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Asking for All Directions! Charming Man! No Slicing!
It's okay to wear it quickly, but as long as it's a male heartthrob and not sliced, you can push it up and smash me to death! Thank you all! ❤️ I also like the kind of person who becomes a fan of everyone!
1Vn Heartthrob Dual Male Protagonists, Don't Slice and Dice Quickly
I don't need to push it. I've finished reading it (I'll also read the new book). It's best not to have a secondary CP.
No Novel with Two Male Protagonists Can Arouse My Interest in Reading... [Smoking. JPG]
I want to read a book similar to "On How Straight Men Survive in the Cracks in the Pornography (One-Way Bidding)". I've been coming to Red Persimmon for a long time. I've seen everything I should see and a lot of good stuff. I'm so bored now... When I look through Red Persimmon, I can't get into any of the books.
Good Writing! ! ! Shuangnan! There Are so Many Foreign Persimmons That Are so Hot That They Don't Look Good at All!
I Want the Protagonist to Be a Straight Man, a Strong, Heart-Throb, and Don't Want to Be Flirty and Don't Have Milk Burps.
He's just a straight man, no CP, but everyone likes him. He needs to be a tough guy with slow emotions. He can be cheerful or indifferent.






















(The following is my personal opinion. It is normal to disagree. If you have other opinions, please do not take it too seriously and leave unfriendly comments) It can be seen that the author has good intentions in creating the characters. Most of the characters are very three-dimensional. From other readers' comments, it can also be seen that the three-dimensional level allows readers to understand and even empathize with the characters, that is, they almost treat the characters as living people. One of the things I like most about this book is that it doesn't seem stereotyped just because of the supporting characters (in fact, some novels don't even have a three-dimensional protagonist), and it looks more real. The character's psychological description, language description and even action description are relatively delicate, reasonable and relatively realistic. At the same time, the emotional development is also very smooth and not abrupt. Another point is that the motives for what the characters do are relatively reasonable, and their behaviors are consistent with their growth environment and identity background. It is not like some novels on the market that write about young masters and ladies from well-known families. In addition to the character creation, the description of the background environment is also quite good, detailed enough to give readers a sense of the picture, but not redundant, and it feels quite real (after all, I am not a rich person, and I am not sure whether the life of the real young master and lady, the hotel where he lives, the place where the party is held, etc. Are similar to those in the article). In addition, the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. If we want to talk about shortcomings (em is actually not really a shortcoming, it even feels like a bit of an advantage to me... Because unless it is so exaggerated that I can't bear it, I am not used to writing about the shortcomings of other people's novels in book reviews. If you need to, you can go to Demining), the most impressive thing is that it is so real that it writes out all the embarrassing scenes that you will encounter in reality (although it includes artistic processing, the difference is not very big). I give five stars because I want the score of the work to be higher. I feel that this book still deserves a higher score. It does not mean that it is really perfect (ps: there is no perfect thing in the world). Finally, come on, author, I hope you and your works get better and better! 🥰🔥 Also (although it is a very basic thing), "" and "" are used correctly... (It's really weak, I haven't seen them used correctly in thousands of years)
I was attracted to it as soon as I read the introduction. I am not saying that Xiao Jiang has a strong sense of straightness. This road is also full of tea. The quarrel between He Ran and Xiao Jiang is quite funny. Moreover, the Shura field that is so obvious now has really been seducing me. It is so beautiful! [Laughs][laughs] From the first few dozen chapters to the end, it was really great. I didn't expect it to end so early. In the later stages, I couldn't understand Mr. Yan less and less. The pull between him and Xiao Jiang made me both enjoyable and annoying. The most unacceptable thing is that in order to get Xiao Jiang, he hurt Xiao Lu and turned the young couple into little bitter gourds. Although Xiaolu was jealous of Mr. Yan, he still cared about Xiaojiang first, and with Xiaolu there, Xiaojiang didn't have to think too much. Xiaolu is very possessive, but he is also very kind to his wife. He is not willing to let Xiaojiang suffer. Xiaojiang wants to stay away from Xiaolu. Xiaolu also waits silently. Lujiang 99
It's very good-looking. It's this cold face that sticks to my wife the most. The little wild cat has a charming personality. The atmosphere is like a school drama. Let's add some group portraits. It's so cute. The part about the young lovers having a cold war was very sad for me. I really couldn't understand the operation of the big brother Yan Zhi. It was so gloomy. Anyway, I won't lose money by investing in the shares. Finally, I wish the author a happy day and 108 updates🥰😍
I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to read 200 chapters every day, and OS finally allows me to read something good. It's also very fast to see, okay. I must give it a thumbs up, it looks great, it's absolutely amazing. [Blowing kiss][crying]
Finally tied! I've also finished reading the author's last book! Xiaojiang, a very pure straight man! This path is also pretty. Xiao Fang felt that he was living a good life but it was Jin Xu who was outside and failed him. Maybe it was because of perspective. In fact, Xiao Lu and Xiao Fang both had different sadness. . . Big cheers for the author! !
I will tell you in the most straightforward, straightforward, least roundabout, most objective, most correct, most systematic, most truthful, most concise, easiest to understand, and least pretentious way: It looks good. Tasty
Tied, as of Chapter 162 (probably the beginning of imprisonment), I personally think that the most exciting part is the Shura field in the middle period, the incident in the swimming pool after the data theft incident was resolved, I feel that the wife wrote it very smoothly, she was so ruthless that she forgot her feelings, it was exciting, and several male supporting characters showed their side of breaking away from the stereotypes. The readers enjoyed it😋😋😋 The plot content is quite original, and the writing is normal. Jiang and Lu are not boring after they get together, but the love is relatively slow, which makes his relationship with Yan in the later period a bit strange and deliberate. The character of Shou... Is straight forward, which can be cute, but it can also make readers feel embarrassed for him. There is a lot of male supporting characters in the article, but the introduction of the wife is not at all watery. I think the most regrettable thing is the portrayal of Yan. He is amazing in the appearance, but he can't hold it in the later stage. This is normal. After all, it is well known that writing this kind of firm 1v1 article that is very similar to NPCs requires skills. If the guarding is too strict, the article will be bland and tasteless. If it is too strong, it will easily cause the male partner to suffer. There needs to be a balance between attack and attack. To maintain the status of the main palace, it is not easy for the wife [wipe sweat] Another point is that although there is no problem with the system in this article, it and Jiang, the two sleeping dragons and phoenixes, were originally intended to bring together the original book's attack and shou, but in fact it was Jiang who first played a set of skills called "straight man operation" that were actually charming skills, and then the system did not feel anything was wrong. It gave 100 points in one pass and said, "Well done!" I almost burst out laughing at that moment, suspecting that it was pretending to be cannon fodder to attack, but it was actually a straight man attacking the crooked man system😆🤣🤪 Summary: The literary wilderness is accessible
I was so happy because of the boss's writing. I stayed up for three hours and read 90 chapters and tied it directly. Xiaolu is the kind of green tea puppy that can be coaxed non-stop. Xiaoran is a silly dog who is very strict with his master. Xiaofang looks gentle but is actually white and black. There is also our boss. The part where I was forced to kiss was too intense, so this Shura field was so cool
It's anti-routine and logical. Don't have too high expectations for Yan Zhi. He mainly acts as a stumbling block between a young couple and a mother-in-law who wants to have fun when the big ghost brain is activated. It will be particularly comfortable to forget what kind of person he is and just read the content of the article.
I tied it in two nights. In fact, I have been reading for a long time. Nothing I read was right, so I accidentally opened this book: Love at first sight, love again! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] I really like the interaction between the four little ones! [Sending Hearts] Everyone has something to say, and everyone has a full personality! [Like] Moreover, the emotional line between Xiaojiang and Xiaolu is also very natural and loving! [Sending Hearts] The writing style is very smooth, delicate and flowing, making it very comfortable to read! [Ask for more updates] I'm going to read a few of the author's other books while I'm chasing this book. Come on! [Laughing out loud]
Xiaojiang, you are so cute. It is exactly what you said, "You should like someone who is good to you, not someone who treats you well." We, Xiaojiang, are very nice and lovable. If it is just to complete a task, why would you jump into the sea? Obviously I am not good at swimming. I will treat everyone with sincerity. Xingxing, 321 began to sing: "You know, you are my only friend, and I have no experience in getting along with other friends... And we are all men, so we should be insensitive to these. ... Please forgive me if it offends you." Go, Xingxing, you treat our Xiaojiang like this. The young couple really loves each other and is delicious. On the surface, you are just like that dank male ghost, but behind the scenes, I go, just like this, penetrate into every aspect of our Xiaojiang's life. Xiaofang is an atypical fake young master from a rich family. He has a full personality. Unlike other stories about real and fake young masters, he has his own purpose, a complete character and life, and a full understanding of his own position. When he left, he just asked Xiao Jiang for a hug. Xiaohe, a timid young master with a cute dog sculpture. In the end, Xiaojiang still doesn't know your thoughts, and you are still his friend. How can I put it, it's very in line with his character? Yan, I hate him. Why did I treat our Xiaojiang like this? But I think he figured it out later and doesn't want to make the same mistake as his father. It's okay. Children can be taught. He's a crazy man. If he were the official palace, he would be very touching. But if he hugs our Xiaojiang, he belongs to the stars. Finally, this book is very interesting. I just like to play riddles. Some things can be written directly. The main reason is that I have guesses about this kind of thing, but I don't know if you don't write it [crazy]
The characters are well created, but I feel like I forgot to set them up a bit in the later stages. Jiang's character as a straight man is very well created. There are few characters on Tomato that have such a realistic character. Some of his later behaviors are very confusing to people, but overall he is very real. Lu's naughty character is very popular and cute, but I think I still can't accept this kind of character. The whole story is shaped like this. He has a strong desire to control and doesn't let Jiang play with others. Of course, this is not a lightning protection. It's like agreeing on the taboos before ordering in a restaurant just for the sake of eating instead of picking on others. I like Yan's character design very much, I prefer this type, but he is also very powerful in the later stage hahaha. If Yan hadn't taken the initiative to let go, I feel like they would have been unable to play together. There is a feeling that no one can guess what he will do next. I feel like I don't quite understand Fang's words, but when this character confessed before going abroad, his emotions were well controlled, and I can see that his writing style is very good! I also like the character of He. The character has the feeling of being a happy enemy. This book is very beautiful. The emotional language and the psychological changes of the characters are very layered. I only reviewed this book after reading it. I hope that the author can be read by more people!
Nice! 😋When I read the book, I just opened my eyes and read it🤓But I have to say that the character Yan Zhi is really well portrayed😃It's really cool to see this character alone🤤But some people may hate him🧐(It's not necessarily true, but I did feel a little annoyed when I watched it👽) In fact, it's normal to hate him, because he is the main subject. On the contrary, if you hate the character, it proves that the author has created the character really well😌But there are no scenes with He Fan and Fang Mingxu in the back🤔I am really curious about Fang's life abroad🧐I want to ask if there will be a daily extra of five people in the future😃All in all, it is very, very recommended😋It's another day to make gold out of shit👍
The writing is very good. I like this subject matter. The plot is also very interesting and novel. However, some sentences are a bit unclear (very few, but they are indeed shortcomings). I feel that the ending is a bit sloppy (personally, if you don't like it, don't complain). Then there is the author, can you please make a side story? [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] I really like Yan Zhi's character [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's super good. I actually found such a good novel. The more I read, the better it gets. The more I read, the more addictive it becomes. [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Eating Melon] [Blowing Kisses] I hope the author will keep reading more [Like] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] The young couple must be sweet.
It's rare in Western Persimmon that the three-dimensional characters are not as good as those of elementary school students. They are really good-looking!
Ono, Ono, why are you so cute?
Klass is awesome, Taikun Bar is good, but I saw that an author updated 200 chapters in one day yesterday and it became an instant hit. Well, it's the author, you know?
It's good-looking, but it's good-looking. Every time I watch Fury, there are always little girl adjectives appearing. Anyway, it makes people feel uncomfortable [sending my heart]
Very nice. Who is maliciously giving low scores?
Yes, it has a sense of living people, not a single flat label. The interaction between the two little ones is also very good [shy]
It's okay, it's a sweet story, don't read it with your brain in mind, many plots can't stand up to careful consideration. No flaws, relatively bland
Highly recommended, if you want to whet your appetite, the writing is smooth and delicate, with many small details, cute and will give you a thumbs up. I think I am quite picky. This book is very funny and interesting. I recommend it. The quality of this novel is simply not what so few people read, why why why why why no one reads it [crying]
Baby, you are just a cute little hook
It's just that Yan Zhi is so annoying
Baby, you are so stupid, tie them in your hands
Lu Linxing's green tea tastes so pure, hahaha
Still pretty good-looking. Just no extras.
It's been a long time since I've come across a book that suits my taste. It's so beautiful. Come on, the author. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
I love it. I feel so comfortable watching it!