[100% Mortality and dungeons vs. Players who will never die] [1v1 sweet pet HE]
Su Jinse was an ordinary junior star-chasing girl until she was involved in a weird horror game.
You can't get anything except charm points, but in the game world, facing all kinds of monsters, is being a heartthrob really a good thing? !
The NPC looked at her with a sticky and strange look, and the player seemed to just want to use her as a pretty bait.
What else can be done? ! Of course, hold your thighs tightly! ! !
Reader comments
The writing and plot look good. The female protagonist is smart, observant, strong and brave. She has her own ideas and will not rely entirely on the male protagonist. But I originally thought it would be the kind of multiple copies, but now it seems that I only have one copy.
The overall look and feel is good, the story is mainly based on the plot line, and the emotional line accounts for less. Personally, I feel that there is a small problem: the rules related to the copy are not explained clearly enough. I have read Chapter 90 so far. I was afraid of missing key information, so I went back and quickly scanned the previous chapters. I can feel that the author's overall outline concept is complete, and there are basically no obvious bugs before and after the plot.
But I am still confused about the dungeon rules: what actions can and cannot be done, and what is the logic of NPC behavior? What situations will be at risk? Many settings seem to be revealed only after the characters trigger corresponding events. This way of writing is not unacceptable, but it somewhat reduces the immersion of reading.
It's so pretty! It's so pretty! I've been searching on Tomato for so long just to find this kind of book that makes me stay up until after three o'clock to finish it. The author has such a big imagination and I'm looking forward to the next plot. Although it's foggy at first glance, I just want this feeling of not being able to guess the ending. The hints are too obvious and too easy to guess. The author writes well, come on [blowing kiss]
This book is really super good! The heroine has been making progress and growing up bit by bit! It's still being serialized [crying]
Oh my god, this author is such a treasure. The copy is very imaginative and wonderful. Each character is well portrayed. The only flaw is that it is not finished. Why is this kind of article not popular yet?
The fried chicken looks great! Don't miss it if you pass by! ! ! Love you so much! Author ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з
The writing and plot look good. The female protagonist is smart, observant, strong and brave. She has her own ideas and will not rely entirely on the male protagonist. But I originally thought it would be the kind of multiple copies, but now it seems that I only have one copy. The overall look and feel is good, the story is mainly based on the plot line, and the emotional line accounts for less. Personally, I feel that there is a small problem: the rules related to the copy are not explained clearly enough. I have read Chapter 90 so far. I was afraid of missing key information, so I went back and quickly scanned the previous chapters. I can feel that the author's overall outline concept is complete, and there are basically no obvious bugs before and after the plot. But I am still confused about the dungeon rules: what actions can and cannot be done, and what is the logic of NPC behavior? What situations will be at risk? Many settings seem to be revealed only after the characters trigger corresponding events. This way of writing is not unacceptable, but it somewhat reduces the immersion of reading.
It's so pretty! It's so pretty! I've been searching on Tomato for so long just to find this kind of book that makes me stay up until after three o'clock to finish it. The author has such a big imagination and I'm looking forward to the next plot. Although it's foggy at first glance, I just want this feeling of not being able to guess the ending. The hints are too obvious and too easy to guess. The author writes well, come on [blowing kiss]
This book is really super good! The heroine has been making progress and growing up bit by bit! It's still being serialized [crying] Oh my god, this author is such a treasure. The copy is very imaginative and wonderful. Each character is well portrayed. The only flaw is that it is not finished. Why is this kind of article not popular yet?
The fried chicken looks great! Don't miss it if you pass by! ! ! Love you so much! Author ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з