The geniuses of the FBI's Behavioral Analysis Unit (BAU) guard the light in the darkness, but they cannot guard their own lives.
Profiler Al exits due to a traumatic breakdown;
Liaison officer JJ was forcibly transferred;
Maeve, the lover of genius doctor Red, was shot dead in front of him;
The supervisor, Hotchner, could only listen to the gunshots of his ex-wife Hailey being executed by the murderer on the phone, and was helpless.
Zhao Yuan traveled to this world full of regrets with the "memory crystal" of fifteen years of plot. He sat at the technical analyst's desk, looked at the group of people who were about to be torn apart by fate, and decided to do something.
He has no superpowers. What he does have is the ability to predict the details of every case and the precise insight into every tragic node.
He exploited data loopholes to give Al some breathing space;
He followed the digital trail and snatched Haley's life from the hands of death;
He raced against time and broke through the door just before Maeve fell.
In the original drama, they were heroes who suffered a tragic victory, walking alone in the night with scars all over their bodies.
This time, Zhao Yuan will spend fifteen years holding an umbrella for each of them.
When the torrent of fate hit him, he stood in front of everyone in BAU and said softly:
"This time, I will rewrite the ending."
Reader comments
This series of American dramas is too old. When I was studying, I chose to watch this show because I was learning English and loved solving crimes. It later proved that this drama is not good for beginners, but it is good for those who like to watch solving crimes.
The final season ended when I was in school, and I didn't dare to watch it because the direction of the show was too heavy. There is a very heavy haze on them, and they have also become victims, not only because they or their family members and friends are persecuted, but also because they are the ones affected by the cases they have handled. I hope they will always be good, and even if they leave the team, they can be somewhere peaceful and happy, instead of becoming real physical victims like in the drama, which is too heavy.
There are not many fanfics about this American drama, and even fewer well-written ones. The author of this one is good, and it's worth reading.
But I don't know why, the author likes to emphasize the same thing two or three times, such as the chair Gideon vacated, the letter he left before leaving, etc. I noticed five or six of them, which greatly affected the reading experience. The overly repeated content and details made me think that I was skipping to the previous chapter while reading.
Summary: A good fanfic, but the author's writing skills need to be improved.
It's a very interesting book. I dream back to the days when I watched CM Criminal Minds. I watched characters like Uncle Hotch, Morgan, JJ, and Dr. Little go through various perversions and end up being tortured in various ways. I also fantasized about saving the characters. This book uses a technical means to achieve early warning and rescue, which is great!
Although some parts of the case description are different from my memory, everyone was there. Very good. Regrets are almost always gained - it's not called making up for it, I don't know how to describe it. But the ending is happy. The details of BAU's interactions with members' families are very warm and the details of the members' interactions are very delicate and warm. We are family!
Thinking back to how I felt watching this show a long time ago, I thought Gideon would never leave.
The author's writing is pretty good, and overall it's very soft. Are there some repetitive plots that seem to be meant to deepen the impression? Water bottles, stickers, etc., But I feel like they were not handled well. Come on👏👏
A great novel. It's rare to see such personal descriptions of characters. You can think of them just by looking at the words. The author is great and the writing is very good. Big thumbs up [like][like][like]
There are not many criminal psychology fanfics. I feel okay after seeing it now, but it still has a vague AI flavor. I don't know if I have a bit of PTSD from AI fiction, but many dialogues do have that pretentious and profound feeling. If there is a sentence like "throwing stones into a calm lake" later, then it must be AI fiction, I hope not.
It's so good. I feel like I haven't seen such a simple fanfic in many years. There is something about the author who can write such good-looking things without resorting to all the bells and whistles. I look forward to the update.
BAU fandom is so rare, everyone will definitely support it
It's really well written, but it's a pity that the data is not good, otherwise it wouldn't have ended so quickly. What a pity, author, come on! Looking forward to the next one.
Come on👏, I hope I can keep writing
It's so rare to see this fanfic. Keep up the good work!
After raising it for a while, it is finally finished. It is a heartwarming ending that I like, shocking and delicious!
It's so beautiful, I look forward to a happy ending for everyone!
It's so well written, keep it up 💪
It's beautiful, but I'm afraid that there are not many people nowadays and the author lacks the motivation to update, so I need to rate it urgently [Blow a kiss]
It's so good. I've watched this show many times. I skipped the episodes where Hailey was killed. It was too harsh.
A very nice novel, I like it very much
It's good to read. It's not a novice. It's not like the books that Tomato can publish. I'm looking for a book of the same type! The teacher is hungry! ! ! ! ! !
This series of American dramas is too old. When I was studying, I chose to watch this show because I was learning English and loved solving crimes. It later proved that this drama is not good for beginners, but it is good for those who like to watch solving crimes. The final season ended when I was in school, and I didn't dare to watch it because the direction of the show was too heavy. There is a very heavy haze on them, and they have also become victims, not only because they or their family members and friends are persecuted, but also because they are the ones affected by the cases they have handled. I hope they will always be good, and even if they leave the team, they can be somewhere peaceful and happy, instead of becoming real physical victims like in the drama, which is too heavy.
There are not many fanfics about this American drama, and even fewer well-written ones. The author of this one is good, and it's worth reading. But I don't know why, the author likes to emphasize the same thing two or three times, such as the chair Gideon vacated, the letter he left before leaving, etc. I noticed five or six of them, which greatly affected the reading experience. The overly repeated content and details made me think that I was skipping to the previous chapter while reading. Summary: A good fanfic, but the author's writing skills need to be improved.
It's a very interesting book. I dream back to the days when I watched CM Criminal Minds. I watched characters like Uncle Hotch, Morgan, JJ, and Dr. Little go through various perversions and end up being tortured in various ways. I also fantasized about saving the characters. This book uses a technical means to achieve early warning and rescue, which is great!
Although some parts of the case description are different from my memory, everyone was there. Very good. Regrets are almost always gained - it's not called making up for it, I don't know how to describe it. But the ending is happy. The details of BAU's interactions with members' families are very warm and the details of the members' interactions are very delicate and warm. We are family!
Thinking back to how I felt watching this show a long time ago, I thought Gideon would never leave. The author's writing is pretty good, and overall it's very soft. Are there some repetitive plots that seem to be meant to deepen the impression? Water bottles, stickers, etc., But I feel like they were not handled well. Come on👏👏
A great novel. It's rare to see such personal descriptions of characters. You can think of them just by looking at the words. The author is great and the writing is very good. Big thumbs up [like][like][like]
There are not many criminal psychology fanfics. I feel okay after seeing it now, but it still has a vague AI flavor. I don't know if I have a bit of PTSD from AI fiction, but many dialogues do have that pretentious and profound feeling. If there is a sentence like "throwing stones into a calm lake" later, then it must be AI fiction, I hope not.
It's so good. I feel like I haven't seen such a simple fanfic in many years. There is something about the author who can write such good-looking things without resorting to all the bells and whistles. I look forward to the update.
BAU fandom is so rare, everyone will definitely support it
It's really well written, but it's a pity that the data is not good, otherwise it wouldn't have ended so quickly. What a pity, author, come on! Looking forward to the next one.
Come on👏, I hope I can keep writing
It's so rare to see this fanfic. Keep up the good work!
After raising it for a while, it is finally finished. It is a heartwarming ending that I like, shocking and delicious!
It's so beautiful, I look forward to a happy ending for everyone!
It's so well written, keep it up 💪
It's beautiful, but I'm afraid that there are not many people nowadays and the author lacks the motivation to update, so I need to rate it urgently [Blow a kiss]
It's so good. I've watched this show many times. I skipped the episodes where Hailey was killed. It was too harsh.
A very nice novel, I like it very much
It's good to read. It's not a novice. It's not like the books that Tomato can publish. I'm looking for a book of the same type! The teacher is hungry! ! ! ! ! !