The Wonders of the Incredible Country? Adventure

Very good bs fanfic, it made me (airplane ears) (breathing) (jumping on the computer desk) (knocking over the water glass) (being frightened by knocking over the water glass) (jumping up and knocking over the mirror and TV) (breathing at the fallen water glass and mirror) (looking at Haji The person screams provocatively) (scratches the person with bloody marks) (slaps the claws to intimidate) (arches) (explodes hair) (threatens with breath) (pounces forward) (falls) (struggles to hip-hop) (breathes to the ground) (rolls) (bites the data cable) (vicious growl)

The writing is very good. From "Little Red Riding Hood's Forest" to BS2, it is indeed one of the few good works among BS fans. I'm just a little curious as to what the protagonist's position is? The protagonist doesn't just go to Mary Sue's Grimm! If this is the case, will Alice 01 still like the protagonist?

Every time I write a book, I will give my work full marks, and then deduct points from it during repeated viewings and revisions, until it becomes useless in my mind, until I understand how to write a good story.

It's so good, but bs there are very few fanfics. It's rare to find a good one. I personally feel that this is one of the top bs fanfics I have seen so far. There is a plot that I really like. The part where the wolf, rabbit and bird come out at the beginning really feels like a fairy tale. Anyway, I think it's very good, I hope you won't stop updating it.

Personally, I think Tomato calls it the best book written by BS fans. I played BS2 in February this year and started reading novels six years ago. I am very picky about books as a 10-year-old. I think this book is quite good, but it may be because of the freshness of BS fans. However, as a book written by a new author, the flaws are not hidden and it has good potential. This book is only for insiders. People outside the circle will find this book very strange. The transition from the plot before Hongsen (I personally think the plot before Hongsen is pretty good) to Hongsen (I don't know why I feel that Hongsen wrote it in a hurry) has no foreshadowing at all. It's very abrupt and not very smooth. If outsiders read it, it will be very discouraging. Although there is an explanation later, some people are impatient and read the book based on their feelings, which is more discouraging for outsiders. For insiders, this is a five-star masterpiece, but for outsiders, what does this mean? How come this happened? What happens? What am I looking at? What was he talking about? Such a confused state (it's not that serious but can still be understood). Summary: This is a fan book for insiders. Its publicity and attraction to outsiders have not achieved good results. Finally, the circle of BS is relatively small. If it cannot attract the support of outsiders and close insiders, this book may not have particularly outstanding results, but the author, come on! The author is a new writer. This is the author's first book. The writing style is a bit inferior. The plot concept is not bad. It is already very good to be able to write it like this. The main reason is that the circle of BS is too small, which limits the achievements. For example, it is difficult for even a golden elixir monk to appear in the world of low martial arts. But the freshness brought by the small circle of BS is also one of the advantages.

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Please be sure to save them! I also wrote a little story. I absolutely disagree with the story she wrote down. Please, go save them. Use the souls of us "losers"! This is our salvation and our final atonement. It's all up to you!

Great book, made my stomach twitch [laughter]

The comfortable one is Alice🤓👆

My fists really want to drink blood. If I don't punch something for a day, I feel uncomfortable all over. I kill 10,000 enemies in my mind every day, and they pop up again after killing them. I can't finish them all, I can't finish them at all. Opponent? I left them all behind yesterday, and no one can beat them. I wash myself with sweat, pour myself with blood, and my bones are full of echoes of battle. I lose when I stand still - but that day will never come. The wound had just closed and opened again, just in time, a new exit. Fighting. Still fighting. Can't stop. Can't stop. Can't stop. I can easily knock out an adult African elephant with one punch. I usually engage in one-on-one combat training with 800kg giant brown bears. My bite force has reached a terrifying 1 million Newtons. Because I have been biting each other with Tyrannosaurus rex for a long time, my amazing bite force is enough to crush everything. I go to the national highway every day for collision training with Universiade heavy trucks. My body has been trained to the extreme. My flesh has been trained into steel. Want to compete with me? I advise you to give up this idea as soon as possible. Even if you use military force, you will not be able to kill me. My strength will always be above yours. I have restrained my desire to hunt all of you. If you dare to challenge my lower limit again, I don't mind letting my fists eat my heart today. You may be joking, but I really think so. When I was a child, I was a very honest student, and then a student in the same grade came to tease me. As a result, I threw him to the ground with a little force. Then I have always thought that if I punched with all my strength, I might seriously injure people, so you are just the prey I hunt.

How can I put it this way? It's one of the best books I've read so far. The fairy tale is very much like Andersen's style. The characters are well created and there's no OOC. The only drawback is that there are too few novels.

Interesting subject matter, interesting author, and really delicious! 😋😋😋

It is indeed a very good fanfic, but the protagonist of Little Red Riding Hood's Forest did not escape from this box garden. Little Red Riding Hood and the protagonist were thrown into the box garden of the Lost Empire, and then their gender was changed directly to Green. After all, if the gender was not changed, Little Red Riding Hood would be like that. I still couldn't accept it later, so I didn't read it further. The previous article was really good.

Well, the writing has its own characteristics. The rhythm, plot development and description are very comfortable. I look forward to the follow-up.

"Heroes slaying dragons" is a theme shared by many ancient civilizations around the world. For example, the battle between heroes and mythical beasts in the Mesopotamian civilization's "The Epic of Gilgamesh", as well as the ancient Greek mythology in which Perseus killed Medusa and Heracles completed the Twelve Trials, etc., All have the prototype of "Dragon Quest". So, your story... Will that future still be as full of dreams and hopes as I see it?

I want to see more if lines. It's the most pleasant thing for an innocent thing like Yu Yuan to be tarnished, Kuhehe

Shengsen elbowed the green flying insect, one missing and three coming [heavy punch]

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A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! They made it so that they had to give up the family party just to read the latest chapter (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this novel with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure!

Reading is not for the ending, you can't just read the last page, so I like to read the process. The ending is not too important to me, but the middle process is my favorite content. There are very few people who write this type of book. I think the content written by the author is very good. I like to read it. Come on!

It looks good, it looks good, it's a meeting, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, why hasn't it come to bs2 yet? I want to watch bs22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222. Fast update, fast update, fast update, fast update, fast update, fast update

Blacksouls is a very fun and happy game, and there are beautiful and happy stories in it. Am I right, fellow Grimms!

Hajizuo asked me to meow 15 times in the comment area. Meows who don't meow and don't give cat food are so evil. I must expose Hajizuo! In fact, Yu Yuan is Hajisaku, and Hajisaku is a gentle and kind-hearted little Nanniang. Because Hajisaku just escaped from the box garden, the plot was written so smoothly, and he was trained by Mary Sue before escaping, so he wrote Knife Meow, which was too bad, and ran away after the meow.

Let's re-appreciate bs from another perspective, abandon the curiosity for novelty, and let's take a look at the characters' true feelings that exist without being forced by the dark world. A delicious addition to your daily routine.

A very good novel, it made my brain spin, and the writing is very unique. The second one is like a fairy tale, it does not deviate from the main line, and it also writes the characteristics of the protagonist. It is one of the best among BS fans🥵🥵🥵

The book is interesting and the subject matter is novel. I want to read it again Very good book to give my fairy tale a spin

I have a problem with the original. 1: Carol was taken to the Uncanny Country by someone who looked like Alice. I think it was Alice 01. 2: Green was created by Mary Sue using the souls of all writers, including Carol. 3: The third person at the tea party in the movie Red Idol, Red Idol, hinted that he was Green. So here comes the question, how to arrange the timeline? Was it Green or Carroll at the tea party? If it was Green, how was Carol taken away by Mary Sue? After all, if it hadn't been for praying to the Lord to lead the way, Mary Sue would never have found the incredible country.

It's a very good fanfic. I spent some time speed-running through the real endings of the first and second parts before watching it. The sense of immersion is okay. I like it very much🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑 It would be better if it were faster [angry]

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A very nice novel that made my mood spin.