Fighting to Be the Top Male! Wait, I'm the One Everyone's Competing For?

(The following is my personal opinion. It is normal to disagree. If you have other opinions, please do not take it too seriously and leave unfriendly comments) It can be seen that the author has good intentions in creating the characters. Most of the characters are very three-dimensional. From other readers' comments, it can also be seen that the three-dimensional level allows readers to understand and even empathize with the characters, that is, they almost treat the characters as living people. One of the things I like most about this book is that it doesn't seem stereotyped just because of the supporting characters (in fact, some novels don't even have a three-dimensional protagonist), and it looks more real. The character's psychological description, language description and even action description are relatively delicate, reasonable and relatively realistic. At the same time, the emotional development is also very smooth and not abrupt. Another point is that the motives for what the characters do are relatively reasonable, and their behaviors are consistent with their growth environment and identity background. It is not like some novels on the market that write about young masters and ladies from well-known families. In addition to the character creation, the description of the background environment is also quite good, detailed enough to give readers a sense of the picture, but not redundant, and it feels quite real (after all, I am not a rich person, and I am not sure whether the life of the real young master and lady, the hotel where he lives, the place where the party is held, etc. Are similar to those in the article). In addition, the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. If we want to talk about shortcomings (em is actually not really a shortcoming, it even feels like a bit of an advantage to me... Because unless it is so exaggerated that I can't bear it, I am not used to writing about the shortcomings of other people's novels in book reviews. If you need to, you can go to Demining), the most impressive thing is that it is so real that it writes out all the embarrassing scenes that you will encounter in reality (although it includes artistic processing, the difference is not very big). I give five stars because I want the score of the work to be higher. I feel that this book still deserves a higher score. It does not mean that it is really perfect (ps: there is no perfect thing in the world). Finally, come on, author, I hope you and your works get better and better! 🥰🔥 Also (although it is a very basic thing), "" and "" are used correctly... (It's really weak, I haven't seen them used correctly in thousands of years)

I was attracted to it as soon as I read the introduction. I am not saying that Xiao Jiang has a strong sense of straightness. This road is also full of tea. The quarrel between He Ran and Xiao Jiang is quite funny. Moreover, the Shura field that is so obvious now has really been seducing me. It is so beautiful! 😄😄 From the first few dozen chapters to the end, it was really great. I didn't expect it to end so early. In the later stages, I couldn't understand Mr. Yan less and less. The pull between him and Xiao Jiang made me both enjoyable and annoying. The most unacceptable thing is that in order to get Xiao Jiang, he hurt Xiao Lu and turned the young couple into little bitter gourds. Although Xiaolu was jealous of Mr. Yan, he still cared about Xiaojiang first, and with Xiaolu there, Xiaojiang didn't have to think too much. Xiaolu is very possessive, but he is also very kind to his wife. He is not willing to let Xiaojiang suffer. Xiaojiang wants to stay away from Xiaolu. Xiaolu also waits silently. Lujiang 99

It's very good-looking. It's this cold face that sticks to my wife the most. The little wild cat has a charming personality. The atmosphere is like a school drama. Let's add some group portraits. It's so cute. The part about the young lovers having a cold war was very sad for me. I really couldn't understand the operation of the big brother Yan Zhi. It was so gloomy. Anyway, I won't lose money by investing in the shares. Finally, I wish the author a happy day and 108 updates🥰😍

I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to read 200 chapters every day, and OS finally allows me to read something good. It's also very fast to see, okay. I must give it a thumbs up, it looks great, it's absolutely amazing. 😘😢

Finally tied! I've also finished reading the author's last book! Xiaojiang, a very pure straight man! This path is also pretty. Xiao Fang felt that he was living a good life but it was Jin Xu who was outside and failed him. Maybe it was because of perspective. In fact, Xiao Lu and Xiao Fang both had different sadness. . . Big cheers for the author!!

I will tell you in the most straightforward, straightforward, least roundabout, most objective, most correct, most systematic, most truthful, most concise, easiest to understand, and least pretentious way: It looks good. Tasty

Tied, as of Chapter 162 (probably the beginning of imprisonment), I personally think that the most exciting part is the Shura field in the middle period, the incident in the swimming pool after the data theft incident was resolved, I feel that the wife wrote it very smoothly, she was so ruthless that she forgot her feelings, it was exciting, and several male supporting characters showed their side of breaking away from the stereotypes. The readers enjoyed it😋😋😋 The plot content is quite original, and the writing is normal. Jiang and Lu are not boring after they get together, but the love is relatively slow, which makes his relationship with Yan in the later period a bit strange and deliberate. The character of Shou... Is straight forward, which can be cute, but it can also make readers feel embarrassed for him. There is a lot of male supporting characters in the article, but the introduction of the wife is not at all watery. I think the most regrettable thing is the portrayal of Yan. He is amazing in the appearance, but he can't hold it in the later stage. This is normal. After all, it is well known that writing this kind of firm 1v1 article that is very similar to NPCs requires skills. If the guarding is too strict, the article will be bland and tasteless. If it is too strong, it will easily cause the male partner to suffer. There needs to be a balance between attack and attack. To maintain the status of the main palace, it is not easy for the wife [wipe sweat] Another point is that although there is no problem with the system in this article, it and Jiang, the two sleeping dragons and phoenixes, were originally intended to bring together the original book's attack and shou, but in fact it was Jiang who first played a set of skills called "straight man operation" that were actually charming skills, and then the system did not feel anything was wrong. It gave 100 points in one pass and said, "Well done!" I almost burst out laughing at that moment, suspecting that it was pretending to be cannon fodder to attack, but it was actually a straight man attacking the crooked man system😆🤣🤪 Summary: The literary wilderness is accessible

I was so happy because of the boss's writing. I stayed up for three hours and read 90 chapters and tied it directly. Xiaolu is the kind of green tea puppy that can be coaxed non-stop. Xiaoran is a silly dog ​​who is very strict with his master. Xiaofang looks gentle but is actually white and black. There is also our boss. The part where I was forced to kiss was too intense, so this Shura field was so cool

It's anti-routine and logical. Don't have too high expectations for Yan Zhi. He mainly acts as a stumbling block between a young couple and a mother-in-law who wants to have fun when the big ghost brain is activated. It will be particularly comfortable to forget what kind of person he is and just read the content of the article.

I tied it in two nights. In fact, I have been reading for a long time. Nothing I read was right, so I accidentally opened this book: Love at first sight, love again! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ I really like the interaction between the four little ones! 💕 Everyone has something to say, and everyone has a full personality! 👍 Moreover, the emotional line between Xiaojiang and Xiaolu is also very natural and loving! 💕 The writing style is very smooth, delicate and flowing, making it very comfortable to read! [Ask for more updates] I'm going to read a few of the author's other books while I'm chasing this book. Come on! 😆