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This is my first book review. It's really well written. How should I put it? It kind of fits my imagination of the Liang Sui in the Liang Tian Mi Sui line. After playing the side story of Aihong's Ryota Miho, I have always felt that the knot between Ryota and Miho has not been completely resolved. They need to find a suitable opportunity to express their feelings to each other before they can truly untie the knot between them. Liang Sui's emotional line is well written, Liang Sui's character design is also very consistent, and the writing style is also first-rate. It's a pity that it only has a five-star rating, otherwise I would give it a ten-star rating!

If you look at my bookshelf, you will know that I have read a lot of Hungry Death novels. How can I put it, this is the first time that I can be deeply involved in the storyline. The author is very successful in shaping the character of the characters. Whether it is Qingci or Zhao Hu, they all seem to have been moved from the original works. They are different from other novels written for this character. Sui Heliang's emotional disputes, love, hate and sadness are very vividly described. In the latest chapter I read, Mansui's inner restlessness and Heliang's helplessness really moved me. The author's emotions are also aroused. The author did not deliberately give out sweets or write cool articles without thinking. This is in line with the society of that era. The author's writing style is also very good. The description of the storyline is not obtrusive. It is the best one among the many second creations I have seen. That's it. I hope the author can work hard and continue writing. Although there are fewer people reading now, gold will always shine. I also hope that the author will pay attention to his body, rest when he is tired, don't force himself, and be happy every day [Love] [Love] [Love] You can create a book friend group. If the author has questions, he can ask the book friend. If he has a creative bottleneck, he can complain in the group. If the book friend has any suggestions, he can also provide [love] [love]

I think this fanfic is the best one that picks up the plot of Mitsuho Ryota among the many fanfics I have read. The plot has both sweetness and sharpness, and is not inconsistent at all. Especially Man'an's plot further promotes the development of the plot, rather than just making sweets. The description of Ryoho's daily life also makes people feel warm but not sweet. It can be said that it greatly alleviated the impact of the original work on me, especially the part where Ryoho co-starred in the movie. The literary foundation is very, very solid, which made me smile knowingly after playing the original work. All in all, this is a very, very good fanfic. I hope the author, the teacher, can give Liangsui a happy ending, and he should also take care of himself. Among thousands of stories, who is infatuated? One mistake or two, and the beauty is gone. Repeatedly, they finally meet again.

The writing is very immersive, and it is indeed a time killer for me. I didn't even react after reading it, thinking that the network card was not flashed [face covering]... The plot of the story is well designed, unexpected, and reasonable; the details of the entire article are also quite suitable. It can be seen that the author went back to read and polish it carefully after finishing it. The description of Liang Sui's ambivalence is also very interesting. In short, this sweet article is indeed of high quality. I hope the author's writing style can be maintained. At the same time, I want to say that the author does not have to rush to write in order to complete the task. The effect of polishing it carefully is better, and there is no need to strain yourself, otherwise it will be a good thing :)

If you look at it from my perspective, this is undoubtedly a pretty perfect work. The author has obviously put a lot of effort into character creation. The character creation and characteristics of the original characters have not collapsed. The original characters have played their respective roles. They are neither too redundant nor too boring. The writing style is very comfortable to read. Maybe it's because wild boars like me eat less fine bran. Anyway, the author's writing style is very good in my opinion. It should have that kind of aesthetic feeling - as light as the wind blowing on the face. Underneath, there are magnificent emotions hidden, which are worthy of our appreciation. In terms of plot, the author continues the plot and historical background of the original work, and continues the story of the characters without changing the historical background. It is convincing and the pull between the characters is also very real (I have read Chapter 30 so far, but I haven't gotten bored yet). However, I think the pace is a bit fast in terms of Liangsuo's mysterious plot (hehe). Of course, if the author has his own arrangements and ideas, I will naturally accept them. All in all, this game should have a place in the second-generation startup circle in the future. I look forward to this day [get it][like]

It was only after I posted the ratings that I remembered that I should add a book review. First of all, this novel is undoubtedly the first echelon of the second creations of Hungry Death in my heart, and it is the best and best of the second creations starting from Ryota Miho. The writing style of this book is clever, and the author is very good at describing the psychological activities of the characters. The rich emotions expressed through the words of psychological description really moved me. The description of Liangsui's daily life is a major source of sweetness in the article. These descriptions are full of warmth, which made my heart warm after reading it, sweet but not greasy. It is worth mentioning that the author also created through various forms. The one that impressed me the most was the author's use of shadow puppetry to retell the story of Liangsui's Thousand Mile Journey in the late Ming Dynasty in the form of drama. It was really touching. This book has a charm that makes people want to read it a few more times after reading the new chapters. The character design of Liang Sui is very close to the original work. The author created a real and three-dimensional Liang Sui, and described the development of their emotional line naturally. At the same time, it made up for the lack of Liang Jiu and Sui Jiu in the ending of the original work, and truly showed the psychological changes of the two. The relationship between Liang and Sui shown in the novel is exactly what I thought: the hatred is real (and has never been forgotten), and the love is also real (already covering the hatred). They complement each other's souls. Their love and hate are like two sides of a coin. If one loses the other, neither can exist independently. The two did not get married like many second creations, but they still love and coexist with each other, which is in line with the possible development of the characters and plot in the original work. I think this is the best and most likely ending. The author skillfully uses original characters represented by Man An to promote the development of the plot. He also brings these characters to life like Liangsui, creating individuals with rich emotions and distinctive personalities. In terms of plot, the author tells the story of the two people under the real historical background. The historical research is very rigorous. The plots are interlocking and can withstand scrutiny. They are both sweet and sharp, reflecting the real era of the late Ming and early Qing dynasties. All in all, this work has surpassed the original work in a sense. It is definitely the first echelon of many starving deaths. I believe that Liangho will definitely get a happy ending in the end. I also hope that the author will take care of his health and be happy. What is the destination? ''I know that at this moment, she is still alive. I can be with her and watch her live. Just that, it is the best thing for me. ''

It's really well written, good luck to the author I've been following it from the first chapter to now, and I've already helped recommend the author in the steam comment section and other hungry circles. You just need to take care of yourself [Thoughts]

Five stars is just the upper limit for Tomato It's so well written [adoration][adoration]

It's good-looking. It's the successor of Liangtian Full of Ears in my mind. It's sweet but not overdone. Moreover, the author has written the Liangjiu Nian in my mind. Very few people can write Liangjiu Nian well. Liang's pain is actually great. He is trapped by Luoyang Lake and may never be able to get out in his lifetime.

Yes, it's well written and well written. This is the only book I've read for fans of Tongsheng Ending [Like]

The author's writing is really good. There is no deliberate sugaring, but the warmth of Liangsui is particularly delicate. I highly recommend it! ! !

It's better than mine and the structure is clear

It's very immersive, as if you'll fall into that scene after watching it for a while

It's so beautiful, I have a follow-up in mind

Tiantiantian must be recommended👍👍👍

Give me the original piece of wood and one person chopped it open and said it was [crying]

The author wants to keep writing, good luck

The writing is pretty good No, no, no. This is undoubtedly the best series I have ever read among all the series of Two Creations and Ones. The structure is clear, the writing is excellent, and the characters are in line with the original work. Yeah, it hits the right note.

Sweet but not greasy, good times

It's a pity that the highest rating is only five stars, otherwise it would have to be rated ten stars.

With great attention to detail, perfect description of emotional lines, no poisonous points, and the occasional knife, this is truly one of the best works among Hungry Death fanfics.

The author's writing style is very good. It continues the writing style of Ryota Mitsuo's extra chapter, which makes people feel very immersed. Thank you for the author😊

The sense of immersion is very strong, and it's great to see from various perspectives.

Beautiful, sweet but not greasy, update soon

God, you can play games with Guan Haiguo [laughing]

Beautiful, so beautiful

Personally, I feel that it is a t0 among Hungry Death II. The high score is only a matter of time. As long as the author completes the game and makes it a masterpiece, the characters perfectly fit the original work, the plot development is reasonable, and it follows the historical trend, it will feel like a real sequel to the game [Congratulations] [Like]

The sense of immersion is very strong, showing a world of flesh and blood, and the characters are also very vivid.

The fireworks of life were the meaning of my childhood It is also the best imagination, the interweaving of details and emotions Wandering between the gaps, you have your own sense of style and beauty

The characters can be said to be the best written ones.