Weapon Girls: Infusing a Kimono-Clad Maiden with Patriotic Genes

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong⚡. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. Luffy fought with Ultraman for Rem, and the whole episode was full of light. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's words to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?", Which shows that Lin Daiyu's words to Iron Man⚡ are flying in the sky and unable to come down. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. Fighting scenes feel like you are there

It's so beautiful. I want to trick you into watching it. After watching it, you will become a divine farmer. I've tasted it all and I'm going to be poisoned. I can only say that the setting of this book attracted me. I'm going to die after looking at it again The blood in my mouth recovered a little, but I was poisoned again. OK, I saw it wrong. The blood I just received was fake. I looked at that chaebol again and it was useless when the protagonist needed help. Without personal protection, the poison resistance increased. I read on and found that the tauren are so good to betrayers, but their toxicity exceeds the upper limit.

Um. . . Dragon King is a story about endless questioning, endless shock and slaps in the face, and then repeats the cycle. No one except parents and Feiyue believes in the protagonist. Even the investors and captain do not believe in the protagonist. If you like this kind of thing, you can watch it with confidence.

I haven't read a few chapters yet, just the first eight chapters or so. Let me first say that I have never seen the author's homepage. I don't know if the author has written novels with similar themes. Here I will briefly summarize some of my impressions: The first and most important point is that it is too hasty. To be honest, the author was too hasty when writing this novel. This is not to say that it is not a good thing, but I just want to say that there are rush and slowness in writing novels. For example, can the scene where the male protagonist meets the first sword girl be slowed down? Write more about the heroine's inner drama? Sometimes you can't completely focus on a character, even if that character is the protagonist. The second point is that some scene transitions are a little immature, but this is normal. Generally speaking, it is normal for an author who is new to writing novels to be unskilled in scene transitions. There is really no way to teach this because it relies purely on experience. Everyone has different habits and prefers different transition methods. When I want to interrupt something, I will choose to transition in a ridiculous and funny way... Although I haven't read the author's homepage, I'm here to speculate that the author should be a newcomer. These are some suggestions I made. It doesn't matter if you don't adopt them. I just think it would be better for the author to calm down when writing a novel.

It has great potential, but it also has some problems. The big conglomerate uses its power to bully others, and the protagonist is still too weak to take revenge immediately. Your own weapon is sss+, but it cannot be exposed. My forging skills are invincible, but others don't believe it. These similar plots often appear in other novels, and some readers will actually feel suppressed after reading them. For example, some novels use some villains, write a lot of plots, various targets, calculations, threats with family members, etc. Part of the reason for sticking with it is to see how it will be settled later. As a result, later in the novel, when the protagonist has enough strength, he just casually kills the enemy in two lines and ends it. I personally feel that this is too unbalanced. Either after the protagonist has been able to deal with the villain after being targeted and suffering all the time, he should write an extra page or two to describe the inner pain and regret of the enemy and how the protagonist takes revenge (similar to the kind of momentary explosion of depression to the extreme [laughing]). Or there is a confrontation between the protagonist and the villain in the plot. For example, one of the protagonist's materials was taken away by the villain (the protagonist cannot defeat the opponent due to background reasons such as combat power, etc., So this is pushed down), but the protagonist manipulates the materials, causing the villain to make mistakes while refining the weapon. Injured (here is pushed up again, similar to the battle of wits, so that the protagonist will not be frustrated due to forces, combat power, etc.). I hope this novel can be written well. I love reading novels of the same type, such as motorcycle girls and mecha girls, which are all quite good.

Let me give it a rating of 4 stars. 5 Stars really can't be given [face covering] Let's talk about the advantages. The protagonist doesn't have much strength to carry out the crime, so it's normal to be hunted down all the time. Among the main villains, Long Jie had a normal life in her childhood. She found someone to play the protagonist in the game, and chased the protagonist herself outside the game, which made up for the hard work of the protagonist's growth. Let's talk about the shortcomings. First of all, the protagonist's deflation is obviously forcibly given. If the knife is broken, the quality will definitely decrease. The protagonist repairs the knife, but the context is unclear. If it were not for the protagonist, the knife would probably be a waste. The author can also give it an SSS rating, which is obviously a reason for the villain to target the protagonist. ; Then the combat power setting is too funny. Who the protagonist can beat and who he can't beat depends not on the combat power setting but on the author's mouth. In the end, this book chooses a small day to be the female protagonist. Finally, I had a plot suggestion that Brother Long was accidentally killed by Xiaori, and the Long family was extinct. In grief, Sister Long fought with Xiaori and drove Xiaori back. Later, the captain of the imperial division gave Long Jie a suggestion, asking Long Jie to borrow a seed from the protagonist, adding the genes of the most potential man in the world to his own, and letting Long Jie re-train one. Later, through this incident, the male protagonist gradually accepted Long Jie [Thinking]. (If you don't have a harem, you don't need to consider it.

It's been two days since I read the latest chapter and it feels really good. I personally like this book better. It's not just a review, but I really think it's good to read. Everyone has their own favorite genre. I wish you all a happy reading! [Blowing kiss]

I give it five stars. Although some of the plots are a bit repetitive in today's popular Internet literature, I can't stop watching it. I haven't read a lot of content yet, and the current impression is that it's at the level of a home-cooked meal. If you're not a book reader, you can check it out. The author is also quite lively, so you can use more van (bush)

Not to mention anything else, just the setting similar to that of Lao Ge is very attractive to me, and the protagonist has his own ideas, so I have to give it a thumbs up [laughs]

I give it five stars because I feel the author is a bit pitiful [face covering]. You have a point. When I read Chapter 14, it was always Jackknife's gibbering. One sentence was said four or five times by a supporting character, and every time he had to come to the protagonist to find a sense of presence. I have an idea, that is, we can skip watching and skip the protagonist's battle part, which should be more comfortable.