Angel Coming? but I Am an Old God

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The interaction between the two heroines is very interesting, the plot is very interesting, the logic is very interesting, the writing is very interesting, the other characters are very interesting, and the author is also very interesting. (When will the practice begin😋)

Not bad, the narrative rhythm is actually a bit bland, but I quite like this feeling, which makes people feel that these events are actually daily life (but for some intelligence conditions, I suggest that the author describe the background setting in detail, otherwise the protagonist will occasionally feel a bit confused when saying something. The most typical one is the conditions for determining the level of anomalies, such as the degree of abnormal harm. After all, if it is just a level mark, it is really difficult to explain why the protagonist, supporting characters and NPCs are so nervous and afraid of some anomalies)

I was initially attracted by the label of dual heroines. I have only read five chapters now, but I have completely fallen in love with this novel. The interaction between the two heroines is really beautiful. This slow process of getting along is really delicious. It is much better than those novels that rely on selling meat to attract readers.

A good novel, I hope the author can dress up as a woman as soon as possible

Chapter 41 has a clear description of the transformation. I haven't read it yet, but I actually hope that the protagonist is actually an angel. From the very beginning, the description of the protagonist made me feel that he was an old monster from another world who lived from ancient times to the present. But there is a description of his birth in modern society at the back. The writing before Chapter 41 really made me think that the protagonist is very suitable for the non-human identity. Whether it's an angel created by God, or the highest combat power in that world is an angel, it doesn't matter. But he happened to be a baby boy born in modern society at the beginning.

Not bad, with more than 50 chapters so far, it can be seen that the author has put great care into this book, especially the time loop in the first volume. The rhythm and writing are both good, allowing me to read it carefully and carefully. It's like finding gold in a sea of ​​dung. I will keep watching this book until it is finished, as long as the author keeps updating it or it ends badly ᗜ֊ᗜ

Most of the characters are pretty good. The description of time and space is relatively in-depth, although to be honest, it doesn't make much sense when most readers can't understand it, making it more difficult to read. But I have some dissatisfaction. Take the S-class anomaly that invades Area B. I have always felt that according to the style and tone of the book, this level of anomaly should be a Cthulhu-style one with pure malice that is difficult to understand. But what is actually depicted is a man who has a certain moral concept but can still break through the defense. As a result, he can inexplicably travel through time and space, and then is blown up by the protagonist's Eternal Certificate. But there are really a lot of problems with the whole plot. The things that I want to portray in this novel are so high-level that it is actually difficult for the author to justify himself. If an S-level can cross time and space, then why can't Guixu and Taboo investigators with higher power levels? Why can a mountain god like Guixu be so drained that he can't maintain his purity just because he gave a small amount of power to a group of mortals? Why can't he use the power of time and space to restore himself. If we could manipulate time, the world would not be like this. In fact, time has not collapsed in the currently displayed world line, and it still looks like a linear world line. So the logic behind why this happens is completely confusing to be honest. In fact, we just throw these inexplicable packages into a black box and continue running. To be honest, I think the author really takes the concept of time too lightly. He only made patches in a few local parts that are difficult to understand and seem to work, but ignored those that are not directly related to the plot. Moreover, since the protagonist has been certified forever and cannot even kill the S-class protagonist by going back in time, which can kill most graduated protagonists in novels, it is not logical to expect someone to kill him using conventional means in this timeline. In addition, this worldview is deliberately creating a sense of the end of the world, but why it is the end of the world is hard to say. If there is a shortage of resources, then why are there shortages of resources? There is no shortage of land. The anomalies are currently controllable. It is not reasonable to say that it is caused by anomalies. If there is pollution or something like that, then the girl who asked for help from the water god prayed to the well, indicating that the natural water source can be used. Then there is no reason why other crops cannot grow. Why are there shortages of resources? If there was no shortage of resources, why would we eat cockroach cakes every day? Also, the people at the bottom work long hours and are severely exploited, so who is exploiting them? The government is an institution under the investigator system. Many people who seem to have real power are investigators, but in fact the investigators themselves are not the aristocratic class who live for a living. They are indeed doing high-risk security tasks that are consistent with their income. So who has devoured the value of their labor? Also, did the makers of the 3 hours of sleep a day really not consider the issue of labor efficiency? In this society where ideological consciousness is still not low, won't those who propose such a work system be skinned? Even if all these are ignored, I still find it difficult to comment on the plot and character design of the novel. The author wanted to create an image of Su Yumu being independent rather than relying solely on the protagonist. However, in fact, her fighting ability is completely inconsistent with what she has to do. She is not a magical girl who can explode with her own sex. The reader knows that in the end only the protagonist can do it. In this case, he still tried his best to reflect Su Yumu's own growth line and did not want the protagonist to interfere. My reading experience feels rather fragmented. On the one hand, we know that her actions cannot play a decisive role and she is still the protagonist. On the other hand, the text strongly emphasizes her role. Finally, the author updates multiple novels at the same time. To be honest, I don't like this kind of wide-spreading behavior, because the new book itself consumes a lot of inspiration energy from the author. Even if the two novels are derived from two different inspirations at the same time, the energy and new ideas for subsequent serialization are limited. This kind of distribution of one old and one new is reasonable. If there are many new novels published at the same time, there will definitely be those with poor results that will be bombed, and the quality of non-published novels will definitely be worse than single publishing. I honestly don't like this attitude. In the end, this is it. Even if I am not satisfied with many aspects, I still hope that the author can write it well. In addition, I honestly don't understand the combat power system, so the above expression on the combat power system may be wrong. Because in the article, S-level and Guixu both have the prefixes of abnormal entities and events, and the relationship between tasks and task target levels seems to be that the task level is the task target plus one. Because humans and abnormal events are grouped with letters at the beginning, and then the advanced combat forces suddenly use Chinese characters and have different titles. But the mission events don't seem to be named after the Guixu level. I can't figure out whether it's a higher level, another name, or the difference between different evaluation systems. In short, it's very confusing and I can't understand it.

The writing is first-rate, and it's really rare for Tomato to have fine chaff.

The author said five stars for wearing women's clothing, now it has to be five stars [laughs]

OK Personally, I don't recommend reading chapters 39-41. There are some issues with the point of view in that chapter. By the way, a reminder, Yi Wang was a boy in his previous life (and who Yi Wang is, you will know later) [This information is incomplete]

I have read several books on this subject, and the basic story is very good, and this one is no exception. However, the writing is poor, the pace is too fast, and the dialogue content is crowded and has no ups and downs. But the foundation is still very good, keep going.

Fortunately, the two-female veteran author I follow [Send Heart] likes the character of Angel very much. It's still the background of a strange era [Learned]

After reading ten chapters, I think it's okay (?) [Laughs] Let's look forward to the future. How come the author likes every comment?

When I read this article, I felt like I was seeing the Tathagata Sutra, and my eyes were washed by it! ! ! !

A very unique book for two girls, extremely delicious😋

The old bookworm tells you that you can eat it

The heroine has her own independent growth and does not completely rely on Angel. And it can also be seen that the author has certain literary skills. Some people may not be able to accept the heroine's attitude towards angels. (There is basically no awe, except for the initial fear.)

It's very interesting, the plot is smooth, the story is novel and interesting, I think it will be popular, come on! (The author should not stop updating, he must finish writing.)

The writing is strong, the outline is well written, and the characters are well described. Come on [laughing]

It looks good, the protagonist is very interesting, the description is very detailed, Su Yumu is very real

I want to see the author dressed in women's clothing [laughing evilly]

I have finished reading the first volume so far, and it is quite interesting to play jokes. You can use your brain to see that it only becomes brainless after the pseudo-angel is registered. The other stages are quite logical, a bit like a dungeon.

The writing is very good, and the pace is a bit fast. I want to ask whether the emotional line develops from scratch or restores memory and inherits the previous progress [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen]

Five stars, for women's clothing, understand?

Nice. Forgive me for my low education, I really can't think of any words to describe it, only one word is "good looking".

It's quite good, but the author doesn't want to stop updating. I've been in a bit of a book shortage lately, and now I only have three books to read including this one! [Blowing kiss]

Update soon, author, I want to read it, it looks good, I love to read it, more... New❤️

A nice new book. The author is very cute and the writing is very good. Suddenly I discovered that the author has a lot of eunuch books, not even one of them has been completed. Don't get this one! ! !

It looks good. Is there a knife in the back?