Arknights: Starting from the Wilderness

The protagonist is still a depressed young man with low self-esteem. When he met Sister Wolf, he was severely punished to sharpen his spirit. Now he has become a little zombie slave. Current progress: In the first couplet, the protagonist has become a salted fish. In the second line, Sister Wolf takes pity and becomes the master. Hengbiao, miserable mandarin duck. Forgive me for not being able to empathize much with the protagonist. He is as stereotyped as a standard galagame playable character. He has low self-esteem, is poor and unloved, and is pitiful and naive. The description of the protagonist's hard life not only does not make him appear to be real and really poor, but instead appears to be very illusory, like a TV series made by a petty bourgeoisie director, as if he is not poor enough. But considering that the writing style is like this, which is to develop in such a bitter and melancholy atmosphere, then my evaluation is pretty good. Like Sister Lang, I am very curious about how the next plot will go. Will the next plot atmosphere maintain the usual bitter filter? The protagonist is very suitable to sing a song now: Let the melancholy of that day become melancholy~

How to say it? The plot seems to be rigorous and not OOC (except for the author's life-saving hand), but because it is not OOC, I went back to read the introduction after reading it and found it very funny. Regarding the protagonist's experience, she became an enemy of Lapland. Even if she spares the protagonist's life, even if her attitude towards the protagonist is slow, people who have received modern social knowledge will not know that she is training dogs? I don't believe that young people from modern society People can endure this, because they have seen the light, so they can't stand the darkness; even if they can compromise and be patient, this is because they can't beat Lapland. The harder they press now, the harder they will explode. The pain and hatred will not dissipate and will only become more profound. Once there is a way to survive and win over Lapland, as long as it is a human pack that explodes with Lapland [thinking] I want to watch Defeat CG [smile]

The protagonist is indeed fw, this setting is really not what most people will like, but fortunately I can bear it [you taste it carefully]. After reading these dozens of chapters, I suddenly feel that other articles are all enjoyable [smile], okay, I can only say that the subject matter is novel and the writing is not bad, but the setting of the protagonist is not likable. The good reviews encourage the author to write more.

It's quite interesting. The writing is not green, but the story doesn't seem to have such a wide audience. The male protagonist feels a little wronged and is neurotic about pulling a dog, but it makes me look forward to how the story will develop next.

It is also the most interesting one in Ark. I said that after reading it, my forgotten memories seemed to be attacking me. It turns out that he is the author of the book "Orca, Shark, Little White Wolf". Let me give you my opinion. 1 Compared to the previous book, the pace of the heroine is indeed a lot slower, which is a good thing. The plot will not be too abrupt. However, when the male and female protagonists were separated at Longmen in the update, I noticed something was wrong. I felt that the plot had reached the same level as the previous one. I am waiting to see this one, hoping that it will not be like the previous one. 2. Be sweet when you need to be sweet. I feel that the climax of this book has passed. It's time to be sweet. Don't continue to abuse MiHoYo, which will make you tired. You have to give some sweets to the players. 3. Don't go to the middle where you are doing a big final job. To be honest, that job is really not good-looking. It is understandable for a debut novel, but it is really not good for this book. 4 Regarding the system, you really need to enable the hacks that need to be enabled, but you need to consider the meaningless tasks. The system is there to help and hack, not to replace the protagonist's brain. It should be stopped when it needs to be stopped. In fact, this is also a common problem of every system. After looking at it for a long time, it seems that the author didn't know how to write this thing but made a system to specifically let the protagonist do it. It is very abrupt. 5. Regarding the protagonist's personality, there should be an outline dedicated to writing about his changes, otherwise the plot will be difficult to write if it stays like this (I feel like the author is working on this after Chapter 119) 6 Don't interrupt the update. What will we eat if it is interrupted? [Laughing]

Okay, I almost choked to death when I showed it to my buddy. The male protagonist's setting made me feel a little awkward. At least there is no such person around me. Someone like the male protagonist might climb to 20 free-fall and hit the ground with his elbow after reading this article. The writing is good and the sense of substitution is strong. Could you please tell me about the period?

The writing is quite good. Lapland fits the character, but the protagonist is a bit twisted, but he is also a half-normal person. It is worth reading. I also have great expectations for this book. After seeing that the original five-star review was maintained, it is more suitable for emotionally sensitive people to watch "Hai Hai Qing Tian". Lagou, who has been deprived of love since childhood, gets true and loyal love for the first time. The male protagonist is exploited and deceived but still can't let go. Is hate as high as the sky, or love as wide as the sea? The absurd night is as beautiful as flowers, and the beauty has scars on its heart. Nothing to say, 20 chapters have been updated in two days, and God has come to give it a five-star review.

I have caught up with the main force. It is very beautiful and worth recommending. I can't wait to see Lapland take control. The Lapland with full gravity is the best. I like it so much [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The author should update it quickly. This is completely insufficient [crying][crying][crying][ Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] (Should Lapland have a single female lead? Lapland has too few singles, I hope so)

This is really a rare and good book. First of all, the author's writing style is very good, and the emotional description is very detailed, and it is not a pleasant book. Personally, it is very good to have this in Tomato. In terms of character creation, I am a level 56 Xiaodeng in Arknights, and the author's portrayal perfectly fits my impression of Lapland's madness. I don't think the protagonist is that different. In the early stage, he just didn't understand the world. In addition, Lapland was suppressed by force, and the resistance failed. He looked a little resigned to his fate. Later, he held up the pure Origin Stone to threaten the pursuers, and went out to find food in a blizzard. This must be different. As for the system, I think it was too late, or it didn't exist. If the system appeared so late, the protagonist's previous hardships would feel like they were in vain (only a personal opinion). Finally, I want to say, the author begs you to keep writing, it is not enough to read and is too short. Come on, author.

I think based on the physical difference between humans and Terran people, it's a miracle that the protagonist didn't become crippled in the previous two... It's hard to imagine how it will develop in the future.

There are currently 26 chapters in total, all of which are about watching the protagonist suffer (at least I think so) and there are no highlights yet. Ahem,,,

I read it all night and finished the latest chapter. I am ready to read it again. It has been a long time since I saw a novel that attracted me so much. I think the description of Xiaola's setting is very consistent. Crazy, fits my impression of her. Even the male protagonist's character is too simple. Is it because he has no ability? [What] I was very happy to watch the little torture at the end. I usually like to watch the ending, but I started to look forward to the ending. (I hope it ends well, just a little torture) [Send heartfelt message]

It's bitter first and then sweet. There are some poisonous points in the front, but I have read many novel websites, and I can see that the author's plot is really good. The later scenes of hemolysis in the snow and life in the mist really feel that the arrangement is not too abrupt, because to be honest, many people find it uncomfortable, but the author's writing is very real, with a somewhat cowardly Lu Mingfei version of the male protagonist. Many people in Tomato fanfiction pursue cool stories, and the female protagonist is incompetent, or else it is a narration and mindless joke. The work is really good, I hope it continues and doesn't fall apart like the previous one.

The latest chapters are pretty good, better than the ones in the middle. The author seems to have used AI tools to expand the writing. Some places read strangely, but overall it's probably still manual work. The setting of the protagonist is quite interesting. If you want to write it well, you have to see how the emotional line will continue later. When I commented, the overall rating was only 5.0. I think it is indeed low, at least much better than those pure AI articles.

How can I put it, the protagonist's decline is well done, and as for the rest, it's quite bold, but there are a few chapters in the middle that are a bit unclear. I look forward to seeing the protagonist's despair when he is with Texas when I look forward to Lagou's reunion with the protagonist. (A four-star rating proves that I am serious about my review) As for i TV, what about the tile throwing mentioned before? I need more power!

The character of the protagonist is very close to life, like an ordinary person who has traveled through time, but he is not a complete wimp. He was turned into a knife brother by Lapland, but he still retains his own bottom line. It seems that Lapland is in charge, but the status of the two is essentially equal, and the author's writing style is also very delicate and the writing is great👍

Why did I get beaten as soon as I brought it in😭

I was tortured by Lapland in the first part. I watched it for a long time and finally finished it. The sadomasochism strikes. The story of going through the snowy mountains with him in the second part is very good. However, the two of them were reluctantly separated later, which made me forget all about their love and affection, and I almost forgot about Lapland. Then it feels okay to forcibly strengthen the system. I thought that the golden finger was the pure human race. I added a few more and then cut them off, and then let Texas be added to create the Shura field🥺. I feel sorry for Texas, Angel and the protagonist. Love it. Please update more frequently.

This twisted emotion is so delightful😍The only flaw is that the protagonist was given too much attention in the early stage, purely cosplayed by Aian TV There is also the issue of AI. My suggestion is to polish it as much as possible. After all, 98% of Tomato's books are now written by AI, so it's hard to criticize anyone.

Putting aside Lapland's identity as the single pusher, This book is also very well written. The plot is delicate and unfolds slowly and not abruptly. But I personally feel that the part about Texas and the system is full of contradictions. Come on, author [Like]

So what else can I say? Such a good novel is both true and very beautiful. I have taken it for granted. Why don't you give it full marks? Among these countless cool articles, how many novelists have forgotten why they wrote it, why they persisted, or even gave up, just for a little traffic. Isn't it just because you want to change? "Change"

[Thinking][Thinking][Thinking], I somewhat don't understand. The Ark did not specifically mention that humans have Originium resistance. Only Babel mentioned using the doctor's blood to improve Originium inhibitors. I think the reason why it is [Human] is much smaller than the [Originite authority] reason. Why do so many fans simply assume that humans have Source Stone resistance? From a biological perspective, it is debatable whether the two are the same species. I consider myself to be average. I have never killed an OOC male protagonist before. I wanted to write about a minor character but I tried to hack the system for him. I am stuck in a range that I think I can't go up or down. I can't comment on the semi-crazy emotional line of Lagou. The growth of the protagonist...

I said kids, everything is going to be fine, do you feel it? The beginning area is finished, but I say it started to look better after the natural disaster. Ou Wan immediately rushed to the battlefield in the era of great depression, and i'an TV was delicious. The "system" felt out of place at first when it first appeared. Later, it turned out that it was not a deus ex machina-style golden finger, but it just had the name "system". It was like the system to Tzeentch. When the protagonist died several times, or in the "conscious dream" dialogue before his death. This matter has long been recorded in the Yongle Dadian☝🏻🤓. I really like these paragraphs that use the stream of consciousness to describe the protagonist's psychological transformation and enlightenment. I said the big one is coming, you guys👂🏻🐲🐴😡!

I'm not giving it five stars because of how good it is. But I have an expectation for it. Can the protagonist be changed? I hope the heroine is not Lapland. [Laughs] A little rough.

I have seen the latest chapter so far. The plot is probably that the male protagonist enters the Ark as an ordinary human and meets Lapland and a series of things happen. The poisonous points encountered so far, or some people may not be able to accept, such as the love between the male protagonist and Lapland, which is similar to Stockholm; the experience with Texas is similar to deus ex machina. Although I know it is to bring out some important settings, the foreshadowing and ending are too rough; so far in the plot, the relationship with Lapland has passed the period of ambiguity. , But it is not clear how the author handles the interpersonal relationships between the male protagonist and Texas, Angel and others; as well as the growth of the protagonist, currently it only focuses on portraying the character through the past. It is clear that the protagonist has experienced so many events, but it feels that the growth shown or the highlights given are still too little. As a reader, I still look forward to seeing some highlights of the protagonist's growth. To sum up, due to time constraints, I have no way of knowing how the last two points will change, but if you can accept the first two points, or if you like the twisted emotions of hating Hai Qingtian, then this book is worth reading.

The writing is very good, not the usual kind of grand and empty narrative, but showing a world bit by bit from small things and details. From what I have read now, it is more like small details that are easily overlooked, a bit similar to the "psychological growth of the protagonist" and "thinking change" that many authors have mentioned after time travel. Personally, I feel that the writing style is still very good, and it may have a little AI flavor (but now there are almost no novels that don't have an AI flavor) As for the characters, the writing is very realistic. The protagonist is really how ordinary people might behave after traveling through time. Pulling the dog is also very similar to the actual reaction a person would have after coming into contact with such an unknown person in the wild. Although many people say that the protagonist is a bit different, I personally feel that it is possible to show this reaction based on the protagonist's previous background (isn't this a bit too silly? Bro, as a time traveler, you are no longer ordinary) Of course, overall I feel that the writing is still very good. I recommend reading [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food]

It's so powerful that it has no edge. I personally rate it as the super-large cup of the stomach ache series. From the beginning of life in the wilderness until about 50 chapters in, when the dog was shot in the thigh by a bow and arrow, I gave up watching it. The previous plot was really uncomfortable. But the part where the prisoner escaped with the dog really pushed my rating up a notch, and the follow-up German Dog If made me even more pleasantly surprised. I can only say that this work is one of the best in the Stomachache series. This is the first time I have rated a work on Tomato in the past 6 years and the first one I have given a paid gift to. Author, you are so awesome! ! ! (Note: I have not logged in before and watched on multiple different devices, so don't worry about the reading time of my account)

Promise me, I will keep going It looks much better than before. The question is whether it can have a single female lead [sending my heart]

Give it 5 stars to encourage me. In fact, the development is quite reasonable. The relationship between the two people changes slowly. Although it is sad at first, there will be a sudden change later. It is well written, but if you can't stand the situation where the protagonist is too turtle in the early stage, then I didn't say you can run away.

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