Shuchiin: Maki-senpai Is a Tsundere Expert

It's quite good-looking. It's rare to have Shijou Maifei as the heroine. This character in the original work is quite likable, but it's a pity that no one writes fanfics. What kind of work have you been doing all of a sudden these two days? I'm both a council member and an onmyoji. Those who are reading this book are all here to see love and true concubines. I feel like I'm really asking for Akasaka to suddenly do this 🤦

It's been a while since I've read a Kaguya fanfic, it's so well written. It's the first time I've seen Shijo Shinobi who is not a comedian, it's a bit strange [laughing]

The writing is quite good, and it has the flavor of the original work. There is no brainless copying of the original plot, and the way the characters are inserted into the plot is relatively reasonable. There are some minor flaws in the setting, but they are innocuous. Also, the segmentation may need to be optimized. Overall, I still prefer this work.

Ah, can you forgive just such a dream? Not a buddy? What I want to see is the crematorium of chasing husbands. It's so tragic to want to persecute the concubine. So many female characters, such as Eri, keep a distance from each other in daily life. However, they are seen by the real concubine, misunderstood, have stomachache, regret, etc., And finally resolve the misunderstanding and reconcile at the fireworks display. Isn't this bad? . .

Beautiful! I have read two novels with true concubine heroines before, but unfortunately they have been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to write well. Also, the update is too slow, only one chapter per day for the past two days. Don't be too naïve, I want to take a good look at my daily life 👍

It's very well written. To be honest, I'm a grown man. I started reading it early in the morning. I cried several times while reading it. I don't know why, but I always felt very sympathetic. Please continue writing. Your novel is very good.

In fact, I feel like it would be good to follow the original work and have Zhenfei like Tanuma, and then write about the inner struggle and pain of the protagonist. In the process of pretending to be her boyfriend, she gradually developed a relationship with Zhenfei, but she didn't dare to confess it because of her low self-esteem. I feel like I can write more chapters this way, and it will be more sweet in the front and sweet in the end. If Zhenfei doesn't like Tanuma, I feel like I can't write much, and many things in the original book also have logical problems that don't make sense. I feel that the tsundere flavor is a bit weak, and it doesn't quite fit my own impression of the real concubine. I just don't feel like she has any tsundere flavor when getting along with the male protagonist.

I'll go, it's really good, but why are so few people watching it? Will it always be a single female protagonist?

The writing is very good. Among the books I have read on Tomato, it is one of the most comfortable ones.

Yes, the author, the writing is good. Do you want to come to a Shura field to play 😜 😜 [laughing]