. I just don't feel like she has any tsundere flavor when getting along with the male protagonist.
I saw more than 50 photos. The front is very nice, but the back may be because I feel there is nothing to write about, so I wrote about Congressman x. I don't like it very much (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on
It's great. It's the first time I've read Wazhen Fei's novel and it's so well written.
It looked okay from the beginning, but suddenly a supernatural power came over me. I immediately wanted to give it 2 stars, let's see if there are more in the future.
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Overall, it's okay, but Onmyoji is really bad. If I could just add the words "extra" in front of those chapters, otherwise other readers would just run away, and I almost ran away.
It looks good. Do you have any more? Please update soon.
There are very few novels about the Shijo Princess that are very good.
It looks good, but the emotions are a bit too fast, and I really hope the author can revise the Onmyoji part. The front part is really nice
It's okay, but there are a few chapters where the sudden appearance of Onmyoji's plot affects the viewing experience, but overall it's pretty good.
The writing is very graphic and interesting.
It can be good-looking [laughing]
It looks good, but don't make it too complicated. I almost thought you invited Akasaka.
It's quite interesting. I skipped it, but I didn't make it clear whether Zhenfei still has feelings for Tsubasa Tanuma [exploration] Good luck, author!
I like it very much. It would be better if the supernatural power in the middle was changed.
It looks good. Keep up the good work, but there are too few updates. Give me the hard work to code the author [smile] Work hard to code for me!