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The first world is actually not that good to watch, but Shuhuang can keep reading, because it is too long, so I skipped through it, and the plot is a bit inappropriately released, so it is not very attractive. But the second world is not bad, the writing has improved significantly, and it will make people want to follow it. In the first world, the heroine is stupid and smart at the same time, which makes her not like it in some parts. But in the second world, she has made progress. That's okay, as long as the heroine can make little progress. The second one is quite interesting, but it ends too unexpectedly, and the writing style needs to be improved. The third world is relatively bland, and the fourth world is now 8 chapters in, and there is still no other person. It's too biased. The first world is still bearable, but what is the fourth world about? The writing is messy. A sect is a sect and a family is a family. One moment it talks about setting the clan rules and building a foundation to accept people. Then it talks about going to the sect. What does the sect have to do with the family? It's okay to just talk about the sect's rules. I'm speechless. I wrote the family the same as the sect. I don't even bother to figure out the logic behind it. The fourth world is completely superficial. I have to write about other characters while talking about cultivation, and I also have to write about a villain who slaps the original protagonist in the face, and then the heroine is put aside to watch the fun. Haha, later on, she appears to take her mother back, and then an inexplicable person comes to harass the heroine's mother. Then the heroine kills someone again. When she goes back, she has to connect with the original protagonist's family again. Let's just drag it on, without any outline. The first world is written with a little bit of water, but overall it's passable. The second and third worlds are indeed about to go through time, but the ending is a bit inexplicable, but overall it's okay. The fourth world, the sea, is all water.

Hahahahaha, this is fake forced love, the heartthrob text [smirking] Mother in the World, this is what it tastes like.

Immortal product! ! ! ! I ate it very much, but there is nothing poisonous about it. It is now tied. The author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The heroine is fighting against the system. Haha, if the system doesn't work with it for a day, it will feel uncomfortable, right? Haha, what the heroine thinks in her heart and what she shows are two different things. I am very scared of the heroine. Actually, she is not at all, except that some people who have never seen her before will be scared.

Not bad! The pace is not sluggish, the character settings are quite harmonious, and some of the character transitions are smooth and reasonable. However, some worlds feel a bit too short, and it ends before the emotional line is unfolded. If the author sees this comment, I hope you will not give up on this book. I believe there are many people besides me who are looking forward to the next content of this book! [Top post][Add one to the bookshelf][Has been planted][The masterpiece of bird food]

It looks good, cheers, author

It looks good and looks good. I will continue to follow up. [Asking for more updates] [Asking for more updates] [Asking for more updates]

The rice is so fragrant and delicious, hey hey [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It's super beautiful, Shura Field is really delicious, the author must keep on making more [exploration] [exploration] [exploration]

Ask the author. Are all the male protagonists clean physically and mentally? The author responded greatly. The male protagonists are clean physically and mentally. The story of the first world of Fast Travel is just a few chapters away from being finished and is about to end. The plot is exciting and beautiful. The heroine is super stable. [Love][Sending Hearts]

Update quickly, there are too few updates [Hold][Hold]

It's nice to look at, there's nothing wrong with it, and the writing is pretty good.

Not bad, I like it 😍

Someone is watching! Beautiful, love to read and write more

The second world is so cool!

I like the character of this heroine

Especially delicious 😋Write more from the author

This is so well written that I like it so much. I like the rational brain of Mad Pip. The more you taste, the more you become more and more immortal [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen]

It's great. I love reading it. I will update more. I've finished reading the first story. It's perfect. I'm looking forward to the following content.

It's very good to watch, at least I kept laughing the whole time I watched it. Come on, the author, please update more.

Delicious, update soon. Can you write more worlds? It's modern and interesting.

It's so beautiful, but it's too short. A longer article would definitely include