I Transmigrated into a Female-Oriented Novel: My Outrageous Moves Shocked Everyone

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a relaxed and happy story, which is more to my liking, because I personally like the way the protagonist and the emperor and prince can trust each other and develop the country together. There are also some flaws. It seems that the author changed the outline midway, and the female villain was relatively blunt. Secondly, the overall writing is relatively simple, whether it is strategies and policies, investigation and fighting, inventions and creations, they are all written very briefly. Especially some strategies and policies, as well as the battle to defend the capital, if written in a deeper level and with more ups and downs, the effect will definitely be much better.

It's okay, it's more of a daily routine. The protagonist's character is also happy-go-lucky, so the tone of the story isn't one of bitterness and hatred.

The setting of a woman who traveled through time and became a tragic male supporting character, Chu Yun, wakes up and saves herself is very innovative. Unwilling to reproduce the tragic ending of the original book, he did not follow the romantic route, but cleverly used counter-poems to disrupt the original male protagonist's plans, and focused on making trouble and making money. The writing style is relaxed and everyday, without the heavy sense of revenge and oppression. The contrast between the imperial examination and the book is full of contrast. The plot is full of fun. Watching the protagonist tear up the original plot line is very relaxing.

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I have reached chapter 91 now. This book is one of the few that suits my taste. It is not a particularly fast-paced book that makes people feel tasteless, nor is it particularly poisonous. The male protagonist is not the kind of person who just accepts women casually. He has his own personality and is very interesting. As you read on, you will feel like a trickle of warm water, which makes people can't help but keep reading. However, I think we can write more about the relationship between the male protagonist and Xiao Qingqing, and it doesn't need to be too sweet. Just write more. It would also be good to advance the emotional line appropriately.

It's quite interesting. So far, the monarch and his ministers are in harmony. The monarch is wise and capable, but not very serious. There is no particularly deep official struggle. It seems relatively relaxed. As long as it can continue to be like this, the score should not be lower.

Yes, but the content of the book has nothing to do with the title. It is said to be a time-travel female channel, but in fact it is just an early female villain based on the ancient stories of ordinary male channels. It is mainly about the plot of the protagonist reducing dimensions in ancient times to fight against the ancients. The only dissatisfaction is that the protagonist does not have a golden finger, which is not cool enough, but it is still funny.

Well, the first few chapters honestly feel like they don't have much weight, but the climax of the first paragraph is really well written, and there is room for improvement. As for the rest, I can only say keep working hard, in case my writing skills will gradually improve on my own. Just to make up for it [rolls eyes], I have been a professional in Akaashi for many years, but I read it slowly because I pay attention to the writing style and so on [rolls eyes]. This is considered a good one. If it can improve, I am really looking forward to it. I can only say that come on, the plot can be less daily. Now I feel that the author cannot do too much when writing daily truths, that is, he does not have enough fun, so he can only improve himself. It would be good if there were more interesting points in the plot, that is, more good climaxes could be arranged.

This is a refreshingly paced novel! The protagonist starts off as a dog-licking male co-star. After understanding the plot, he directly counterattacks and uses a counter-poem to dig a hole for the original male protagonist. The slap-in-the-face plot is smooth and refreshing. The writing style is light-hearted and humorous, and the anti-routine play is very smooth. Watching the protagonist tearing up PUA, making money and doing troubles, the whole process is not aggrieved and it is full of satisfaction!

Very interesting, readable, and novel in subject matter [Love] There is also ↓ Dear Chef: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing your trust is soothing. Falling in love with you is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in this world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or coming up with ideas, but suddenly having you makes me worried about you and I can't let go of you. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning or a nap at noon, I love you. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box?